Vengeance: R1-B3) dressed2kill vs. frank white |
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2smooth
Standard Member Joined: 25 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1930 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 36-5-2 Form: WWWWNW |
Topic: R1-B3) dressed2kill vs. frank white Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:19am |
Round One - 10 lines first to 4 votes or 3-0 = KO
No Dickryde Votes
Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained ALL Dodgy votes WILL get deleted! Voting will last 1 week from the deadline... if there is no clear winner at that point, whoever is ahead at the time will advance. Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed.
If you want to bitch, take it to the Bitching Thread, or PM me DEADLINE IS MIDNIGHT, DECEMBER 20TH, 2007
if you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show and not allowed entry to the next tournament
BLIND DROPS, SO ANYONE CAN DROP AT ANY TIME (AS LONG AS IT'S BEFORE THE DEADLINE ) Edited by 2smooth - 14 December 2007 at 1:20pm |
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 19 December 2007 at 11:05pm |
Expos.. For Dals Audio Collab List They Forgot To Add Franky..And He Holds The First Audio Battle Win.. *In The UK Vs US Frank Voted Sparta For Captian..And He Orginally Had Frank On His Lineup But Then Sparta Booted Him Off The Team And Replaced Him *Frank White Was A Baseball Player In Which The Fans Disliked Him..Which His Career Started Back In The 60's/70's..Bascially Saying Peeps Hated Him Before He Started You Got A Plot To Get Me?Well Your About To Get Rocked Swiftly First Audio Winner..Well I Guess Its To Bad That We Forgot So Quickly!* ..The Past Is In The Past.. Your Concepts Are Gay,It Seems Your Styles Ran Blank Theres Only Been One Jewish Hero And Your Names Not Anne,Frank! Your Whole Nations Against You,Think Not?Just Ask How You Voted Sparta For UK Captian,THEN HE BOOTED YOUR ASS OUT!* Il Easilly Defeat Ya,My Punches Will Repeatedly Reach Ya Nobody Would Be 'Feeling Ya Keys' Even If Ya Name Was Alicia! ...Uh Oh...
Just Shut Up Dude,After Every Comment You Look More Retarted
Cuz
You Already Had Majority Of People Hate You Before You Even Started!
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The original comeback kid
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frank white
Veteran First Audio Battle Winner Joined: 23 April 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1556 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #13 Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LLNWWL |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:57pm |
your punchlines are blackeyes mine leave you dead
how can you be taken serious you got pubes on your head you must have shit yourself when you were drawn against me you got less change of winning this tournament then scotty Going against me dude you musta known what you were in for your punchlines are like xmas films we seen them before Nice of you to show but honestly i cant see the fuck why When people saw the draw they said your as good as a bye Lets face it dress im just to fucking classy for you son Look on the bright side dude at least you made round one |
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 6:10pm |
Dress - Opener was nice multi was off at the end though, but the punch was there so made up for it, 2nd bar was nice, good use of his name and incorporated a punch in there too...nice, next bar was nice though wasn't too effective as the punch is played out now, alicia keys play was ok nothing special again concepts been used before, meh at the closer again nothing special
Started off nicely but started to fall off in the middle to the end, had some good hits in there to start off and than your concepts started to become played....ok verse though, not your best Frank - Opener was ok wasn't personally feeling it too much tho, i can see the punch and personal but wasn't feeling it, same with the second i understand what your saying but not the hardest hit but made me laugh, nice personal as i did say that a few of his punches were played out, wasn't really feeling the last two bars didn't seem direct enough. Not a bad verse but no killer blows, and the punches just didn't seem direct enough for my liking i saw where they was going but didn't seem to reach the destination such as your closer which could of been used against anyone, your alot better than you showed in this verse, maybe others will disagree, and yea i said some of dress's shit was played but to me this verse wasn't hard hitting. Vote - Dress, yea he had some played concept but he landed some punches and they were personally direct imo towards frank |
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:01pm |
After reading these, I'd have to say Frank's got this...DTk had 2 pretty good punches (the Anne Frank and the booted one) but the rest didnt really live p to that standard...the opener wasnt worked well enough to be a really mean hit, especially seeing as its something thats been used on frank before...tghe baselball link was tenuous at best which made for a poor closer...frank basically killed it with the opener, insane punch, beautifully worded...xmas films was good too and the last two hits kept the heat up enough for you to take this
v. frank |
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Your Daddy
Banned Joined: 14 December 2007 Status: Offline Points: 56 |
Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:10pm |
dress2kill - opener concept was weak n the punch matchd it next bar was dope, 3rd was ok fourth is the type of irrelevant wordplay i hate. weak, n the last, i fail to see how u incorperated the concept into the punch at all. if there wasnt a explanation id just be thinking eh weak filler punch with the expo its probably worse... so yea one sick punch one OK one n the rest were pretty bad/mediocre tbh
frank white- decent verse the chrismas film punch made me laugh and the last bar although a simple concept and pretty obvious ive never seen it in any tourny before so i thought that was pretty dope. the other bars were OK.. in the end frank jus had more decent punchs - 2 to dress2kills 1.. so frank white got my vote |
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Im Your Daddy
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dalinquent
Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 21 December 2007 at 8:52pm |
DTK: verse was cool...anne frank was nice enough, made me stop actually...surprising i aint seen it before...verse could have been much better...you used hella played shit...some shit was played to the point it seemed bitten but i'm not accusing you of that...just saying it was played as fuck...*keys/alicia thing* think cass used that hears ago on s.p. ...anyways good i guess
Franky: gotta say i wasnt feelin the verse at all...guess its just a regional thing but it seems very basic to me...no multis, no direct shit...seemed rushed as fuck...concepts were there for a nice 'open mic' style verse but i felt like you aint attack dress like ya should Was expectin heat in this battle, was also disappointed...which ever of you advance need to step the fuck up... with that in mind Voted dress |
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 21 December 2007 at 10:34pm |
2-2
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The original comeback kid
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Rameez
Superior Member Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 12:06am |
DTK: that was a really good start, the personal was nice.. 2nd bar.. lol nice punch, nice nameplay.. 3rd bar: lol dope personal punch 4th bar: that was ok bar nothing special.. closer.. that is true he looks retarded after every comment..lol.. 2nd line is like u jus repeat ur point from 3rd bar.. gotta say both lines are played out...
overall: ur personal punches was good, some nice nameplay and good multis...
FW: opener, was ok personal could've made harder... 2nd bar.. nothing hard here was weak punch... 3rd bar: was ok punch.. 4rth bar.. nothing hard, not feeling your punch.. closer.. same nothing hard..
overall: few personal.. ur verse was weak, should work more on your punches...
overall: DTK GMV..
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Your Daddy
Banned Joined: 14 December 2007 Status: Offline Points: 56 |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 12:26am |
^^your having a giggle mate.
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Im Your Daddy
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frank white
Veteran First Audio Battle Winner Joined: 23 April 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1556 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #13 Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LLNWWL |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 7:06am |
lol at work at my punches
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 22 December 2007 at 1:50pm |
3-2
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The original comeback kid
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 23 December 2007 at 10:31am |
...uppin
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The original comeback kid
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 23 December 2007 at 10:56am |
Lol @ the title, his name is DressToKill, not dressed2kill
DTK You Got A Plot To Get Me?Well Your About To Get Rocked Swiftly First Audio Winner..Well I Guess Its To Bad That We Forgot So Quickly!* Not a knockout punch but effective personal ... 3/5 Your Concepts Are Gay,It Seems Your Styles Ran Blank Theres Only Been One Jewish Hero And Your Names Not Anne,Frank! LMAO...perfectly worded, good multies, nice flow, an sick punch/wordplay...5/5 Your Whole Nations Against You,Think Not?Just Ask How You Voted Sparta For UK Captian,THEN HE BOOTED YOUR ASS OUT!* Funny personal,clowned him, no punch tho...3/5 Il Easilly Defeat Ya,My Punches Will Repeatedly Reach Ya Nobody Would Be 'Feeling Ya Keys' Even If Ya Name Was Alicia! this was poor, flow was terrible an multi syllables werent matched either..1.5/5 Just Shut Up Dude,After Every Comment You Look More Retarted Cuz You Already Had Majority Of People Hate You Before You Even Started! Cool idea but didnt come off as good as it could have...3/5 Frankie your punchlines are blackeyes mine leave you dead how can you be taken serious you got pubes on your head I disagree with sparta, i cant see how this is 'beautifully worded', however its a funny punch...3/5 you must have shit yourself when you were drawn against me you got less change of winning this tournament then scotty LOL, true that, coz scotty got me ;)...3/5 Going against me dude you musta known what you were in for your punchlines are like xmas films we seen them before lmao, nice strong punch...4/5 Nice of you to show but honestly i cant see the fuck why When people saw the draw they said your as good as a bye this was ok, but a bit too basic for my likin..2/5 Lets face it dress im just to fucking classy for you son Look on the bright side dude at least you made round one haha, nice...3/5 DTK = 15.5 Frank = 15.0 Looks like dtk scrapes this, both had one real strong punch, others were average. great battle, extremely close DTK GMV |
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SiNiStAh
Standard Member Joined: 15 December 2007 Location: Kingston, Ontario, Canada Status: Offline Points: 159 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-1 Form: LWLLLN |
Posted: 24 December 2007 at 8:06pm |
DTK
You Got A Plot To Get Me?Well Your About To Get Rocked Swiftly First Audio Winner..Well I Guess Its To Bad That We Forgot So Quickly!* ...liked that, strong opener.. props on that..
Your Concepts Are Gay,It Seems Your Styles Ran Blank Theres Only Been One Jewish Hero And Your Names Not Anne,Frank! ..lol, i love this, wording was good, but the punch was awsome
Your Whole Nations Against You,Think Not?Just Ask How You Voted Sparta For UK Captian,THEN HE BOOTED YOUR ASS OUT!* ..props on that, good personal, but cud'a bin flipped alil harder i think..
Il Easilly Defeat Ya,My Punches Will Repeatedly Reach Ya Nobody Would Be 'Feeling Ya Keys' Even If Ya Name Was Alicia! ..lol, gud shit.. i lik..
Just Shut Up Dude,After Every Comment You Look More Retarted Cuz You Already Had Majority Of People Hate You Before You Even Started! ..meh, not feelin it so much..who really cares bout bein hated.. Frank.W your punchlines are blackeyes mine leave you dead how can you be taken serious you got pubes on your head ..lol, made me laugh, but wasnt hittin to hard, weak opener..
you must have shit yourself when you were drawn against me you got less change of winning this tournament then scotty ..concept is an obvious one lol, .. but shit wasnt hittin hard..
Going against me dude you musta known what you were in for your punchlines are like xmas films we seen them before ..good concept, but jeez frank, you aint bringin that fire dude..
Nice of you to show but honestly i cant see the fuck why When people saw the draw they said your as good as a bye ..weak, you aint really bringin that much, fallin off as it goes on..
Lets face it dress im just to fucking classy for you son Look on the bright side dude at least you made round one ..probly best line, but it still came off weak.. for good reason.. and obvious ones.. DTK GMV
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
Posted: 24 December 2007 at 9:36pm |
DTK: opener was nice...i done a simular bar against him before...second bar is tight...real nice hit....lmfao @ booted out...ehhh alicia keys punches are mad played bro...this woulda had to be real different wit a creative play to be a dope punch...ehh closer is ok...overall a pretty nice verse...started off strong but ended kinda weak Frank: lol @ opener...ive seen ALOT of punches against his hair...but this was cool...lol @ second punch...more of a punch against scotty tho...xmas bar was a cool concept but needed to be worked better cuz with the wording right now, its not too hard...good idea tho...second bar is ok...you need to come more direct tho, your spitten open mic type punches...closer is ok...again coulda came wit a more direct hit.... overall was an enjoyable verse to read but when breakin it down i felt that dtk had the more direct verse wit the better punches...nice battle yalll
Vote: DTK
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 17 January 2008 at 1:14pm |
DTK wins 6-2
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