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    Posted: 10 June 2010 at 10:48am
jus showin niggaz i can get lyrical lol
 
Imma wordsmith, use hot vocals to forge on point lyrics
That get u high n raise spirits when u get near it an hear it
Peers is captivated how I rap n say shit
But if my ass does make it, doubt i'll get congratulated
Cause niggaz always have to hate shit
Try to let em hear somethin, they too busy showin u crap that they did
But thats ok bitch, you cats get slain quick
Yall should quit writin, recording an anything rap pertains with
Im sick of hearin about ya broads an ya car doe(door)
Its funny pussies always got the most balls an bravado
FUCK YALL is my motto, Im callin the shots hoe
So dont stall if we brawl or you'll fall like a pothole...
..was under ya feet. MCs dont want it wit me
I'll kill em all een if u come wit hundreds of fleets...
..of weak paper thin rappers for me to punch holes thru
I steer clear of queers but bitch, fear controls you
Here! Come show Snooz what makes you think you rap so nice
Who ever told ya that had they do-rag wrapped too tite
Slap you twice for breathin, livin an being born
I gotta cold heart but deez fire lyrics keep it warm
Niggaz on stage wit shirts off, PLEASE! keep em on
Next thing you know you bitches gon try to let us see ya thong
Speakin on those, chickens who be cluckin n fuckin
Suckin somethin for nothin then go home touchin n clutchin
Yall should be shot on site. Hoes must be the dumbest
Or put a pillow over they gut an get ta punchin they stomach
But dont leave no bruises, or you doin 72..
..Hours, Showers wit fags cuz YO bitch was sexin a dude
But I guess that Im thru murdering fake mcs
Using ya time testin Snooz is just a waste to me

eazy

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Originally posted by $n00z $n00z wrote:


Im sick of hearin about ya broads an ya car doe(door)
Its funny pussies always got the most balls an bravado
FUCK YALL is my motto, Im callin the shots hoe
So dont stall if we brawl or you'll fall like a pothole...
..was under ya feet. MCs dont want it wit me


gully!

i fucks with the new niggas, lol
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preciate it chain. you got some tite shit yaself so comin from u thats a big compliment lol
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Some of it lived up to the title but not all... needs more of a surprise element in the form of something creative/inventive/standout original
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Imma wordsmith, use hot vocals to forge on point lyrics
That get u high n raise spirits when u get near it an hear it
Too 80's for me my brotha
Peers is captivated how I rap n say shit
But if my ass does make it, doubt i'll get congratulated
real talk but kinda simple
Cause niggaz always have to hate shit
Try to let em hear somethin, they too busy showin u crap that they did
LOL!! Nice.....this is the kind of bar that needs no dressing up
But thats ok bitch, you cats get slain quick
Yall should quit writin, recording an anything rap pertains with
mm hmm...okay...not spectacular but ok. I suggest you throw in some more complexity and add a bit more aggressive momentum
Im sick of hearin about ya broads an ya car doe(door)
Its funny pussies always got the most balls an bravado
I like this one...wasnt expecting the ending...see that how you should come out the gate my brotha snooz
FUCK YALL is my motto, Im callin the shots hoe
So dont stall if we brawl or you'll fall like a pothole...
..was under ya feet. MCs dont want it wit me
Nice how you sped up the momentum right here.
I'll kill em all een if u come wit hundreds of fleets...
no....fleets didnt work
..of weak paper thin rappers for me to punch holes thru
I steer clear of queers but bitch, fear controls you
another straight forward bar that came cool
Here! Come show Snooz what makes you think you rap so nice
Who ever told ya that had they do-rag wrapped too tite
Slap you twice for breathin, livin an being born
I gotta cold heart but deez fire lyrics keep it warm
Niggaz on stage wit shirts off, PLEASE! keep em on
Next thing you know you bitches gon try to let us see ya thong
LOL!! I like that last bar
Speakin on those, chickens who be cluckin n fuckin
Suckin somethin for nothin then go home touchin n clutchin
Yall should be shot on site. Hoes must be the dumbest
Or put a pillow over they gut an get ta punchin they stomach
But dont leave no bruises, or you doin 72..
..Hours, Showers wit fags cuz YO bitch was sexin a dude
But I guess that Im thru murdering fake mcs
Using ya time testin Snooz is just a waste to me
I noticed alot of refrences that most cats here prolly wont relate to.A bit of southern dialect also.....I think you did pretty well snooz......I see you held back and just jotted some of this....next time you could prolly go ahead and drop a monster like that LA name droppin piece bro.

This one here tho......ok....not your best but still an okay read.

eazy


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Oh and I might add.....punches need more power bro.....your strong suit here was the more simplistic bars and the rest was really subpar....far beneath the work i've seen you do in the past.

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Decent drop $n00z. I liked this bar the best and it flowed with the rest really well >>>> "FUCK YALL is my motto, I'm callin the shots hoe, so don't stall if we brawl or you'll fall like a pothole

Not the usual $n00z drop I've seen but still a nice verse. Good job kid. Smile

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