Textual Torture: R1-B1) Point Blank vs Sir Francis |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Topic: R1-B1) Point Blank vs Sir Francis Posted: 21 August 2007 at 2:07pm |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 28th of August 2007 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'in it to me, my email address is in my profile, so Server Errors are not a vaild excuse Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. |
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 21 August 2007 at 2:50pm |
Chickety Checkz0r
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 6:31am |
Point Blank:
* - Giants An 49ers Are Teams From San Francisco That Both Get Beat Alot * - A Sissy - Assisi...St Francis Of Assisi * - He's 31 In The Rankings - Feb Is The Only Month That Can't Reach 30 Days If You Actually Turn Up, Im Afraid Ill Break Ya Spine Coz Im The Biggest Thing To Shake SF Since The Quake In 89! Ill Slay Ya Basic Rhymes, He's Dumb An He Knows That.. Coz Even He Admits He Got Outdone On His Own Track He Sucks N He's So Wack, Thats Why This Boy Isn't Feared I Mean, The Sharpest Thing About Him Is The Point Of His Beard Destroyin This Queer,Yep, For You Its A Def' Loss I Dont Have To Buy New Speakers To Be Gettin SF Cross (SFX) An If He Says He Can Beat Me, Then This Guy Is A Liar Coz This SF's Coppin More Losses Than The Giants An Niners * An Ive Got To Admit, Its Really A Pity...
That If This Francis Was A Saint, He'd STILL Be A Sissy!* Ima Put This Rapper Straight To Bed, Decapitate His Head So He Can 'Never Reach 30' Like The Dates In Feb!* Im Ya Greatest Threat, Whereas You Suck An Ya Music's Shit... Maybe Ya Face While Your On The Mic Has Somethin To Do With It ?! ...Pfft... Sir Francis: PB, add some Jelly, man I'll Ham Sandwich Ya
Steady put holes in ya body Tucan Sam'in Ya
Ya girls the real Pro, you thought she was Amateur?
She played with my Dick, then you hold Hands Wit Her!!!!!!(Eewww)
Why you claimin' pro when you know your a faker
You more pussy than cheerleaders on the Lakers!!!!
I'm really the top rank like a smart girls Grades Is
You just Suck, like leeches on the Vain Kid!!!!!(Thats Hard)
You Aint Shit, get Flipped like Chips at a Casino
You my Slave, can get Whippeed for ya Ego!!!!!! (Kunta Kente)*
But really I know that you know you cant Win Dude
Because even your crew ain't got no Faith In You!!!! (Lynxx Called It)**
It cuz you're wack, step ya game up, elevate,get in Line G
Because, Even ya birthday is 3 years and 2 Days Behind ME!!!!!!***
Just look at Me, I Make It Rain, step on Green like Tiger
I TRUMP Kings...............You're Fired
Explanations....
*2smooth said i was going to get KOed by him, and then PB said they'd meet in the finals
**Lynxx said i'd KO him, they're in the same crew
***His birthday is 3 years and 2 days behind me....check the profiles.. |
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 8:41am |
Point Blank
Opener was nice, really liked it, good way to start...second was a nice personal, keeping it up...beard was okay...SFX was really funny, made me laugh...next one was one SF play too many, wasnt feeling it...assissi was quite good....ranks was alright...link in you closer doesnt work but in theory its nice... Sir Francis... First 2, aside form the rhyming, were poor, nothing hard there...in fact your whole verse was poor apart from the lynxx one, the punches are either vague or missed completely, like the birthday one...easy win for PB here v. Point Blank |
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 9:08am |
Yeah You Have To Be Logged Into Myspace To See It. Thanks Anyway
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 11:45am |
PB - opener was DOPE, haha... nice... 2nd bar, nice personal, lands... lol @ the point of his beard... ok punch... didn't like the SFX bit... hahaha... giant's an' niner's was fuckin' sick... specially 'cuz i'm from California so it's funnier to me i'd guess... niiice wit' the Assissi bar... dates in feb was ok at best... couldn't see the link for the closer but same as spart, i see where you were goin' wit' it... overall, nice drop, good shit... SF - opener was weak, wasn't feelin' it... dick plays are useless unless done originally somehow, an' to perfection... laker's bit sucked... suck/ leaches is a weak play... wasn't feelin' the ego bar, either... crew bit finally punched at him... hit, but not hard at all... birthday bar was weak, coulda been way better... closer was weak as well... overall, one of the weakest verses i've seen from you... point took this shit easy IMO... MVGT POINT BLANK |
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lynxx
Standard Member Joined: 03 February 2007 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 417 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-0 Form: LLWW |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:04pm |
Point - quite nice verse, had some gd punches n flow was on yourself like normal...gd personals....creative....dint hav to do muhc to take this but made sure wit the punches....
S Francis - Weak verse, no real punches except the one about me sayin you would win which i said playin about but dont matta, made a punch out of it, dint do not nearly enuf to mount a challenge....
Point gmv
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 3:00pm |
points thru
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