Last Man Standing: Rnd 2 - Battle 1: Perfecto [vs] P-Man

you need to read some of the threads then cause he been causing beef for dayz

fuckin wack punk!

OK imma threw!

good battle perfecto!

Close Please

i pmd him and asked him to vote an he did!

wats wrong with that!

you should have looked at rixas vote that was dodgy HATE VOTE!

Flow: Senor Perfecto
Multis: P-Man
Punches: Both
Wordplay: Both crap
Imagination: Senor Perfecto
Structure: Both

This was a close battle and they were both good verses but i think senor's verse was a bit more agressive than p-man's

well done to both

VOTE:Senor Perfecto

Comment'z on perfecto - I like how perfecto was displaying the illest flow on point the whole way through - this alway'z count'z to me as I'm alway's tryna study complex rymestyle'z when I see em.

First glance on battle - Perfecto besides his flow also backed it up with content that made sence.

P-Man - First glance for P-Man is he seemed to outlash at ratial discriminancies to attack his opponent saying thing'z like - "This chinks just a gay whore, whos used to vast man handling
So senor your out stop banging your head against that brick wall
P-Man".

 - First of all I thought senor was a word from the spanish language (not chinese) which mean'z sir or Mister so this count'z in battle break down so punches made the emcee look like he did'nt have any understanding on the opponent'z back ground to start with.

Intial first glance rating - 1 point to Perfecto and a minus point to P-Man for these 2 point'z that were mentioned above in the first glance description.

Highlight'z of both verse's:

Perfecto:

              - "I'm displaying dismaying sayings portraying AKs spraying,
       I'm delaying this spit to the last minute to let you critics know I ain't playing"

Comment: Good wordplay

              - "Leave the rapping to the Pros cos these Cons just ain't weighing"

Comment: Nice flip that was bringing 2 analogies into the wordplay.

              - "You can't flip my complex spit cos you couldn't even understand it"

Comment: Tyte rymestyle with good diss.

              - "P-Man searching for skill is like seeking the sunken City of Atlantis,
I got several styles so choose: Drunken Master or Praying Mantis?
Sadly, if you knew karate you would hardly harm me"

Comment: Content all pulled in together with tyte flow and punches.

              - "I'll call the people from the Funny Farm in,
Fuck straightjacketing him... Look... Wait... Hack at his limbs to disarm him"

Comment: Had me laughin at this one - tyte flow too.

after-word advice: All the other pubches seemed like they were fill in punches not really hitting too hard Like this comment - "You'll have the P taken too when I have your ass crash-landing" had me wondering why was the P taken too? or this comment -

"I'ma have fun baiting you though I'm done hating you,
Your battle verses read like your opponents are dating you,
I'm breaking crews while this dude's taking newbs,
My ice-cold mind will make you run for your skating shoes"

had me thinking well while it was tyte rymestyle the content did'nt all relate too well with the other line'z like as if your just trying to put down the opponent instead of bringing it all in context - It's alway'z good to bring hard content every single line.

Over-all: Nice flow brah that'z still a pretty advanced ryme due most flow'z I've studied - actually it's very advanced (shyt you been doing this for a minute bro or what?).

Peace - that's my over-all break down of Perfecto'z verse.

My suggestion to the people wanting me to vote for peep'z is that if you want me to vote I'm alway'z going to have a detailed description like this coz I ca'nt be  more honest.

P-Man:

First of all the ryme-style is not as fluid as Senor when I read it. It sound'z like the emcee has'nt been rappin for that long as the rymestyle is basic.

           - "ive got the rifle cocked and aimed kid"

Comment: Does'nt seem like this sort of content is original - I see this sort of stuff being rapped most of the time - Minus point for this.

          - "I leave you maimed son, perfecto’s left disabled like a spastic
Now people say "look at this retard" , your labelled mr drastic"

Comment: First of all it rymed - Secondly where did mr Drastic fit. More to the point Mr?. Are you trying to be funny?. I guess a spastic person could be pretty drastic but to do it like you did was pretty wack (no diss I'm just here to help you learn). You need to not use fill in'z as they just flood your ryme with basic punches.

          - "You have to hire hoes, cause you just can’t pull a lady with looks like
yours p-mans strikes cause wars , my hits just end up droppin jaws
I make perfecto pause"

Comment: This is probably the most effective part of his ryme - I thought this was a pretty good flow with relatively good content though not linking.

By linking I mean this - "You have to hire hoes, cause you just can’t pull a lady with looks like yours" (one topic)

"p-mans strikes cause wars" (Second topic) 

"my hits just end up droppin jaws" (Third topic).

"I make perfecto pause" (fourth topic with all four not relating to each-other).

Over-all Comment - You need to link more with your rymes bro.

Your rymestyle'z still on point though keep that in mind so your on the right track.

Final analysis from both verse'z:

Perfecto scored a 4.5 out of ten.

P-Man scored a  0.5 out of ten.

Keep in mind that my rating is broken down from all the best ryme'z I've ever analysed and using these verse's rating in comparison to the best battle ryme'z I've ever heard.

Peace, J-P outty 1.

Perfecto is actually a Chinese guy with a Spanish username.. hence the punch from P.

And I'm not sure if there's a rule on how long votes can be but try and keep them a bit shorter, 'cuz the battlers themselves like to read 'em but don't have all day!

Nice to see you took it serious though, welcome to LA.

And I guess that means Perfecto wins...

Peace.