Textual Torture: R1-B8) ProFound vs Demonic |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Topic: R1-B8) ProFound vs Demonic Posted: 21 August 2007 at 2:12pm |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show all verses must be in by: Tuesday 28th of August 2007 at 12:00 midnight GMT (thats UK Time, so dont try an claim "Time Difference" as an excuse) theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'in it to me, my email address is in my profile, so Server Errors are not a vaild excuse Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 6:45am |
ProFound:
* In the poll “who will win” he voted for himself. *In his profile the home page doesn’t work… *He’s ALWAYS posting news in hip hop chat… Fuck demonic! The wack shit you tryin, I wont sweat it I’ll ‘murder ya name’ and leave you dyin with ‘NO MEDIC’ (demonic.. nameplay ) Your text is pathetic n ya need some more help The only way you’ll win is if your voting for yourself!* I’ll damage your health, this novice is below average You couldn’t give my record an L if u still had mod status You thought u had this im ending this easy in 10 seconds With a Ouija board we still wouldnt be feelin ya presence I could end this in one sentantce its easy my friend Wana see demonic “shit”? have him battle me again It’s a sin he hasn’t battled in awhile, he should have prayed Cuz he’s inactive as fuck! perfect for x fade Ya lines are laid back, and you suck for your age Your punches are non existent sorta like ya homepage* If you decide to show in this battle you’ve chosen to loose Demonic: Ok so listen... Liq-a-dic's Rhymes are about as witty as his jokes,1 Battles not started yet an i already got more votes!,2 Wat chance u got none?NS an get barred,3 Only serving a'plate of viagra would make this bitch diss hard, Listen Liq NO1 LIKES U, Straight up... ur dispised dude , Ur the reason for 2 of the bigest fuckyal threads LA's had sight to,4 See this fag lead a crew but couldnt hold it down,5 Guna get stamped on jus like the way point took ya crown,6 Why the fuck this cat got Amature written in his stats, Boys straight wack wit lyrics jus' like he would be on'a dance mat,7 This is just like a hockey match the way liquid gets beat down, Serious how u gunna win its The Leaf vs The dragon u clown,8 Fuck liquid an fuck his country too niether can get any lower, Country got taken over by france and u, ur elevation couldnt be slower,9 This boy just mounts shit on himself with his idotic posts, I'll walk through to the next round like liquid were Ghost, 1. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=12808 2. http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=12831&PN=4 3. I was a finalist last time chose to step out thou...NS=No show 4. Peep the first 2 pages of fuck yall an see how much replies both fuck liquid threads have... theres only 2 other threads in the hole fuck yall that have more... 5. Stole Juniors crew whilst Jr was away an was leader...Now look at his crew status.. 6. Point Blank is now Leader of Venomous with liquid not even in it... 7. DTK droped a thread sayin this was liquid dancing... check it ... Shits terrible... 8. Canada's flag is a leaf ... the Welsh flags a red dragon 9. He's at the bottem of the text rankings check... |
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 7:00am |
Profound - Suprised Me Here Tbh. Opener Was Nice, Good Nameplay, Not Normally A Fan Of Anagrams Unless Its Desperate, But That Seemed Pretty Cool. Next Bar, Funny, Good Hit. Mod Thing Is Pretty Played But Good Hit Nevertheless.Ouija Board Was Wack. So Was The Next Bar. Lol @ X Fade Bar. Homepage Thing Was Terrible. Closer Was A Nice Personal Punch, Good Way To End The Verse. Overall You Came Hard (No Homo), But In The Later Rounds You Might Have To Come Alot Harder. This Verse Had More Personals Than Punches, You Should Combine The Two. Demonic - Lol, You Aint Much Of A Battler An It Showed. Opener Was Weak, Next Bar Was Good, But Generic An Pretty Played. Next Bar Was Nice, Good Set Up Line And Nice Personal Hit. Next Bar About Me Made No Sense, I Didnt Stamp On Him To Take His Crown Lol. I See What Ya Gettin At Tho. Dance Mat Line Was Meh, Not Feelin It. Weren't Feelin The Next Bar. Was A Good Idea Bout The Leaf An Dragon, You Coulda Made Somethin Creative About That Rather THan Just Stating Its The Leaf Vs. The Dragon. Next Bar Was Weak. You Need A Nice Bar For A Closer, An U Never Had One. Overall, Some Nice Personal Hits, But Very Inconsistent And Werent Strong Enough To Take This In My Opinion. Good Try. Profound GMV |
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 8:31am |
ProFound...
ffs stop posting in white, lol, I have to highlight it to read it...concerning the verse, the first two were pretty solid, third bar was hot, I really liked that...ouija board didn't work...your verse finished off quite well, with punches that kept the heat up but nothing amazingly hard...good solid verse... Demonic... Opened up quite well...viagra is so, so played...fuck y'all was funny, I really liked that...dancing is funny...the flags shit weas pretty good too, the french was a middling punch but I quite liked it...closer was alright without being a haymaker Overall, a very close battle...2 verses in a very similar style, so I guess this has to come down to which one I enjoyed the most...rereading them, I'm gong to have to say Demonic had more punches that made me laugh, so I'll vote for him... v. Demonic |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 29 August 2007 at 12:35pm |
profound - lol, niiice opener, very clever... gj... decent personal on the next bar, flow was fucked tho... 3rd bar was decent... Ouija board could've been deadly, but instead it ended up missin'... next bar was kinda funny (don't know if that's what you were goin' for, but w/e) to me... not a strong hit or anything, but the double play made me laugh... x fade bar was a good personal... homepage bit was shit... closer was actually pretty nice... good personal an' the flow was actually good here lol... overall, flow left a LOT to be desired, but you had some good personals an' a couple pretty nice bars... seems like ya' stepped ya' game up here... good verse... demonic - opener was weak (although liq a dic was kinda funny)... viagra/ hard plays are played to the absolute max... personal in the 3rd bar, but no real punch... again, personal in the next bar but no real punch... just kinda statin' the facts... lmao @ the dancin' bit tho, that shit's funny... next bar was terrible... another personal, this time a jab added in on the next bar... closer was wack... overall you had quite a few personals but you need to incorporate them as punches, too... lack of flow made liquids look on point, lol... not very good... PROFOUND GMV |
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ProFound
Standard Member Joined: 24 June 2006 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1781 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-9-2 Form: WLLNWN |
Posted: 30 August 2007 at 12:22pm |
Every other battle is closed up.... VOTE UP ( please )
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 30 August 2007 at 7:50pm |
profoud
Firstly i agree with sparta quit with the white text maybe your using a diffrent skin to us but we can't see it without highlighting that shit lol, Preety dope verse man...definetly impressed started well first two bars are dope nice direct hits flow was perfection, Third bar was my fave real nice shit...Rest wasnt up to the stanard of those three but was still nice enough....Punches landed flow was on point in some places and majorly off in others....nice verse tho man impressive. Deomonic Nice opener punch landed, like sparta said viagra line didnt come off as well as you'd hoped for the simple fact the plays are well...played, next bar was funny but didnt really hit hard imo was stating a fact rather than a hard punch could of possibly been re-worded to hit harded, dancing bar was dope real funny and it hit, last few bars wernt anything special imo and u ended it poorly. You had the personals that could of turned into good punches with better wording. Overall Preety close battle both had some lines i liked and both had some i hated demonic probably came with more personals but his verse lacked venemous punches (no pun intended) where'as profound had more punches which landed.....PROFOUND GMV |
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ProFound
Standard Member Joined: 24 June 2006 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1781 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-9-2 Form: WLLNWN |
Posted: 01 September 2007 at 2:00pm |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 04 September 2007 at 4:17pm |
weeks up
3-1 so profound wins |
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