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NepentheZ 
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 Topic: LA MMX Rd 2 - KAY B v iCeZPosted: 31 January 2010 at 11:20pm |
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3 Day time limit [Due by 12.01am GMT, Thurs 4th Feb] 6 Bars per emcee First to 5 vote, 3-0 KO. |
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Kay B
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Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 02 February 2010 at 10:26pm |
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Round 30 is it?......
U aint hot enough for hell, send him to heaven an' laugh Believe it, this the ONLY time ya bars have EVER advanced Make no mistake ice, fuck u but there's no hate... You just aint improved, so we STILL aint get ya shit from 08!* Aint sweating this...ice vs kay a W im collecting fo' free There's a table that's proved it....your fuckin' second to me! No rush on the outcome bitch, i'll create it as i choose But here's proof.. there's only one icez makin' any moves! Ice finnaly made it?...yay?...guys im sick of this bastard Brining heat to this aussie like it was ME who commited the arson Buyin the votes, shit this dudes sly and he knows That there aint been a hit spinning heads from australia since kylie manogue! |
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iCeZ
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Joined: 29 June 2005 Status: Offline Points: 1415 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-13-0 Form: WLWWWW |
Posted: 03 February 2010 at 9:15am |
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Haha ok...
U wont trouble me clown, no way your wrecking my scribe
I’ll have U seeing double this round, cause second is bye bye* He knows that I’m right, battle’s have always been his woes on a mic, Had to go and become Mod, So he could actually close up a fight
Soon as I hear your played raps, I get urges for erasing it
Your Out dated 16’s, Wait…. we talkin’ your verses or relationships?* How many times have I “de-feeted” you, when ur been in my path B This is becoming a habit, you crawling back to “die nasty” (dynasty)*
How the fuck you gon beat me? , U know I diminish jerks
The only time you leave “I –L’s” (aisle) is when you finish work*
Ya battle rap fighting’s miserable… No good at all When you were writing invisible, You fuckin’ stood out more
* had the bye first round
* The word is, he was dating/seeing a 16 year old
*he left Dynasty and than cameback cause he couldnt start a crew
*He works in a supermarket, lots of asiles in supermarkets
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Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
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King Jehu
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Posted: 03 February 2010 at 10:28am |
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For smoother rhymes, better flow and harder punches, I think IceZ wins. I think both had some missteps. Ice used a de-feeted line and a die-nasty line in the same verse... The isles line was weak too, but the rest were pretty good. Kay, I didn't find a single punch in your verse that hit really hard, so this was pretty easy.
Vote: iCeZ
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Insert something rappy here
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Kay B
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Posted: 03 February 2010 at 12:34pm |
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hairymuff
nice verse ice 1-0 |
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Calibra
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Posted: 03 February 2010 at 2:50pm |
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Read these verses a couple of times, thought it was pretty close but have definitely decided on a winner.
KayB - Opener was nice, 2nd bar was weird though, I get the concept but could have been worked better imo. 2nd to me line is cool. Making moves line was horrible to me. Arson bar was ok, if a little played. Really liked the closer, yet, you lose points for linking to her video and STILL getting her name wrong you dumb ass motherfucker.
iCeZ - Opener was a nice concept, could have been worked better to hit harder I think but it still landed, same with the Mod punch. Relationships line was funny. Your next to bars were absoloutley awful... I thought you were actually joking at first but obviously not. Stay away from those kinda lines dude in all seriousness. Closer was pretty decent.
My vote's going to KayB, both had misses but iCeZ had 2 big ones in a row that really hurt his verse. Kay stayed more consistant and just edged it and considering how many times you've both battled each other I thought you both did well.
KayB GMV.
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-DaMadHatter-
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Posted: 03 February 2010 at 4:02pm |
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tight one to call. kay b had a couple of nice bars, the opener was alright. The table bar was nice and so was the closer. The arson and the making moves line just didnt go down well with me. I dont like punches were people just google things like 'australia' or 'icez' and generate a completely random punch. This was an ok verse though. Icez i liked your opener. next 2 bars i didnt really like. de-feeted punches are a big no-no. you scored an own goal with that. The I-L's bar was your best, probably the best in the battle. your closer was alright too. This is really hard to vote on. i think icez had the best bar but he had some of the worst too. kay b just had more consistency to his verse so im going to have to vote for him. real close tho
Kay B GMV |
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iCeZ
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Posted: 03 February 2010 at 7:28pm |
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Not trying to sway kay's probably got this now anyway but the defeeted line wasnt even the punch, i just spelt it that way to add to the "crawling" part.
nice drop kay. we'll see how this goes. ( you'd probably agree that its getting harder and harder everytime we battle now, to come up with something fresh...) |
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Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
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Kay B
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Posted: 03 February 2010 at 7:44pm |
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^ Uh huh i actually had NO idea what to say lol
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 12:49am |
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Kay B, opener was nice, would have been better worded as "bars are ever advanced".... but no big deal. Don't get the second bar, can't see the relevance, third bar was nice, not killer, 4th bar is ok, last two bars are ok, Kylie shit was actually quite funny, iCeZ opener was ok, potential for a killer bar there, with the bye thing, but yeah, not bad, mod shit is hot, best bar of the battle so far, out dated 16's is hot, de-feeted shit is always poor, die nasty been used, I-Ls shit pretty funny, closer is pretty weak. OVerall a pretty simple choice here. iCeZ verse was more consistent, harder hitting, and had 2 killer bars, being the second and third.
Vote : iCeZ |
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Kay B
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 1:19am |
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2nd bar is refering to his sig, he claims his shit was so complex in 08 that it took us 2 years to get it....well im saying we still dont get it but not cos its complex but cos it sucks and makes no sense
thanks for the vote |
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J Sass
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 3:54am |
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ima Keep it real....both these verses was nice.
so it comes down to who i enjoyed tha most....and truth be told Kay B had better Lines imo
i give props to both but ima havta say Kay B on this 1
Vote: Kay B
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iCeZ
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Posted: 04 February 2010 at 7:13am |
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so whats that 3-2?
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Ice they need time to translate it, That why U let kids down
So ya'll should go read my 08 shit, maybe U'll get it now |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 06 February 2010 at 12:46am |
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3-2 Kay B, vote up.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 07 February 2010 at 11:54pm |
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3-2 Kay B, can we not have this drag out, please....
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Cuba
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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 4:57pm |
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Reading first half of Kay's verse I thought it was going to be pretty tough for IceZ to come back from it, liked the opener...simple but effective hit, and I thought it was a pretty good personal diss...like how the second punch kind of continued on from that as well, coolio mocking on the sig...table punch was good, even if it's a bit artificial...it worked...after that I thought you got a bit contrived, random guy on Twitter, so what? He's not exactly making moves is he? Arson was a bit random, I thought it registered a hit on a pure generic Aussie punch, but nothing else more...closer was a similar vein, bit too generic & outdated for my liking...was ok, but nothing great
So overall it was slightly swaying towards the decent half of good...both the disses and punches became less credible as the verse went on, you didn't have any duds though...which can be important in a short battle IceZ, liked the opener, witty...good start, same with the second, good personal, nice diss...out dated 16's didn't work & seemed to be on a flimsy basis...seems most other people liked this one though, odd...next two lines were woeful, I can see what you were trying to do with the diss, and that is a potentially good hit, but honestly...what were you thinking with the wordplay? Wowsers, over 50 battles on the site & you drop that in...unbelievable...make matters worse you followed it up with another dodgy wordplay, basically trying to put a new slant on an old joke...didn't like that one either...closer was coolio, good rhyming in there as well, which is a bonus Interesting one, think you both started out strong & faded, if we excluded the woeful bar from IceZ I think he would have shaded punches...but since we can't, he didn't...you can't carry one very weak punch & two suspect ones in a verse and expect to win Vote = KayB
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Alcatraz
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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 6:27pm |
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not much i can say that aint been said both versses stared of strong and got worse.... but i feel KayB was morse consistant with his verse and his punches were a little better but as said before the de feeted and die nasty lines ruined your verse for me Kay B GMV
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 09 February 2010 at 8:04pm |
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Kay B Advances.
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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