Vengeance: R4-B1) Sparta vs Flash

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Gee, where to start lol

Both brought what I expected, this battle was hot as fuck, props to both.Gonna be real hard to choose a victor, but here it goes.Sparta, good opener, not a real knockout punch but a funny bar nonetheless. I liked the next bar. Weren't a punch but was a good way to put him down.Ha, 3rd bar was sick, strong punch and well worded.4th bar, I weren't really feelin. Stuff like that get's used too often, just somethin I expect to see from someone who's desperate for plays.Next bar was ok, nothing special.6th bar was cool. When people use the other persons home town for a punch, I always think it's hot an a good way to clown them. 7th bar was cool. LMAO @ the 8th bar. Hot personal punch, and true aswell ;) Haha. Weren't really feelin the 9th bar. 10th bar was dope as fuck, a good, relevant set up and a killer punch. 11th bar was a good hit too. LMAO @ the penultimate bar. The whole flash thing has been used once or twice before, but the way you used it was unique, so props on that. Closer was a good play too, nice way to finish. Overall, this verse was hottt, exactly what I was expecting like I said. Only one or two bars that I didn't like, otherwise I thought you done all you could, brought strong punches, had a good flow, tidy rhymescheme and relevant personals. Fatal, I weren't really feelin the opener. Like I said with sparta's punch about your battle record, this is just somethin I would expect to see. And I don't want to see something I expect to see, nah mean? lol. Dissing someone about losing to someone who has a lower rep is weak in my opinion, as it happens to all of us. It's like takin the piss out of Liverpool fans coz we got beat by Barnsley. Doesn't neccessarily mean that Barnsley are a better side, it's just that we underperformed. AAAANYWAY, moving swiftly on. Your next bar was hot, good wordplay. Next bar was a good play, but weren't really that personal, coulda been used on anyone if ya get me. Heard stuff like that before anyway.LMFAO @ the broken jacuzzis line, that was hot as fuck. I've seen spa plays before but I gotta give you that one haha. Next bar (Faith Evans one) was also killer hahaha. The spartas history thing was hot, although I'm pretty sure I've seen it before, you worded it perfectly. Weren't feelin the Woods thing. Same thing I waffled on about with your first bar, although I can see why you used it, coz it was for his title.Weren't feelin the superman thing. Next bar was ok, but I unno, I just feel you coulda done more with it.Lol, next bar was cool. Heavy metal thing was hot. Last bar was like 'OOOO, should he have said that' lol, but I guess it was hot, either way.Overall you too had some hot personals and punches, although had some bars that missed too. Flow was cool but rhymescheme was a bit dodgy in a few places, but I won't judge you on that. Now, decision time. Really hard to choose. I felt Fatal had more dope bars, but at the same time had more weak bars than sparta did. Sparta seemed to just hold his own and stayed consistant, with sturdy hits, whereas Fatal seemed to throw haymakers but alot of weak shit, if ya get me.So, solely based on that, I'm gonna vote sparta. I'm expecting people to vote Fatal coz he had more hot bars, but I gotta go with spartas consistancy and higher entertainment factor. I came in here without knowing who'll win, and I'm leaving without knowing who'll win. You both done excellent, this is why you both reached the final. +Rep for both lol. But there can only be one winner...

Fucking Son Of A Bitch...I Just Finished A Whole Damn Breakdown Of This Bar By Bar And  My Bitch Ass Internet Dis-connected When I Posted Reply...Argh....

Yo, I won't stop beating on Fatal 'til this bitch is listless
Flash don't wanna see this 26, kinda like a kid at Christmas
Nice opener, liked it a lot...

Now he's up against a pro, I'll leave your game burned, chump
I mean, you beat one ama, one nov, and the other ain't turn up
ehhh..kind of just stating his run... clowning him on how easy he got here..but nothin' major to me, just average

Brace yourself for these hits, there's no hope that they'll miss, son
Bolo was sick for the last round...you clearly won't be for this one!
haha....siiiiick

You ain't had a bad run dude, but now it's time to stop it
Son, 30+ wins aint mean shit when 29 were novice
a bit repetitive as many people have stated he only beats novs and your 2nd bar was kind of clowning him already on having an easy stretch and what not

You trying it with sparta, that's how your end is caused
I'll stay punishing Flash like sex offender laws
solid

A final? How's this joker got there?
No surprise he from the Windy City, his raps just a load of hot air
lol, dope, loved this one


You thought you might snatch this, but this draw's stopped ya
After this, you'd better give up on Vengeance, like reformed mobsters
Good play, you seem to have a knack for coming up with nice vengeance plays lol

He's the worst leader I've ever seen, other crews pissed themselves
I mean, he let in one wack head, and did shit-all else
lol true..nice punch again


I'll step up, start spitting, and now this chump is troubled
See I just ignore Fatal in this, like them stuntman doubles
cool, liked the idea a lot

I smashed ya last time with ease, nothing you dropped made me fear ya
I mean, there were more Greek plays in that verse than the Dionysus Theatre
pretty good but a little random and irrelevant...talking about his old verse from a previous battle is a bit of a stretch..

An' they weren't even any good, no way this whore's offensive
See I'm keeping this Mexican at bay like them border fences
omg, dope

You only made one final since ya joined, boy your rapping has all missed
And you were only there cos Ikon carried Flash like Japanese tourists
dope

Goodbye sonny, you must be regretting starting this fight,
You only got to check his avy to see he's all bark and no bite...
nice strong closer


Overall- Consistent throughout except 3 bars i wasn't feelin' but the rest were either solid or dope...You had some really sick bars like the Mexican and Chicago ones and everything was nice and clean...Very tight verse...Great personals too





FATAL

yeah, thanks voters...good battle flash, that verse didnt really deserve to be KOd