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    Posted: 13 December 2007 at 11:19am

Round One - 10 lines
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 December 2007 at 11:05pm

Expos..

For Dals Audio Collab List They Forgot To Add Franky..And He Holds The First Audio Battle Win..

*In The UK Vs US Frank Voted Sparta For Captian..And He Orginally Had Frank On His Lineup But Then Sparta Booted Him Off The Team And Replaced Him

*Frank White Was A Baseball Player In Which The Fans Disliked Him..Which His Career Started Back In The 60's/70's..Bascially Saying Peeps Hated Him Before He Started

 

You Got A Plot To Get Me?Well Your About To Get Rocked Swiftly

First Audio Winner..Well I Guess Its To Bad That We Forgot So Quickly!*

..The Past Is In The Past..

Your Concepts Are Gay,It Seems Your Styles Ran Blank

Theres Only Been One Jewish Hero And Your Names Not Anne,Frank!

Your Whole Nations Against You,Think Not?Just Ask How

You Voted Sparta For UK Captian,THEN HE BOOTED YOUR ASS OUT!*

Il Easilly Defeat Ya,My Punches Will Repeatedly Reach Ya

Nobody Would Be 'Feeling Ya Keys' Even If Ya Name Was Alicia!

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Just Shut Up Dude,After Every Comment You Look More Retarted
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        You Already Had Majority Of People Hate You Before You Even Started!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 5:57pm
your punchlines are blackeyes mine leave you dead
how can you be taken serious you got pubes on your head
you must have shit yourself when you were drawn against me you got less change of winning this tournament then scotty
Going against me dude you musta known what you were in for
your punchlines are like xmas films we seen them before
Nice of you to show but honestly i cant see the fuck why
When people saw the draw they said your as good as a bye
Lets face it dress im just to fucking classy for you son
Look on the bright side dude at least you made round one
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 6:10pm
Dress - Opener was nice multi was off at the end though, but the punch was there so made up for it, 2nd bar was nice, good use of his name and incorporated a punch in there too...nice, next bar was nice though wasn't too effective as the punch is played out now, alicia keys play was ok nothing special again concepts been used before, meh at the closer again nothing special

Started off nicely but started to fall off in the middle to the end, had some good hits in there to start off and than your concepts started to become played....ok verse though, not your best

Frank - Opener was ok wasn't personally feeling it too much tho, i can see the punch and personal but wasn't feeling it, same with the second i understand what your saying but not the hardest hit but made me laugh, nice personal as i did say that a few of his punches were played out, wasn't really feeling the last two bars didn't seem direct enough.

Not a bad verse but no killer blows, and the punches just didn't seem direct enough for my liking i saw where they was going but didn't seem to reach the destination such as your closer which could of been used against anyone, your alot better than you showed in this verse, maybe others will disagree, and yea i said some of dress's shit was played but to me this verse wasn't hard hitting.

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- Dress, yea he had some played concept but he landed some punches and they were personally direct imo towards frank
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:01pm
After reading these, I'd have to say Frank's got this...DTk had 2 pretty good punches (the Anne Frank and the booted one) but the rest didnt really live p to that standard...the opener wasnt worked well enough to be a really mean hit, especially seeing as its something thats been used on frank before...tghe baselball link was tenuous at best which made for a poor closer...frank basically killed it with the opener, insane punch, beautifully worded...xmas films was good too and the last two hits kept the heat up enough for you to take this

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2007 at 7:10pm
dress2kill - opener concept was weak n the punch matchd it next bar was dope, 3rd was ok fourth is the type of irrelevant wordplay i hate. weak, n the last, i fail to see how u incorperated the concept into the punch at all. if there wasnt a explanation id just be thinking eh weak filler punch with the expo its probably worse... so yea one sick punch one OK one n the rest were pretty bad/mediocre tbh

frank white- decent verse the chrismas film punch made me laugh and the last bar although a simple concept and pretty obvious ive never seen it in any tourny before so i thought that was pretty dope. the other bars were OK..

in the end frank jus had more decent punchs - 2 to dress2kills 1.. so

frank white got my vote
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2007 at 8:52pm
DTK:  verse was cool...anne frank was nice enough, made me stop actually...surprising i aint seen it before...verse could have been much better...you used hella played shit...some shit was played to the point it seemed bitten but i'm not accusing you of that...just saying it was played as fuck...*keys/alicia thing* think cass used that hears ago on s.p. ...anyways good i guess

Franky:  gotta say i wasnt feelin the verse at all...guess its just a regional thing but it seems very basic to me...no multis, no direct shit...seemed rushed as fuck...concepts were there for a nice 'open mic' style verse but i felt like you aint attack dress like ya should

Was expectin heat in this battle, was also disappointed...which ever of you advance need to step the fuck up...

with that in mind

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2007 at 10:34pm
2-2
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 12:06am
DTK: that was a really good start, the personal was nice.. 2nd bar.. lol nice punch, nice nameplay.. 3rd bar: lol dope personal punch 4th bar: that was ok bar nothing special.. closer.. that is true he looks retarded after every comment..lol.. 2nd line is like u jus repeat ur point from 3rd bar.. gotta say both lines are played out...
 
overall: ur personal punches was good, some nice nameplay and good multis...
 
FW: opener, was ok personal could've made harder... 2nd bar.. nothing hard here was weak punch... 3rd bar: was ok punch.. 4rth bar.. nothing hard, not feeling your punch.. closer.. same nothing hard..
 
overall: few personal.. ur verse was weak, should work more on your punches...
 
overall: DTK GMV..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 12:26am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 7:06am
lol at work at my punches
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2007 at 1:50pm
3-2
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 December 2007 at 10:31am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 December 2007 at 10:56am
Lol @  the title, his name is DressToKill, not dressed2kill

DTK

You Got A Plot To Get Me?Well Your About To Get Rocked Swiftly
First Audio Winner..Well I Guess Its To Bad That We Forgot So Quickly!*
Not a knockout punch but effective personal ... 3/5
Your Concepts Are Gay,It Seems Your Styles Ran Blank
Theres Only Been One Jewish Hero And Your Names Not Anne,Frank!
LMAO...perfectly worded, good multies, nice flow, an sick punch/wordplay...5/5
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You Voted Sparta For UK Captian,THEN HE BOOTED YOUR ASS OUT!*
Funny personal,clowned him, no punch tho...3/5
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Nobody Would Be 'Feeling Ya Keys' Even If Ya Name Was Alicia!
this was poor, flow was terrible an multi syllables werent matched either..1.5/5
Just Shut Up Dude,After Every Comment You Look More Retarted
Cuz You Already Had Majority Of People Hate You Before You Even Started!
Cool idea but didnt come off as good as it could have...3/5

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your punchlines are blackeyes mine leave you dead
how can you be taken serious you got pubes on your head
I disagree with sparta, i cant see how this is 'beautifully worded', however its a funny punch...3/5
you must have shit yourself when you were drawn against me
you got less change of winning this tournament then scotty
LOL, true that, coz scotty got me ;)...3/5
Going against me dude you musta known what you were in for
your punchlines are like xmas films we seen them before
lmao, nice strong punch...4/5
Nice of you to show but honestly i cant see the fuck why
When people saw the draw they said your as good as a bye
this was ok, but a bit too basic for my likin..2/5
Lets face it dress im just to fucking classy for you son
Look on the bright side dude at least you made round one
haha, nice...3/5

DTK = 15.5
Frank = 15.0

Looks like dtk scrapes this, both had one real strong punch, others were average. great battle, extremely close
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2007 at 8:06pm
DTK

You Got A Plot To Get Me?Well Your About To Get Rocked Swiftly
First Audio Winner..Well I Guess Its To Bad That We Forgot So Quickly!*
...liked that, strong opener.. props on that..
Your Concepts Are Gay,It Seems Your Styles Ran Blank
Theres Only Been One Jewish Hero And Your Names Not Anne,Frank!
..lol, i love this, wording was good, but the punch was awsome
Your Whole Nations Against You,Think Not?Just Ask How
You Voted Sparta For UK Captian,THEN HE BOOTED YOUR ASS OUT!*
..props on that, good personal, but cud'a bin flipped alil harder i think..
Il Easilly Defeat Ya,My Punches Will Repeatedly Reach Ya
Nobody Would Be 'Feeling Ya Keys' Even If Ya Name Was Alicia!
..lol, gud shit.. i lik..
Just Shut Up Dude,After Every Comment You Look More Retarted
Cuz You Already Had Majority Of People Hate You Before You Even Started!
..meh, not feelin it so much..who really cares bout bein hated..

Frank.W

your punchlines are blackeyes mine leave you dead
how can you be taken serious you got pubes on your head
..lol, made me laugh, but wasnt hittin to hard, weak opener..
you must have shit yourself when you were drawn against me
you got less change of winning this tournament then scotty
..concept is an obvious one lol, .. but shit wasnt hittin hard..
Going against me dude you musta known what you were in for
your punchlines are like xmas films we seen them before
..good concept, but jeez frank, you aint bringin that fire dude..
Nice of you to show but honestly i cant see the fuck why
When people saw the draw they said your as good as a bye
..weak, you aint really bringin that much, fallin off as it goes on..
Lets face it dress im just to fucking classy for you son
Look on the bright side dude at least you made round one
..probly best line, but it still came off weak..
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 December 2007 at 9:36pm

DTK: opener was nice...i done a simular bar against him before...second bar is tight...real nice hit....lmfao @ booted out...ehhh alicia keys punches are mad played bro...this woulda had to be real different wit a creative play to be a dope punch...ehh closer is ok...overall a pretty nice verse...started off strong but ended kinda weak

Frank: lol @ opener...ive seen ALOT of punches against his hair...but this was cool...lol @ second punch...more of a punch against scotty tho...xmas bar was a cool concept but needed to be worked better cuz with the wording right now, its not too hard...good idea tho...second bar is ok...you need to come more direct tho, your spitten open mic type punches...closer is ok...again coulda came wit a more direct hit....

overall was an enjoyable verse to read but when breakin it down i felt that dtk had the more direct verse wit the better punches...nice battle yalll
 
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