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 Topic: Semi) Sparta n Point -Vs- Jehu n StalinPosted: 12 January 2007 at 5:07pm |
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16lines each, Blind Into me by TUESDAY
I will not tolerate noshows this time Ur team WILL be OUT!!!!!
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Point Blank
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Posted: 12 January 2007 at 5:12pm |
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Posted: 13 January 2007 at 3:36am |
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swoosh.
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Insert something rappy here
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ILLSTARRR
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Posted: 19 January 2007 at 2:03pm |
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Point an Sparta Fuck Stalling Around, You Be Quick To Get Dropped, Chump
Thats On Behalf Of Your Partner Admitting Hes Washed Up And If You Say That Point Is Just A Noob That Annoys G's Then Why The Fuck Did Stalin Leave His Crew Just To Join Me?? * And I Wont Stop Till These Veterans' Dying Leave Them "Dropped Deeper" Than Js Letter To Bryan Punches Are Hittin So Hard That These Bitches Are Scarred An Ima Be Like Jeff Jarret And Smash J With His Guitar ** Spittin Sick Bars, Whereas Stalin, You Fail With Text Kid Coz What Typa Gangsta Raps From A Females Perspective?
So Truly Thers No Way This Hoe Can Derail Me Plus We All Know King Jehu's Only Owning Israelies So Give Up Dudes, Yall Should Jus Stop And Linger Coz As For This Tourny You "Enter"ed And Sorry Your Not A Winner *** So Get Ready, As S n P Will End You Both Coz Stalins A Hoe Like Wendy And Got Owned By A Friendly Ghost **** * Dunno If Anyone Remembers This, But Stalin Left Renegades To Team Up With Me. ** Jeff Jarret Was A Wrestler That Hit Ppl With Guitars. On His Myspace THeres A Pic Of "J" With His Guitar *** Enter Shikari - Sorry Your Not A Winner ( Great Song By The Way Lol ) **** Wendy Starred In Casper.... Stalin Got KO'd By Ghost Oh Ye And King Jehu Was King Of Israel Leon Trotsky was assassinated by Stalin
Stalin an King Jehu
Spartas email addy is lesvachesetlespommes@hotmail.co.uk..... if u got to the hospital and u aint insured..u owe a shitload of money also ppl say if ur sick ur fighting it like fighting cancer whatever. At some schools the ppl that dealt wit punishing students were called deans.
I dont even gotta read ya verse, we all know he failed badly Sparta, ill hit u so hard ull go flyin longer than ya email addy u try twice as hard and ill still rip u in punches, just fall back Points got the dopest style, cuz it easily makes us all laugh ya crew aint feelin yall, so we got 2 worthless partners and its funny yalls Dynasty was over...BEFORE IT STARTED Ill put my flow in ya hands, and u couldnt even hold it up Cmon...Mcwoods wanted to battle u cuz he KNOWS U SUCK Shouldve took the easy win cuz its evident ya not gonna make it Ill have u both jumpin out this battle like uninsured hospital patients I'll blast u out the galaxy, then use the Force in rhyme Truth is...Sparta ya piece of shit lines aint even worth my time Ill just take it easy..or one punch and ya whole life is ruined ur an easy win, so dope mcs are avoidin Dean like high school students U cant see me, everytime I grab paper, all the pens'll explode Check this out...My bad Point, Ya mom aint turned off Parental Control Stalin and I here, we came here to run this Your name is Point Blank cuz there's no range with your punches You got this far but you drop off the tourny lke most fakes I'll rearrange you and "whip you with A Strap" like Ghostface Ironically, Point's not sharp, I tear you two pieces Last time Sparta meant shit was the time before Jesus I'm here to win, Spart and Point just wanna be famous I'll leave your asses bleeding, you'll need a tampon for your anus Both just asked for this massacre, I'll fill me this grave Modern Spartacus... either way you'll still be a slave Now I'll have to handle both you hoes like I'm a farmer I'll hit sparta so hard, no help from point blank body armor Come forth in the battle field and I'ma spank you Sparta, u needs him, Point's the only one who'd bother to rank you! Speaking of ranks, I looked at the page to see who's behind who In the list of people that matter, PB, but I couldn't find you! *Ghostface had a song called that (Produced by J Dilla!) and "A strap" is Sparta rearranged. The city of Sparta was prominent before the time of Jesus. Spartacus was a slave warrior who led a rebellion against the masters, but lost. Blah, everything else should be self explanatory. Vote Up.... Edited by ILLA - 20 January 2007 at 7:00am |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 19 January 2007 at 3:53pm |
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Aight
Sparta/Point -Point man you were killing with personals!Ya flow was hot and you used a lot of shit against him...the personal punches were great and it made your whole verse..I would of liked to see some wordplay in there..would of incorperated nicely with the personals n shit...but good drop
Sparta -Good opener I didnt get it at first but good job adding a expo...you also went kinda personal but not half as much as point..you had some good punches..second bar was nice..I found PB came harder but thats just from my opinion..your bars were a bit stretched in place but didnt take away from the flow much...good verse..
Stalin- I found you let Jehu down..His email addy isnt anything that good..the personal was a little wack..second bar was nice though the personal there was decent..I third was ok found it was kinda weak..4th was aight...the rest of the verse I found was very average..
Jehu- Your verse was strait fire...Openening line kinda bigged you n stalin up..but the second line was a good concept..second bar was nice...switched around the name pretty complex props for that..next bar was a good personal a little played against sparta but still hit...SHIT Next bar was wow lmao had me laughing...then you went back to the sparta personals...overall best drop I found out of all the verses...
so when re reading all of this I found Sparta and Point Blanks verses together was better than Jehus Strong verse and Stalins decent...so for more stronger verses Pb N Sparta GMV
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Posted: 19 January 2007 at 7:55pm |
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yo Illa, if theres anyway we can edit this, cuz I had links in there but i wasnt sure if they would show up..the links would make the punches more effective
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ILLSTARRR
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Posted: 20 January 2007 at 7:01am |
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Done
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Posted: 20 January 2007 at 9:32pm |
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Damn yo...this is one of the hottest battles ive read ina minute...im not sure i can vote tho? Blah either way tight shit to all yalll...1
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ILLSTARRR
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Posted: 21 January 2007 at 5:42am |
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Yeah u can vote..
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Point Blank
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Posted: 25 January 2007 at 3:23pm |
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Uppin
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Posted: 25 January 2007 at 4:32pm |
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All respectively nice verses here... Order I saw it:
1)Point Blank and KJ tied... 2)Sparta 3)Stalin The thing is the verses were all nice to an extent, so it wasn't easy ordering them that way... Slight differences are between the top verse and the bottom verse, so that makes it hard... Point Blank, been uppin ya game recently.. The ol' PB is comin' back... Startin' to get more aggressive wit ya hits rather than just namin em... Liked how you had the wordplay along with some personals. Loved the Bryan line... Closer was ya weakest hit... must've run out of ideas, but it was still workable... The other iffy one would be the Guitar line cuz ya threatened him more than hit him on that one... Overall dope verse though... Sparta, verse was good, but not the best I've seen from you... Expected you to come harder in a battle like this. Don't get me wrong, a good verse, but shouldve been great... Semi line was ya best one, Rivera was a nice idea.. The others landed as decently as jabs, but still contained enough humor to them. 1st bar was too easy to come up with, 2nd bar was generic which is cool in some cases, but not in a battle where your opponents will be comin' straight at you... An overall good enoygh verse to not let ya partner down... Jehu, dope read.. never let up on the hits in ya verse... Consistent hard hits on the regular here. The asses bleedin was the only bar that wasn't straight forward hard hittin and sounded homo to me... Anyways, much like PB's, I can't find any major flaws in the verse. Best flow of the bunch... Stalin came good, but not good enough for a battle like this. The email addy line was a let down.. Guess you aint have much on 'em. Anways, flow was on point and punches landed, but werent as aggressive as some of the other verses in the battle. Let's be real, in the fields, your verse woulda beat most, but I don't feel as much effort was put into it as needed. 2nd bar, decent, but not a heavy one. Your closer, worth my time and hospital patients were dope, but the others were regular... Feel ya coulda spent more time wit ideas... A good read overall, but to cop the sure victory, this needed to be a bit more than that for me.. Nice battle to read.. Was difficult to pick a winner, but summarizing my thoughts, felt PB and sparta came with enough heavy hits to out do the other 2 as a team... Good battle ya'll... v/ S 'n P |
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Posted: 26 January 2007 at 12:10pm |
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Wow...Thanks Kon...2-0 Me An S
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ILLSTARRR
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Posted: 29 January 2007 at 12:47pm |
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Uppin...
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Posted: 29 January 2007 at 1:18pm |
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point and sparta take this...
their two combined verses were better... i thought stalins was ok... and jehu's was good.... but both verses of sparta and point were good... thought they both dropped hard... had some nice punches and personals... some clever punches as well... flow was good throughout... |
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Posted: 29 January 2007 at 1:48pm |
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Good battle ppl...
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Insert something rappy here
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Posted: 29 January 2007 at 1:55pm |
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Yep...Props Everyone..Battlers And Voters
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