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Scotty32 
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
 Topic: R1-B3) G-Pfeif vs KayBPosted: 21 August 2007 at 2:09pm |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 28th of August 2007 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'in it to me, my email address is in my profile, so Server Errors are not a vaild excuse Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 22 August 2007 at 10:27am |
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G-Pfeif
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Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW |
Posted: 26 August 2007 at 7:57pm |
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check... will be PM'ing my verse soon
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 6:33am |
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G-Pfeif:
Here we go... everything should be self-explanatory... for the last line... read the 2 bars in his profile... Kay, Im berating with flames... shit, Im degrading this lame Makin sure his only tourney Win is creating its name Ill take a crack out ya spine, I aint even back in my prime but ya shit Bricks every time, kinda like Shaq at the line yea, I aint been active in a bit, but my game is still-on while you straight FOWARD CACA (Kaka), like that dude for Milan Indeed this hurts... but i knew Kay was sensin defeat Cuz I couldnt feed his verse, I aint been on MSN in a week!!! you dont have an ounce of talent, really theres not ONE present Textual TORTURE??? you aint even textually UNPLEASENT!!! id say stick to topicals, leave the battle towel tossed in for good but even there, like Camping deaths, this chump was lost to the WOODS Thought you would bring torture, but now you wished it would end cuz You couldnt come with a HOT 16, if you brought ya sisters friend now that ive raped you in '07, you can make dessert of my dick (hop on) i saw this comin a year ago, cuz even then i heard you were SHIT KayB: First bar n la cats thinking, "is pfeif suckin' that hard?"
Only time he made a banging tune.. was in his fucking backyard Desperate for technicality, yet all i see are simple verses... When it comes to sex u gettin nun, like being pimp in churches Had to beg to get pro... i wish this dude would just stop Nobody warned ya' girl? she must've knew that you'd flop! Recently collected 2 L's Ina Row?.... Ill Make it Anotha Claims he's a PRO?.....Than Gets Smothered By AMA's! Dress just murdered this fool, truth is he got painfully slayed. An woulda caught the KO, too if he weren't Fatally saved! A place in round 2 motherfucker? face it IT'S MINE Re-searched ya group name, and it aint no mistake what i find 'Disaster recovery'?... damn it's like we predicting ya future Pfief couldnt cum up with shots, if he took his dick out to shoot'cha An fo'real pfeif At best u land ONE PUNCH! next step, you'll be cryin' of course... Always be a defensive lines-man, an' i ain't rhymin' bout sports |
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Point Blank
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Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 7:42am |
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G Pfief - Haha, Opener Was Nice, Very Strong Hit. I Dunno Anythin Bout Basketball So I Aint Even Gonna Judge The Next Bar. LMAO @ Kaka Line, Nice. Coulda Been Used On Anyone But Still A Nice Punch. Next Bar Was Ok, U Shudda Explained It, But I Know What Ya Gettin At. Next Bar Was Wack, WTF, If He Isnt Textually Unpleasant, Doesn't That Compliment Him :S? Camping Deaths Bar Was Nice, Creative. LMAO @ Hot 16 Punch. Closer Werent Nice. Overall A Pretty Strong Verse, Couple Of Bars Werent Nice But The Ones That Were Nice Had Strong Personal Punches. Kay - LMAO @ Opener, Sick Way To Start. Next Bar Was Generic But Pretty Funny.Next Bar Was A Weak Hit. Next Bar Was Weak Too, Didnt Even Rhyme In My Opinion :S. Next Bar Was Ok. LMAO @ Disaster Recovery Haha. Strong Hit. Next Bar Was Weak. Closer Was Good Wordplay. Overall This Was A Nice Verse,Opener And DRP Bars Were The Best In Your Verse. VERY Close Battle, But I Think I Gotta Go With Pfief. Coz Kay Only Had About 2-3 Real Strong Punches. Whereas Pfief Had 3-4. This Could Go Either Way, But I Gotta Go With Pfief
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sparta
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..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 8:14am |
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Pfeif...
Opener was ill, really nicely delivered...good way to open up...second was quite nice...next one was funny, nice keeping-the-tempo hit (although you're saying Milan wrong)...feeding was sick...textually unpleasant was just shit, sorry man, you can do better than that...lost to woods was good...hot 16 was fucking great, had me rolling...closer is an effective sig flip...strong verse... Kay... Opener was nice, really nicely worded...second was nicely done, considering his girl leaving...this bar was crap, been done so, so often...smothered by amas was alright, but it was only 1 ama so it lessens the effect a bit...fatally saved was poor, didnt even make sense...group name was very good, nicely done...dick and cum plays are unacceptable for a member of your status...closer was a nice way to end it... Overall, I thought Pfeif had left a little room for Kay to snatch this but he let himself down, as while he had a couple of good bars there were some atrocious ones in there too, and due to that he didn't put up enough of a fight, sorry bro v. G-Pfeif |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 10:05am |
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Thanks for voting guys...
Sparta what about the fatally saved line doesn't make sense?..FATAL saved him from being ko'd...he'd dropped such a mess he had to be fatally saved i thought that was self explanatory...but it's coo... Dope verse btw G, knew this'd be a tough battle but i held my own |
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2smooth
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Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 10:47am |
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G - opener was nice... good flow, good dig... 2nd bar was an ok play... could've been done better but flow was still cool an' play was still decent... kaka line was generic as someone else said, but still nice... feed his verse was ok at best... i don't care what anyone else says, the unpleasant line was funny lol... lost in the woods was niiice, good shit... sister's friend was cool... closer was an ok flip from his sig, but i didn't like it... overall, had a pretty strong verse, good drop... Kay - lmao @ the opener... dope... play in the 2nd is ok, a little spelled out tho... girl bar was ok... wasn't feelin' the 4th bar that much tbh... again, unlike everyone else, i liked the fatally saved bit, not killer but still ok... disaster recovery was cool, but that lead to the dick/ cum punchline which while bein' executed well is always gon' be played... closer was fuckin' niiice tho... overall, as said in earlier votes, had a few very nice punches an' a few really weak ones... still, nice drop... this was a close battle, 'cuz Kay had a couple of real sick punches... but Pfeif was just more consistant an' kept hitting whereas Kay had a few big misses... good battle tho, guys... MVGT G-PFEIF
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Scotty32
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Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 11:31am |
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KO for pfeif, he goes thru
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