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Ecliptik 
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 Topic: Poem: ..Eyes Closed Dream..Posted: 01 November 2003 at 11:37pm |
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- Nas Lamenting the futility of dreams Eyes closed...see lucid forms Hexagonal insomnia...stops Eyes well as the conundrum worsens Scream at my rests paralysis... As it runs, ascending in my nightmare Pervading through my sanity Extroadinary really...eyes closed again As sleep's begonias drape my casket "How beautiful it is to do nothing, and then rest afterward. ..." - Proverb |
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hanGing
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Posted: 01 November 2003 at 11:50pm |
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you write a bit like me.. meep..
nice... |
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B-Boy Eric
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Posted: 03 November 2003 at 5:46pm |
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Seriously excellent poem. loved how u described an eery dream like state, quotes were a nice touch too. very appropriate. u have a very complex, abstract, and imagery filled style of writing. extremely interesting to read.
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BaByGyAlL_BlAzE
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Posted: 03 November 2003 at 7:06pm |
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WOAH, all im sayin is WOAH
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whatever bitch
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hanGing
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Posted: 04 November 2003 at 12:17am |
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i played around with this today... put it to acoustic guitar.. sounded nice :) |
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eN?GMa
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Posted: 05 November 2003 at 6:21pm |
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Amazing. Great imagery, and excellent use of vocab
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