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Bolo 
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
 Topic: R1) 2smooth vs. Swift StylesPosted: 12 September 2008 at 11:02pm |
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First to 5 or 3KO Crew Votes Allowed ALL Votes MUST be explained Vote swaying will be deleted Only Verses and Votes allowed, all else will be removed. No bitching, use the thread provided If you cant make the deadline see me BEFORE the deadline or you'll be treated as a no-show (IMPORTANT: If you don't think you will be able to make it, the sooner you make me aware of it, the better, as a reserve will be selected to take your place.) All verses must be in by: Saturday, 20th of September 2008 at 12:00 AM EST (that's Midnight on Friday) Theres no "you spit first", all verses have the same deadline so dont wait for your opponent. DO NOT POST YOUR VERSE. PM your verse to me! if you have problems PM'ing it to me, my email address is in my profile. If you have to e-mail your verse, make sure you title of the e-mail reads: "(your username) - Round 1 verse vs. (your opponent)". NO EXCUSES. Votes will last for 1 week from when the verses are posted. If you finish your verse ahead of the deadline, send it to me as soon as possible. Verses will be posted and the battles opened for votes as soon as both verses are received. Edited by Bolo - 12 September 2008 at 11:07pm |
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Bolo
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 21 September 2008 at 11:42am |
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Swift;
*flush, poker, Deuce is a 2 in cards. ** hasnt battled since textual torture in march *** Kon was DQ due to being late Me flushin’ Smooth? Bets placed say that I never could This isn’t poker…but the odds of deuce winnin’, aint lookin good... I aint shooken dude, I’ll textually pound this bitch in 2 rough Your gonna beat swift? Only if u knock dust off of 6 months’a rust! You won torture, couldn’t maintain the rep of best? That why you stopped? You ain't tough… you wouldn’t have the title if kon’s verse would’a dropped This geeks got no ‘chance of advancin’ 2bad soon ill be ‘promoted on top’ Makin sure your show is stopped, Ill make sure your punchin out the clock N’ show you you’ve flopped. Im Sick of these lame vets Get this bitch a towel, Smooth gets slippery when wet… ...Fuckin pussy... Smooth: he voted me best on the site at battling on the site awards his crew page says that he's not that talented, but willing to learn an' get better i've beaten him before, by KO swift is a member of d12, proof from d12 died there are certain white pride activists that still try to promote what the SS section of Hitler's army believed in... SS - Swift Styles... don't get it?... then don't vote yo... how could anyone believe this guy's a menace? ...when the only SS that causes trouble, is a white supremist let's go... he's on a bit of a win streak, but this bitch is 'bout to lose... 'cuz his 'style's' like D-12... another 'swift without the proof!' no one you've beaten was good, plus, i've already left ya' ass killed... so i didn't even have to read ya' crew page to know that ya' lacked skill!! an' that's real!... i can't even put it politely, S... that you don't even stand a chance... you already voted you like me best!!! (GTFOH...) it's the KO... there's no way your verse'll score, newb... ...because i just put an end to SS like world war 2 Edited by Bolo - 21 September 2008 at 11:46am |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 21 September 2008 at 12:29pm |
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Swift, not a bad verse started off well with some nice hits but fell off in the middle to the end (last 2 bars were weak imo) first two were nice though
Smooth, Nice verse not your best but still nice enjoyed the read and the punches landed, also made me laugh and personals added to the strength of the punches Vote - Smooth takes it, landed more punches |
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I-kontinue
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The Sovereign Joined: 14 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 4961 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: #3 Stats: 46-9-0 Form: WWWWWL |
Posted: 22 September 2008 at 8:50am |
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Swift... 1st bar was fire. Nice way to open... Never seen it before... Effective wordplay etc...
2nd bar... Nice personal... You're coming at him at his weak points... You're magnifying them, which is what battling is all about... 3rd bar... Lol... Funny. 4th bar... Not as strong as the previous ones... Just okay to be honest... Closer... This had way more potential to land harder...Seems like you got tamer in the last 4 bars... Yes, Smooth surfaces get slippery when wet is true, but calling him "slippery" doesn't seem to be a nice diss... How is the adjective "slippery" a diss to someone? Lol... I dunno... Smooth... Nice way to open... Wordplay is on point. Never seen it used like that before... 2nd bar... Above average wordplay... I've seen similar shit to this which is why it wasn't 100% fire to me, but not so direct with the "Swift"... Others used it generic like "You're like Em.. you dont have the proof" or some shit like that, so that's why this one still held up... 3rd bar... Nice personal... You're getting at his weak points, similar to what he did to you in his earlier bars... Probably could have been a harder hit if you played around with the idea, but still very solid... 4th bar... Can't really argue with that one... It's there, it's direct... It's hitting 5th bar... Another wordplay... Good use of it too... A new concept... Overall, my favorite single hit was from SS, but he didn't hold up the fire in last 4 lines that he started out with... Smooth was constantly hitting from various angles... Wordplay, personal, wtc... Smooth was more consistent, and less of his concepts were questionable of hitting or not... therefore, he gets my vote... The best battle I've voted on so far in the tourney in terms of no weak lines by each battler... v/smooth |
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Point Blank
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Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Posted: 23 September 2008 at 5:48am |
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Yea smooth took this easily. He had stronger hitting punches. Opener was dope & the crew page thing pretty much clowned him. Rest of the stuff was average but still good enough. I agree with the 2 voters above me, about how SS had a nice verse but it wasn't good enough. His opener was pretty good, but it pretty much fell off from there
Tough break SS
Smooth wins |
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Bolo
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¡Ke Viva La Fuckin' Revolución! Joined: 11 November 2004 Status: Offline Points: 1397 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-4 Form: NWLNNN |
Posted: 23 September 2008 at 2:46pm |
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smoothy is through
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I am the one that knocks...
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