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    Posted: 11 October 2008 at 1:24pm
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Edited by Bolo - 11 October 2008 at 8:34pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 1:28pm
Kay B:

*Albuterol is in an inhaler used for asthma..i have asthma, weezy chest...I call woods mc weezy he was also signed up by bolo with the name
**David nugent is the only person who scores for northern ireland he's pretty much the most famous person from there...aint no-one know woods
*** Sinn Fein = the leader of the IRA, Put shots (guns down)...droppin woods shots
**** Ranking...Five stars benig great ect...his shit aint even get one, star as in making it big

Yup..Let's do this

Watch as i land more crosses than teams at the superbowl
Ima send weezy packing, like u witness me inhaling albuterol!*
Alotta confusion surrounds his intelligence, ima make it right..
Been here for years, and dumbass STILL think's LA's a gay dating site...
I throw punch with a cold heart, but ya'll know they landin' hot
Where'as.. EVERYONE knows nugents the ONLY dude from ireland landing shots!**
Bite a few of kay's open idea's suddenly think ya hot now?
Ya'll can call me Sinn Fein, it's ME puttin' the northern irish shots down!***
Ya rocked now?...you aint shit woods, ima provoke n scar
This bitch needed photographic evidence to prove he was ONCE close to stars!****
Fuck breakin' down my verse voters gun love all of it, plenty
We ALL know you a virgin bitch.. ya practically DESTINED to fall at a semi...
Alotta shit on me?...fuck u punches'll leave him on his back
You only going at MY LIFE, cause ya dream boyfriends featured on the track...
How you feelin' now?? fucked up everyone starin' brah
Dude you lost your title to someone who dont even specify in that area!
Say what ya want man but dont mistake it im right
You after the title?..Watch this X-fade as i PROVE you the ONLY fake on the site

You runnin' son, this aint even beef, this shit's becomin' fun..

This wayne shit makes me sick, fuck jus give him a flower he'll love ya
Go ahead, drop ya million opens..like eifell ima stand in the back n still tower above ya

Ya runs over..


Woods:

Expo's:
*His dad's an "alcoholic" and was abusive to him and his mum -
kay is also a heavy drinker, Shot = drink / punch - His mum and dad have split.
*Hitchcock's his last name / Alfred Hitchcock made the movie "Psycho"
*Kevin Keegan - former newcastle manager - Fired/quit because he didn't change the situation and was basicaly useless...
*K-pax - well known movie - starring kevin spacey
*He claims he had/has insomnia - gets by on 5 hours a night usually..
*He calls me mcweezy
- rest is self explanatory...
 
You wanted it... you got it......
 
Say’s he hates his dad, his action’s he’s not forgot
Yet he mimics him in his most destructive ways… shot for shot!…

History of parental violence, kay’s life’s has had some bum chapters…

Did it hurt ya to see ya dad beatin’ on a bitch??.. n’ then ya mum AFTER..

I come equipped with strikes like lightnin’ wit me..

But they aint needed….cause Hitchcock aint produced nothin’ scary since the 1960’s

So there’s no point in tryin’…how can we be thought of as equal??

When ya OWN crew leader thought a shit verse would beat you…(Ha!)

You where too smooth last round, but now we expectin’ ya fall

Cause...Ironically.. the only tim Kay packs a hit.. is when Kevin’s involved..
So as I 'buckle ya jaw', ill tell ya 'belt up ya trap'
I hear you struggle to get to sleep?.. my punches’ll help you wit’ that! (K.O)

this means everything to him.. too bad he’s losing it all

Cause this aint the first time kevin’s failed to make an impact… jus’ check the Newcastle job..

Slow fuck shouldn’t show up, could never match my cunnin’ or power
n’ there’s no way he could 'get weezy'… only if he’s runnin’ for hours

Whats left of ya is tattered and done, you getting’ battered for fun

So..I have ya exiting ya life early…...... Like Father like Son!…(Ouch)

Leav'n three in ya chest, fleein’ ya nest and beatin’ ya rep..

Cause Kay aint scoring with strikes online.. unless he playing Fifa wit’ Nep...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 2:03pm
Good battle...

Kay: Had a pretty straight forward verse...had a good mix of solid personals and wordplay...i would have preferred to see some of the punches worked better and more aggressively but solid enough verse.

Woods: Prob one of the hottest verses ive seen from you in...forever lol....i can really see you took the time to play with your punches and find the best ways to utilize them. You had great personals that were worked aggressively and originally.

Both had good verses but Woods dropped some heat on this one. The most difference i can see is the wording of his punches and how aggressive the personals were worked. Kay looks like he coulda used a lil more time on this one tho IMO.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 2:30pm
Cool, thanks man...

Dope verse btw woods agree with fatal thats its the best iv seen from you...quite happily lose to it tbh....Will break it down for u when i catch you on msn
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 3:13pm
Befoe I vote, Kay its David Healy who scores for Northen Ireland not David Nugent, he's English!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 3:25pm
haha oh shit...yea david healy thats who i meant lmao

Same difference...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 3:26pm
Kay - Like I said previously you got the name wrong on one of your punches which really killed it from the start for me, an experienced head like you shouldn't need telling to do his research. I liked your "fall at the Semi" line. Was expecting more from you.
 
Woods - You definatly suprised me with this Woods, yu've really elevated since we battle on my first battle on this site. Those personals went in hard, really hard which really killed the match off. Solid punches all the way through and did more than enough for the win.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 3:29pm
Expected more from me?...i DONT straight battle so iono why you'd expect more haha im an open mic writter and the name thing...yeah my bad no getting it wrong but tbh my verse WAS rushed as i had alot on this week and didnt wanna no-show in the final.

Props on the vote though, again dope verse woods get at me when u see this
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 3:43pm
I mean I expected more in the fact you have 40 wins to 23 losses and you are a member of the best crew in LA. I just thought you'd take this...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 3:52pm
outta those 40 wins AT LEAST 20+ of those are topic battles...i used to battle when i first come but punchlines aint my strongest point plus the fact it was rushed...and the fact that woods come dope as i knew he would, also im a member of the best crew no LA because of my writing talent...not battling, though let's not clog this up...thanks again for the vote, agree 100% with it

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2008 at 12:48pm

gotcha kay..

thanks for the props and votes all...
 
lets keep them rollin'...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2008 at 3:07pm
Kay : Verse was decent at best..had some good personals such as the Irish soccer player bar..I also thought the eiffel tower bar was pretty cool too..but this verse overall was just average..you didnt bring heat like you did against Kon which disapointed me..I was expecting more from you..I know this isnt you're primary element but you are a better battler than this
 
Woods : Nice use of personal dude..even though I probably wouldnt of gone as far as you did  it still showed the determination to win..You had a strong verse all the way through I personal liked the play in you're closer..Like I said you used a lot of personal in you're punches which made the hits that much harder good verse
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2008 at 3:23pm
opner: woods
punches: woods
mulites: woods
personals: woods, killed this cat. lol
nameplay: woods
wordplay: idk, i didnt see any?
flow/structure: kay, i didnt like neither actually
closer: woods
 
overall: woods, nice battle ya'll
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2008 at 4:00pm

cool thanks ya'll

3/4-0 KO mcwoods

let's get the final poppin'...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 October 2008 at 9:17pm
dope, i got structure...thats all i was after to be honest
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 October 2008 at 1:05am
woods is through to the final/title battle
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