Open Mic: The Edge

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    Posted: 07 April 2010 at 7:25am
I'm not a pussy, so nigga don't push me
When you put ya hands on em then they cryin "How could he?!"
I dont wanna be a killa but they dont throw hands
Cuz when you beat dat ass there they go to the van
Muthafuckaz dont know how to take a loss no more
Too worried about they image tryin to floss for whores
Niggaz cant knuck so they tuck they guns
So I got mine in case I gotta crush they lungs
Wanna shoot cause they scared to pass(die)
But bitch I'm the wrong one cause I aint scared to blast
All my life I felt I had to prove somethin
Daddy told me in shootouts stay low, and move dumpin
And never back down regardless of who jumps in
His parents locked him out the house when 4 niggaz jumped him
I just wanna take care of my kids n spouse
But niggaz too lazy to work, try to run in ya house
So when I kill one of the bastards I aint gon feel nothin
Cuz I done a lotta dirt but I would never steal somethin...
From someone wit a job workin hard for theirs
I used to have a heart now it's hardly there
I ignore bullshit & let it go over my head
If I listen I might go over the edge
U already know...
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Was feelin this..  LA dont usually like gangsta type shit, but I could see this flowin nice over a mellow beat.  like the hearts hardly there line.  But I gootta say...  you done alot of dirt but never stole nothin???  thats the first shit I was on
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lol @ Stalin na i never really had that one in me. i liked walked outta store when i was little wit some shit in my hands but that was bout it. but like, i was never the robbing type ya know. i guess cause my bro and my dad been robbed at gunpoint it jus always bothered me
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Dannng Snooz!! When I seen your name and the title I was ready for some epic shit cuz you know you got the talent to pull it off.Then I seen this and was like WTF!!
Now you know your farrrrrrrr above this.Theres no twists or sharp turns its just forward and below your raw talent for a open mic drop.
The drop was cool though snooz, if i didnt know you could write better I would judge it by that criteria. Even simple drops like these need powerful emotion , a touch of shocking cold heartedness not found in the average Thug.Now quit playing and drop one of those epic pieces I know you got stashed away ....LOL!! Quit being greedy lmao!!
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