LA MMX: LA MMX FINAL - Hatter v JEHU v Shade |
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NepentheZ
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Topic: LA MMX FINAL - Hatter v JEHU v Shade Posted: 27 February 2010 at 4:22pm |
Rules 3 Day time limit 12 Bars per emcee First to 5 votes - NO Knock Out. Route to the Final : -DaMadHatter- v Alcatraz (No Show) -DaMadHatter- v hanGing (No Show) -DaMadHatter- v Kay B (5-1 Win) King Jehu v Calibra (5-2 Win) King Jehu v mackie (No Show) King Jehu v Stalin (3-0 KO) Junior Shade v I-SEE-GRIPS (No Show) Junior Shade v mc woods (3-0 KO) Junior Shade v Plat (No Show) Lets get it on. Edited by NepentheZ - 21 March 2010 at 12:51pm |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 01 March 2010 at 8:13am |
Thank you Nepunzle for putting my name close to 'winner' and 'Champion.' Later on you can say you knew it all along.
I faced top talent already, this final should be lovely Wearing Hats for Shade is the only time you're both above me Mad Hatter's in a fairy tale and fairy tales are silly And Junior is a shade of yellow cause he's more shook than Chile They're both here through no-shows, leaves me with an itchin' head Cause I keep seeing more hard name-calling in the bitching thread Afraid of this? You had a battle each, I beat two favorites You're just gassed up, so I will drop 2 like I'ma take a shit Junior's half assed, no wonder he can't fill a jean Hatter avoided a hanGing but I bring the Guillotine Jr's in the tournament but I did not remember Only time keeps him from being New Era's least accomplished member Hatter's new but already we see the result Instead of verses being wasted, your verse will be beat to a pulp You want your name on Plat's sig? You'll join the list of my victims Cause I'll be so hard to beat with your skill, you'd call me addiction And you're just flaccid battlers, not really hard to beat Both your best bets is to dedicate all your bars to me I hoped no-shows would end since we've seen many done But no one expects this win from shade, with more no-shows than anyone You'll both post near the deadline, I can tell you need the time Mad hatter's got no real power, might as well just be a mime It says Champion next to my name; of course, your shit's wack Shade only beat woods and we all know Boards Don't Hit Back... |
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-DaMadHatter-
Standard Member Joined: 08 January 2010 Status: Offline Points: 104 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-2-0 Form: WWLWWL |
Posted: 02 March 2010 at 10:02pm |
I apologise in advance for my intelligence... Jehu, did you really think that your rap would suffice? It seems your scared of 'slippin in the final' like this was Dancin' on Ice And Shade where are ya dude? Is my sickness concernin' ya? Looks like 'Junior won't make it', like kids with Malaria Whoops, I crossed the line, and you dudes can't take a step Cause In this tripod of a final I'm the only stable leg Watch me race ahead, this KJ nerd'll be roasted Pussy - the only '2 your droppin' is that verse that you posted I battle better, so victory over me's somethin you'll lack forever You can hold auditions for a pantomime and still wont get your act together I shall endeavour, and Jehu, you musta been crazy To think your dated style and your google'd punches would phaze me Hatters here in MMX and all your chances have gone Shade won Next Generation, but now its time to pass the baton I'll knock you both down a peg as you witness some lyrical slaughter So watch me turn the King and the Junior to the Prince and the Pauper If your riding with Hatter then you'll never take a scenic You'll just crash and burn in a free(3)-way like a certain 2 emcees did Jehu aint used to beef, so this Starving Artist will soon be defeated Hes known to hide beef from his wife cause the fat bitch will usually eat it Claim your a King but you'll get abused in this fight Well call me the postman, cause this royal male will be screwed when I strike This is over, both get pimpslapped by the back of my hand Cause theres no way your flows are gon' be passin the -DaM!! ..Hatters the Champ! |
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Junior Shade
Superior Member Aka UnaBomber Joined: 07 June 2005 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 5015 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 55-14-6 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 02 March 2010 at 11:56pm |
Sorry guys, I did my verse earlier an' then lost it.. Had to go out so only had the time to re-do the bars I could remember when I got back..
Props to Jehu an' Hatter... But.. Jehu must feel threatend so he's coming with low blows.. But how does it feel to know you're above me cus' of the no shows..? Kid you've got no flow an' ya spits have seen better days.. Repping New Era? But ain't done shit since the Renegades.. We don't rate you, so i'm a leave Jehu out cold.. Me worried? nah! there's ain't no heat in his household.. Still clinging to false hope, that one day he'll be famous.. Sorry Jehu, this is it.. I guess you'll always be nameless.. A shameless Vet, while i'm the Next Generation.. Hatter, if i wanted pussy I would have texted Jenna Haze son.. Get the fuck outta here cus' it's dissing you flop at.. Fact! This is the only way you're coming on Top Hat.. But don't worry kid, cus' doubt it'll matter.. Though Jonny Depp is really the only talented Hatter.. Sorry fella's.. Jr.. |
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Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 03 March 2010 at 1:38am |
KJ- Didn't like tha opener thought it was kinda weak. Very simple play. Came back stronger with tha next two lines..Fairytale was funny, and tha Chile line was good, very relevant to whats goin' on. Nice One. Like tha No-Show line. True and a good personal hit to both. Tha next line shows consitantcy in your verse. A little self up but it was a good one. Didn't really like tha Junior play after that kinda weak IMO, but tha hanGing attack was good, real decent. Tha next two were kinda wack. Didn't like tha way it was worked. Tha rest of your verse wasn't bad, nothin' outstandin. However I thought tha closer was hot. Some might say that woods play is played, but I don't. Maybe cuz I'm not as established. DMH- Opener was clever, worded decently. Next bar was decent as well, although tha ryhmes didn't match to me anyway. Next bar was total filler, nothin' even worth writin' IMO. Next line coulda been better. Attempted flip but not a great one. Next bar was again too much filler in it. Liked tha next KJ punch. With tha google hit, nice work. Didn't really like tha next two bars...weren't that good of hits, in fact kinda weak. Started pickin' it up near tha end..but one problem...tha last 3 bars were directed at KJ..no shade attacks. JS- Opener was decent..No show punches again. I guess it happend to all over you so it is what it is. Like tha attack on Jehu about not doin' anythin' anymore..decent. Your verse as a whole was decent. Started off with KJ and tha last few bars were at tha hatter. There one problem though....didn't reach tha line limit!!!! Overall- To be honest I thought Shade had tha better verse outta all of them. But tha fact he didn't reach tha bar limit, DQ's him in my eyes. So its down to KJ and DMH. King Jehu some real decent hits in there, also so weak ones in my opinion. He attacked both consistantly. DMH had some decent punches too, although I though he aimed more at Jehu, than attackin' both. And even though Shade didn't make tha limit its still a 3-Way battle, so ya need to attack both of them equally. So for a better 3 way battle verse.... King Jehu GMV
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 04 March 2010 at 5:37pm |
Right, no mammoth votes from me, just straight to the point.
I'm not even gonna count Juniors emo ass, there's no excuse to not having a full verse cause I know when you started writing, you had some good hits, but it doesn't make up for the fact you missed off liek half the verse. But that's my opinion, crying about it, leaving New Era and blocking me on msn for telling you it just makes you look like a fucking bitch. I thought Jehu and DMH's best hits were at Junior and that there punches towards each other didn't have as much sting, this was to be expected though. DMH really put on a good show of his skill, loved the way you closed, was a really tight verse overall. But, I have to say, I thought Jehu was punching harder all the way through, both had some concepts I think could of either been worked harder or scrapped but I felt Jehu was a bit more consistant. Good final guys, both deserved your places here, but my vote goes to King Jehu. |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
Posted: 05 March 2010 at 7:25pm |
King Jehu... good verse tailored for a three-way battle... Punches and personals were good... often directed at both opponents... but a few disses bordered on boastful filler...
DaMadHatter... another good verse tailored for a three-way battle... Opening bars could have been better... until you began to diss both opponents simultaneously... Some wordplay was stretched... Personals and flips against Jehu were very good... junior shade... weak and disjointed verse... Some wordplay was okay... but flips were not attempted at all... and some personals were already preempted against you... Three days is obviously not enough time to prewrite... Vote: DaMadHatter... Adios... |
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-DaMadHatter-
Standard Member Joined: 08 January 2010 Status: Offline Points: 104 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-2-0 Form: WWLWWL |
Posted: 06 March 2010 at 10:08pm |
ok i know this site is slow when it comes to votin but come on yall, this is a final!
thanks for votes so far
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$n00z
Standard Member Joined: 06 February 2010 Location: NC Status: Offline Points: 1267 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-7-0 Form: WWLWWL |
Posted: 08 March 2010 at 4:08am |
King Jehu-Great shit. Constantly went back and forth at each mc. I mean great punches all the way through. Some of the killer lines to me were… -Wearing Hats for Shade is the only time you're both above me -Junior's half assed, no wonder he can't fill a jean -And you're just flaccid battlers, not really hard to beat -Shade only beat woods and we all know Boards Don't Hit Back... Great closer^^ Jr Shade-Sorry you didn’t get all ya shit in but it looks like it would’ve been some nice stuff. Love the Depp line. DaMadHatter-Great shit my dude. I must say everything I read from you is pretty tight. Came in hard IMO and kept the heat. Some of the killer lines were… Jehu, did you really think that your rap would suffice? Loved the way you brought ya shit in Good ass battle. My vote personally goes to… King Jehu The main reason is because both him and DMH had good verses but I felt like DMH’s kinds cooled off towards the end. Had it not been for that I really don’t know who I would’ve voted for. |
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Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 15 March 2010 at 9:24pm |
C'mon ya'll an excellent battle and its still not finished
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
Posted: 15 March 2010 at 10:21pm |
Great battle....sorry i just got around to voting on this...
Jehu - Great verse, just as i expected if im honest landed real nice punches on both the other two, flowed perfected and just incorporated every part of a great battle verse but most importanly the punches....and they were dope, but you know that. Jnr....Yeah you suck for not writting more Hatter....Wow man, great verse again you really shocked me and i hate to admit it but cal was right...he told me watch out for u if im honest i disagreed with him...but your proved me wrong so props on that, some real nice hits on both. This was ALOT closer than i expected it to, i expected jehu to run away with this final, come down to who i thought hit harder and who's verse/punches i enjoyed more....And i gotta go for jehu, Though like i said hatter held his own...and it could quite easily of gone the other way, but for those reasons.... Vote - Jehu |
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 21 March 2010 at 1:07pm |
Sorry it has taken so long to vote here :
Obviously, although the verse is valid, Junior's bars will never be enough to compete here. So with that in mind, I'll break down Jehu and Hatters verses. This battle is close. Like, really close. I had a feeling Hatter would come strong, as he's proved since day 1 of being on this site, that he has nothing but raw talent, and he's showed it yet again with a verse that was just on fire. Jehu's verse also containing killer lines, makes this battle a hard one to judge. Jehu : Opener was crazy. Great way to start off the verse, with some intense wordplay, clever punch, too. The no-show thing was a bit hypocritical, since you advanced a round due to one too, never the less, the set up was nice, leading to the generic bitching thread punches that the tourny's so often throw up. Next bar is nice, I love the rhyme scheme in the set up bar, favorites a nice little side punch there, too, the punch line wasn't all that great, though. Guillotine line was nice, nice diss on Shade with the crew thing, the verse kind of dips here, with average bars, until the No-Show lines. Another solid punch on Jr, closer was nice. The verse overall, was aimed more at Junior, but still came with some solid punches. Again, opener was crazy, some filler bars in there though. Hatter : Opener was ok, if a little indirect. You could have twisted that up some how, to incorporate more of a solid punch with the dancin' on ice. Nice rhymes though, seemed like you focused a little too much on hitting that rhyme, than a punchline. Malaria line is nice, verse drops off a little for a couple bars, nothing amazing, nice rhyme scheme though, pretty much throughout, and then the act together bar is hot. Killer blow. Nice little flip on the Shade tounry win, clever, witty, The King / Junior - Prince / Pauper line was HOT. My fave line in the battle, most probably. Sick, inventive, creative, whatever, it's crazy. Fat jokes are a bit meh, nice set up, as a brit, I can probably appreciate the Royal Mail shit a bit more than some, and that was a sick punch. Again, clever wordplay, closer was OK, nothing special about some self hype nameplay though. Overall, this battle was CLOSE. But my gut feeling here, is that the 2 bars I thought were hot from Hatter, slightly out weigh the bar I though was crazy from Jehu. Both had good and bad spells in the verses, but Hatter was a little stronger, wordplay a little better, and punches landed a little harded, in what's a very close final. -DaMadHatter- has got my vote. 4-2-0 Vote up.
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-DaMadHatter-
Standard Member Joined: 08 January 2010 Status: Offline Points: 104 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-2-0 Form: WWLWWL |
Posted: 21 March 2010 at 10:58pm |
Can't believe this is still open haha, thanks for the votes, I appreciate the feedback
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ILLSTARRR
Veteran LA CHAMP aka Da General Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: P-Town... HBC Status: Offline Points: 3934 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #2 Stats: 47-6-2 Form: WLWNLW |
Posted: 25 March 2010 at 6:27pm |
Im dying to give a vote to some1 on this (jehu or madhatter) .. But I cant really decide honestly, When I read jehu's ish I was like dammn jehu got to have SONNED em wid that... but madhatter got bars too. Cus jehu's line "Wearing Hats for Shade is the only time you're both above me" won it from em then madhatter comes wid the "So watch me turn the King and the Junior to the Prince and the Pauper" Ouch both equally hot an battle winning bars!!!
Im sorry dudes I just CANT decide.. I read thru both like 3-4times I vote DRAW take it or leave it Unless u want me to coinflip?? |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 26 March 2010 at 12:28am |
Lmao!
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-DaMadHatter-
Standard Member Joined: 08 January 2010 Status: Offline Points: 104 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-2-0 Form: WWLWWL |
Posted: 27 March 2010 at 8:17pm |
Haha thanks for reading anyway. Votes?
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rapdisup
Standard Member Joined: 08 January 2009 Location: U.K Status: Offline Points: 1856 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-20-0 Form: WWWWLL |
Posted: 28 March 2010 at 8:33am |
sorry to all i have also een waiting an waiting to drop a vote cos thets be real is there a winner? When i first read i was all Game for ruling out Hatter cos as ILLA pointed out that line was hot! was exactly wat i expected from you Jehu,however Hatter did come hard and i think maybe for a GROUPIE to come this hard was a lil un-expected lets be real if Jehu woulda battled O' would this have been tha same battle?
Back to the point Jehus opener was coolio and easily better than Hatters an then going through tha verses i think even tho Jehu had some knockout punches,Matter managed to get up kinda like he was tha under-dog fighting Iron Mikeit didnt matter wat was throuwn at him he was there to win so for content an tha element of suprise ima have to go with Hatter,cant believe im voting for ya tho dude wasnt expecting it lol but good battle to both,hope my vote is legit enough for everyone, vote- Hatter (very close)
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Calibra
Standard Member Joined: 28 March 2008 Location: Newcastle, UK Status: Offline Points: 2969 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-3-1 Form: WWWWWN |
Posted: 28 March 2010 at 5:11pm |
Haha
4-3 This is destined to go all the way!
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Rameez
Superior Member Joined: 31 July 2007 Location: Brampton, CDN Status: Offline Points: 3922 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 22-40-4 Form: NWWWWW |
Posted: 28 March 2010 at 6:49pm |
K. J
1st bar: sick punchline and play = 10/10 2nd bar: nice diss here.. but not the jaw breakin pun so 8/10 3rd bar: somewhat ok punch not the best imo 6/10 4rth bar.. lol funny bar.. nice humor.. so 8/10 5th bar.. poor punch man.. an average so average score 5/10 6th bar.. not feeling this.. part marks for trying 3/10 7th bar.. not too personal, average imo 5/10 8th bar.... nice concept but seem average hit 5/10 9th. bar.. lacking 3/10 beat/me.. rhyme? 10th bar.. lol this was good.. so 8/10 11th bar.. lol this was also good so 8/10 12th. lol funny and good hit 8/10 Total: 77/120 DMH 1st: cool nice opener but not the hardest.. so 7/10 2nd.. loool nice hit. but have to make it more jaw breaking so 7/10 3rd.. average 5/10 4rth.. nice hit.. 7/10 5th.. this was decent punch so 6/10 6th.. again decent hit 6/10 7th... lacking 3/10 8th.. no punch.. 3/10 9th.. this was cool and creative. 7/10 10th.. lmao nice personal hit 10/10 11th.. average again 5/10 closer: nice word play.. good hit.. 8/10 Total: 74/120 JS 1st: he above u with battle score too.. not the best thing to use for punch 3/10 2nd.. not feeling this 3/10 3rd: average 5/10 4rth.. average 5/10 5th.. lacking 3/10 6th.. lol this was decent 6/10 7th.. somewhat ok 5/10 Total: 30/70 Vote is based on the score. the one with highest score win.. there was more competition btwn king n hatter.. junior didn't try hard enough.. So vote.. King jehu |
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NepentheZ
Superior Member ... { 26 } ... Joined: 11 October 2004 Location: Yea..Cake. Man Status: Offline Points: 7727 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-32-1 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 03 April 2010 at 6:40pm |
Jehu wins. Well done. Sorry it took so long.
New Era Representing. Woooo....
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