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Scotty32 
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 Topic: UnaBomber vs. Point BlankPosted: 22 November 2006 at 3:17pm |
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Dynasty: Point Blank
Assasins: UnaBomber Blind drops to Scotty32 (Me) Verses due Sunday, Dec 10 14-20 lines each battle |
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Scotty32
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Posted: 11 December 2006 at 2:36pm |
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Junior Shade:
Hello, well well well.. First off, this is'a funny
match up cus i only recently asked Point to join Assassins.. & he
replyed 'Im Not Going To Be Active, Plus Im Loyal To XFade'.. Well so
much for that lol.. Secondly, a'big FAT thank's to Sparta who went an'
damn dropped 4 punches on Point which i had also keyed!.. Damn you!..
Idiots: Wait - Weight.. He likes'a spot of Fishing.. Real - Reel.. Prophecy (biter) got kicked, PB came in to The Dynasty.. Dock - Doc.. Sudoku is'a game where you have to fill empty boxes with numbers.. In'a order of course lol..
Hi Dean..
Point lack's with disses, yeah.. you can't punch i said mate
Your like the 'que at Hell's Gate', just'a "bunch of 'dead wait*'"
I'll shred, rape you so kid shut it you suck
Your like'a 'shamrock in'a wheelchair' straight "pushing ya luck" Fuck this schmuck.. No-one's feeling your dissing
Ain't it ironic how the close'st ya'll get to "Reel* is fishing"
B's shot's are missing.. Face it your'a flop
How's it feel to be drafted in, as'a replacment for Prop?! So hop, or watch your crew get owned an' swept aside...
Cus' this fag Point's just'a 'workout for J' like'a "stoners exersise" Im locked an' loaded your get smacked up an' batterd
Till i put this 'Case in Point'.. & thats'a "fact it'll happen"
Your lackin', J would have that rap chucked in the bin bro
Cus' Point "wont last long" like'a 'quick fuck with'a nympho' ..He's 'tailing the back' in the same fashion as trailors
Try me & you'll be "seein' the doc*", kid.. Like 'passionate sailors'
..Fuck this Scouse Goth, i'll aim an' then shoot you
Leaving "Blank in more boxes" than'a 'game of Sudoku' Kid ya'll never be an' Assassin'.. Untill J's reign is toppled
Cus' you'd be 'cramping my style' like "menstruating models"...
Assassins.. Junior..
Recognize the Wordplay.. Point Blank:
Juniors Are Weak, Im Quickly Draining Ya Health Like 'Shade' Dissapearin In The Winter, Nobodys Even Bothered The Whole Site Knows That This Nerd Sucks Like Kids That Sleep In, Junior Wont Even Turn Up Thinking Your Someone After You Slayed I But How Can We Flap Off A Crew Who Has Ass In Their Name..Twice Ugly Bastard In The Shade, Thats Why This Bitch Is In Stealth You Should Call Yourself The Janitor Again..Get A Grip Of Yaself |
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Posted: 11 December 2006 at 3:05pm |
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Shit I Forgot Explanations...
First Bar, Hes Had Names That Dont Make Sense, Junior Shade, Tequila Sunrise, Unabomber... Fourth Bar, He Said He Was Gonna Leave And Nobody Was Bothered. Its Winter, Nobody Wants To Cool Down In Shade. Eight Bar, He Called Himself The Janitor Coz He '''Cleans Shit Up''' You Should Get It If You Aint A Retard
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dalinquent
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Posted: 14 December 2006 at 4:29pm |
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aight, voting
Junior...Good shit, as usual nice with the wordplay...I was feeling the fishing personal as well as alot of other shit in this verse. Opener was good, closer was the shit...Nice drop, nothing bad about it really..
Point...Seems like you still trying to regain your writing ability...The flow was off at points..haha, points....but yea, some places the flow was off and punches didnt land as hard due to this...Despite all this, still a good drop. Betting punch was cool.
My vote goes to Junior/una/qwelity/konsept/ whoever this kid is...his verse was just better. not to take away from pbs verse, shades was just better in my opinion
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Scotty32
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Posted: 14 December 2006 at 5:21pm |
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cleaned up battle an moved it all to "crew bitchin" (even though its fucked and doesnt make sense anymore)
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 15 December 2006 at 9:30am |
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Call me fucking JUNIOR!... just damn Junior.. lol.. Cheers for the vote..
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Kay B
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Posted: 16 December 2006 at 6:17pm |
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Uppin for votes....
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Posted: 19 December 2006 at 11:42am |
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Junior Shade... textbook-rhymescheme was good and improved the flow... Wordplay was good overall with a couple of tenuous concepts used... You used a lot of personals for someone who claims not to use personals over generics... And I am aware of the bitching which has ruined the moral competitiveness of this crew-battle... Point Blank... punches were not hard enough... Switch your rhymescheme up... This is not the same Point Blank that KO'ed me... Vote: Junior Shade...Adios...
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 19 December 2006 at 1:58pm |
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Mucho Respecto Senor..
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mcwoods
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Posted: 22 December 2006 at 5:14pm |
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junior - nice verse, liked the 2 early wordplays, shamrock in a wheelchair and heels que, both good , prop line was cool, nice wodplay in middle, best line was the sudoku one. , last wordplay was alrite, overall a good verse, tons of wordplay, good punches and flow. point blank - opener not bad, 2nd few lines, clever point but wording wasnt the best, pedaphiles line was great. next few lines wernt bad , and last lines were good, overall a good verse, i think it had better flow, but less hard hitting personals point had betr flow, but junior had stronger punches, rhyming and tons of good wordplay.
so Junior GMV
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 22 December 2006 at 5:17pm |
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Hey, thanks Woods... Major respect for voting on all the crew battles..
This is Ko @ 3-0..
Assasssins 2 vs The Dynasty 0... As of finished battles i belive...
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Posted: 22 December 2006 at 5:29pm |
^Word, nice work man |
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Posted: 22 December 2006 at 5:31pm |
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"Now both of you go and vote on at least one battle in here, or I will never vote in your battles again..." lolol
it was np. anytime.
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Junior Shade
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Posted: 31 December 2006 at 8:47am |
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Don't these get locked?.. |
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