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    Posted: 19 January 2009 at 2:38pm
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*They won an award for the flights
* Vance publishing produce floral magazines...flowers he's dead
*Woods claimed his girl had an affair..he also got ripped in the final

"Go ahead tell me it took three weeks...Roll wid us or get rolled over..."


Made it to the final now ya dope?..nah im sick of this prick
So like when his girl played away....another man's rippin his shit
I aint even worried man, fade questionin why's this?...
...Cause there's only one vance to EVER win wit' sum fly shit! (Fact)
You aint nothin' son, just another fadin' useless coward
Watch ma magazines once again leave vance producin flowers (RIP)
Lemme paint a picture like a microsoft graphic battle
How the fuck you owning dude..when its YOU in a grapple tackle?
Ya clearly blessed?...Nah you aint even feared at best
It's like goin' for a bitches personality...aint no-one feelin' dress
Saw the second line up's, best believe me i laughed
Point or dtk?...dress cos i fancied the MUCH easier task! (ya wack)
You can't battle josh, i wish you would see...
Cause like a tongue on ice...you should jus' stick to ya free's(ze)!
Ima cripple ya knee's,  kid jus stand n watch
A victory parade for dress?...even indian bands wouldn't plan-it josh


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 February 2009 at 9:07pm
*Dynasty have always been known to help edit their crews verse
* Kays said that he has a bit of a drinking problem
*My girlfriend cheating on me has been used in like..99 out of the 100 battles i've had
 
Kay Aint The Battling Type,He'll Fall In Strife
Ironic That Kevin's Been Fed-A-Line All His Life!*
You Beating I-Kon?That Whole Concepts A Mistake!
Ya Got A Drinkin Problem..So Whats Another Shot For You To Take!?*
Kev, You Just Get Worse After Each Letter And Bar
A Girlfriend Diss?..Seriously, You Just Showing How Clever You Are!*
Il Grapple You Feircly,You'll Get Lyrically Tossed By The Throat
Yeah I Got Ripped In The Finals!.. Wait ..I Lost By A Vote?
Ya Imagery Is Wack,And Ya Topicals Are The Fakest
This Kid Couldnt Arouse A Thought As A Mental Rapist!
Kid You Even Said Ya Cant Battle! You Dont Even Have Moments
Ya Style's Impregnable, Thats Why Ya Producin No Wins!
 Heres Some Advice..You Should Go Get Some Help
Cuz You'll Get Blazed And Loose Respect Like Micheal Phelps!
You Dissing MY Tourny Final Just Makes Me Laugh Hard
Cuz You Cant Talk Shit If You Didnt Make It That Far..
 
Rusty..Goodluck Kay
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 February 2009 at 10:27am
When did i admit to havin a drinking problem? haha....wont say no more cos aint guna sway

anyways...dope verse man, good luck
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 February 2009 at 11:52am
Kay - You got your Vance links the wrong way around you dummy...I was thinking like, what the fuck does some flowers got to do with "fly shit"...anyways...the majority of your verse were reference punches, some were good...a lot were bland...you also tend to focus on the idea rather than the actual diss/punch, for instance "vance producing flowers"...that has got to be the most hopeless euphemism I have seen in my life...why you would even want to use it escapes me, not like it's linked into your punch...the Vance nameplay was decent, but it was another reference punch...fly shit was basic, its an air force base...what's that got to do with winning? Confused....your multis were decent though, some a bit stretched but they were ok...and I don't know why on earth you said "Point or DTK" punch, surely you will get flipped for being a chicken or at least coz you probably couldn't beat Point (?) I actually liked the punch itself but you left yourself massively open there..........

Sooo yeahh, lot of room for improvement...you showed a decent understanding of rhyming and creating punchlines but you need to learn how to land punches correctly, you obviously do your homework but that has to translate into heavy hits, right now you have some decent some flops...flow and rhymeage don't really stand out either way, like I wouldn't say "sort that out its awful" but I wouldn't say "yeah that was nice" either...

DTK - Opener made me smile...but I think I already told you I don't like explanations that go beyond what you said in the punch...drinking problem line was nice, better if you supplied a link to where he said that to validate it, plus he disputes it so you don't get the extra points you might have done for that you....plus your rhyme was a bit stretched...Girlfriend flip would have been better if you actually included some of the content of the expo in the punchline, so yeah...would have been good, but was just a jab....I liked the next flip...the filler line after that was good dissing, the punchline was a flop...good attempt to diss his intelligence I guess, but didn't work....next punchline was wack, I don't even know what you were trying to get at, don't you know the meaning of impregnable? Should have linked the filler diss, but nice diss still...next bar was sick, dope wordplay and a nice punch....Closer was another good diss and a good flip on his punch...

You had an ok verse...good a few very solid punches in as well as a few complete misses, your rhyming was on the whole a little more simple than Kay's but same really applies as what I said to him...it wasn't awful, but it didn't stand out positively...

Can see why Kay didn't want the flips in the battle, they kind of made the difference...I thought the combination of DTK's flips and his Phelps punch (best of the battle) got him the win...you both have the online battler problem of relying on an expo/link to get you the extra points that I think is irrelevant to creating a punchline...but when it comes down to it, DTK threw few harder punches in a battle were both verses were ok overall and lacked consistency in terms of punchlines...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 February 2009 at 2:05pm

Kay - Wasn't really feeling the verse bro.. opener was pretty wack.. 2nd and 3rd bar was pretty lame.. im like on the same page with Cuba.. how the fuck is planting flowers considered some "fly shit".. that shit would probably be fly to a hippie or a homo.. the name play was ok but I really wasn't feeling it.. and most name plays on him are pretty much played to the fullest.. refering to your closer.. pretty much a swing and miss verse.. and the few that hit weren't to effective..

 
DTK - you had some nice shit.. the opener was tight.. you pretty much stayed direct throughout the verse and the flips were pretty good.. the michael phelps line had me cracking up.. again agreeing with what Cuba said.. best line in the verse.. you had a few slip ups in there but you still had hard enough punches to keep yourself on your feet..
 
Vote: DTK
Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion
"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 February 2009 at 3:49pm
Thansk for the votes, never claimed to be a good battler tho haha

oh and cuba

The airforce won an award for there flying or some shit...im pretty sure i put that in my expos?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 February 2009 at 7:52pm
Thanks both..I thought the Micheal Phelps line was gold too lol. Kay got the shitty end of the stick going first..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 February 2009 at 8:34am
Haha its cool cause even I can think of nice flips on my verse lol
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 February 2009 at 8:30pm
Kay - Good flow, and a lot of nice multis that helped link some punches together, but your punches were just really indirect. There was a lot of referencing to DTK and a lot of attempts at Metas and Similes, but I just didn't feel them that much. There were a couple of decent bars, but a couple at best.

DtK - Came pretty good man. Flow wasn't the best, but you seemed to work hard at linking your setup bars and your punchlines together. Micheal Phelps bar was hot, and you had a strong verse with the other punches. There were a couple stretched concepts that didn't really work for me, but overall your verse was good.

Overall : DtK came a lot hard and a lot more direct.

DTK Get the vote.






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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 February 2009 at 9:32pm
Thanks Nep..KO for me
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 February 2009 at 11:05pm

so that makes it xfade 1 and dynasty 1.. due to CJ not sowing

Slick back in this shit.. time to put a hold on commotion
"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean..

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 February 2009 at 11:48pm
Honestly, dope battle. Without those flips though...could've gone either way. It'd be nice to see a round 2 for this one.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 February 2009 at 8:13am
Props thanks for the votes, and thanks for postin even though its over CB 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 February 2009 at 3:17pm
3ko to DTK 

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