XFade: Revolution vs The Dynasty: Cee-Jay Outlaw vs Sparta (text) |
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Topic: Cee-Jay Outlaw vs Sparta (text) Posted: 19 January 2009 at 2:39pm |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
Standard Member Joined: 11 October 2007 Status: Offline Points: 2131 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-3-0 Form: WLLWWL |
Posted: 19 February 2009 at 4:45pm |
Don't U Be givin me a fuckin N scotty Fuck the two day deadline
Fuck Dynasty, FUCK Ikon Disappeared in a Flash, Ikons sickest battlers duck, known for getting cheap wins from members worse than wackasfuck...* it'll take Luck, from Sparta and 300 or more to be frightening this battler, Scotty, change my name to Persia before i begin this massacre.* Spears Be flying, and I lyrically jest, Leaving him Stressed. Leave Sparta sweating and nervous like i'm a Uni test Sparta must be feeling the heat and the burn of the ropes like an underdog boxer i'll come with such a sick verse you'll think i'm Señor... an Imposter! Been busy for a month and everyone saying i'm ducking out... Oh! Wait!... For 10 months you've been duckin out Dalinquent and Bolo!* Everyones battles Sparta yet he has not prevailed victorious, Its is only in Ancient War where Sparta is hailed as Glorious* you're from the steel city but can't handle a bit of 'Metallica' in legion Think this bitch is gonna crush me, nah go suck on his phallic region! No, I aint fuckin with a ghost writer, but my lyrics should haunt you Stop messing with ouija boards, i'm a poltergeist, i'm designed to taunt you! *Sworded Styles name for me *Persia kicked the shit outta sparta * check http://lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=14737 *Ancient War:Sparta is a war strategy game where players play as the spartan Empire |
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 26 February 2009 at 3:57pm |
CJ ain't shit, his style's blatantly bitten
You took a month to post a verse that you ain't even written? And it's still fuckin' wack, boy you bound to fail I'm keeping Outlaw behind bars like the County Jail Just reading this verse got you breathing heavily; Your excuses just delaying your death like Goody's chemotherapy Those played out bars make an impact about once in 40 I kill mcees, and this faggot only wants to taunt me? (GAY) So take your drafted shit elsewhere, no-one feels it, man How you going to handle beef when you could barely deal with Ram? You out your depth sonny, Sparta's meant to kill this I mean, my punches already given this idiot a mental illness (french bit of sig means 'i'm mad in the head') You jealous kids can't handle it, my lines breed insolence Your verse kinda like Tibet, under heavy Chinese influence Cuba and XTC knew it, I was bound to whip him So I knock this kid out and master Fade like sound technicians... |
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-XTC-
Standard Member Joined: 12 November 2006 Location: Brooklyn Status: Offline Points: 1533 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 19-11-4 Form: LLLLLL |
Posted: 03 March 2009 at 12:18am |
C Gay - opener was ok.. to be honest i don't get it.. it really didn't make any sence to me.. 2nd bar was kind of wack.. a bit dodgy.. 3rd bar.. seems as though you tryed to force in some multis.. didn't work for you.. punch was lame.. 4th bar wasn't even a punch.. nonetheless it was pretty gay.. 5th bar was ok.. now.. I don't know how relevant it is because i've mentioned it to Sparta and he explained what the situation was.. so technically I can't really say it's that effective.. because it's not technically true.. but anyways.. it's still just ok.. 5th bar was pretty gay.. i see the idea.. but you didn't set it up right.. nor deliver it in 30 minutes or less.. 6th bar.. was kind of funny.. gave me a bit of a chuckle.. closer was gay.. the hardest hitting line out of that was Fuck Dynasty, FUCK Ikon.. because that was the one time you were pretty direct.. Farta - opener was nice.. made me laugh.. 2nd bar was ok.. pretty good play.. could have been better.. 3rd bar was ok.. 4th bar.. sick flip.. but it didn't rhyme.. once in 40/taunt me..?? that could have come off killer but you fucked it up.. 5th bar was a sick personal and it had me going again.. lmfao.. 6th bar was kind of gay.. 7th bar.. lmfao.. ok.. that was pretty funny.. nice shot at Perfecto too.. closer was just straight up dope.. killed it.. and that's got to be original right there..
Overall - CJ had like a swing and miss verse.. nothing really landed.. flow was ok.. but nothing else really had it moving.. punches were pretty dead.. no big use of multis.. nothing to personal either.. Sparta on the other hand had and up and down verse.. some bars came off good.. others came off kind of weak to me.. not one of your better verses but it was pretty good nonetheless.. the last 2 bars pretty much killed it..
Vote: Sparta
Fuck Scotty..
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"See-sick'ness" in the mix cause I flow like the ocean.. ..Slick.. |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 03 March 2009 at 10:21am |
Yeah...
Clean-Shave: You brought an ok verse, some coolio hits...you were jabbing mainly him more than knocking him the fuck out though, i thought you had two really good disses though, which were your opener & the ducking punch...that was a really solid punch, the first one lacked a bit on the punch because it kind of dissed yourself as well ...some of your rhymes were fairly simple and your rhythm could have been better at points, but it was ok overall...you also had a decent attempt at a pre-empt with the Senor thing, coulda been better though Spartak Moscow: Was a measured response, you were fairly advanced at points without being stunning with punchlines...consistantly hit your opponent with solid connections, was an efficient verse...can see why you pick up so many Ws...some of your lines were a bit syllble heavy, could have been chopped a bit to make it bit slicker...not that you were noticably choppy but at no point did I think "wow...that flowed sick", can make a difference...every punch was solid, the Jade Goody one was good idea as was the Chinese influence, did what you needed to do really Vote = Sparta...he was a lot more consistant with his verse, hit with better punches..CJ had a couple of nice disses that might have won a different battle, but his level on the whole was below what it needed to be to beat someone like Sparta |
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sparta
Standard Member ..Палач.. Joined: 20 June 2006 Location: Volgograd, RUS Status: Offline Points: 2401 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-13-2 Form: LWWLLL |
Posted: 05 March 2009 at 7:58pm |
Thanks for the votes you two, can we get this finished up?
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 10 March 2009 at 8:00pm |
Uppin for some votes
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 18 March 2009 at 4:35pm |
Wow....somebody vote this already
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dalinquent
Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
Posted: 20 March 2009 at 7:57pm |
Vote sparta...
Both verses were basic and nothing really standout but sparta had the better punches and harder hits... PZ |
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 20 March 2009 at 11:38pm |
Props dal for finally finishing this!
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I-SEE-GRIPS
Standard Member Joined: 19 May 2008 Location: South London Status: Offline Points: 1214 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 12-23-0 Form: LLWLLL |
Posted: 23 March 2009 at 8:35pm |
Both were good no doubt but IMO Sparta had a better style, superior punches, some funny flips and it just flowed better than CJ's
Vote: Sparta
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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
Posted: 27 March 2009 at 8:40pm |
4-0 to Sparta.
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