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    Posted: 06 September 2010 at 7:28pm
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due in 5 days from this post by PM to me.  Do not post in here.
first to 3 or whoever is winning by 5 days wins.
Any explained vote counts
No shows will not be tolerated.
 
 
 
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Manc

I aint having all this Beast Unit name calling and shit.
They're still under construction man, leave em be! SMH

You're all fuckin' cruel - concocting jeers to pester old men
cuz Shawn's a nice people, once ya really get to know them
& so what, he has mixed feelins', gets mad and ducks a-bout
"yall" should give him more credit, I mean, he's had enough accounts!
guys a BEAST, didn't you know? his lines are ice cold and rare
he'll attack you - then cry - just like a Bi-polar Bear
G's aight though, so there! leave him alone hoes & slide on
he can ride flows, I swear! I heard his no-show with Ikon!
plus J-Dry's cool, but has a glass jaw so don't swing
it's not his fault Katrina was the last broad to blow him
don't scratch roar emotion - J, ignore em, It's whatever mate
stay under BU's wing, I heard that's where they keep the feather-weights,
I'll set em straight, you're old school like an 80's Thunder T-Kettle
& from N.O - so naturally, your grades are under C-Level
it's coolio with me bro - just play the geek and watch votes
there hate's almost as blatant as your fake beef with Kosmo

 
 

Lucky D
Even though you ain't hot these dudes are straight flame
J ain't got nothin' and Big proves he lacks game
From bein' a Not Killah to Bitch U-Are dudes crush ya spot
11-20 combined record proves lyrical beasts U-not
Talk shit with no back up then retreat when you get exposed
Back pedal faster than Gardener when I-Kon made you a ho
We already know BU is on there own dicks like Chokin' Bones
J's verses are like New Orleans they ain't nothin' but Broken Homes
No hatersville gets killed ya get smashed when testin' fate
There is no hatin' on you fucks...ain't got nothin' for us to hate! (Ya Weak)
All your verses are weak..your audio is a straight joke
Game tryed to break tha Chain..but tha Chain left ya Broke
In this tourny J's gonna end up like his man..a dude wearin' pink
Had his ass on Kos's dick so much that ya votes againts O didn't make us blink*
Guess I'm hatin' on ya'll, thats what ya say when ya get crushed
Ya Beast Modes a joke..ya just got fucked like a preachers slut
 
 

**everytime someone votes or says anythin' againts Game or J or BU its always hate..

* All of Beast Unit voted for Kos againts O...hard dick riding.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
J504
I beat these bitches with a bat, Man! – Robbin’ swag as I swing
On this Dynamic Duo of …… not a goddamn thing! 
2 Face Mr.J’s leavin’ Harvey Dent’d - repenting behind his bars dilemna
heart hardly in it - leave you 2 Harley-Quinns barred from winning 
Lines rich like Bruce Wayne bruise Manc in text that hits him well 
he’ll leave pissed as hell from risks that failed like when Orion made a Christian bail
Harvey ’s flipped like a Lucky coin tipped in the breeze - so bitch please
I’m sweeping every Cat., woman - I Got’tham down on their knees
I'll leave "A couple slain" in this Alley of Crime...
but I won't sound like a newscaster deliverin' lines
(POW!) Fuck with this E.Nygma and get stuck with the stigma
(BAM!) Manc’s gonna lose more rank, when they flashin’ my signal
And I’d be remiss not to mention the Lyricist’s henchman: Composition
Won’t dismiss from this mission envisioned ‘til their whole sinister crew is imprisoned
Luck and Manc’s blood getting spilled, cause my guild can’t be outskilled
Just chill and be thrilled that “I fucking hate The Man of Steel” …cause that shit for real woulda killed.
 
 
 
 
Big Game didnt not send in a verse so Manc and Lucky advance...
 
Ill leave this open for feed, sorry J
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Oh, my expos got left out...
 
 
 
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Robbin’ – Batman’s sidekick (stealing)
Dynamic Duo – comic name for pairing of Batman & Robin
2 Face – Batman villain “Harvey Dent” (to face)
Harvey – Lucky D’s last name (Dent’d – dented)
Harley Quinn – Joker’s female sidekick (from “harlequin” =clown, buffoon)
Mr. J – Harley’s nickname for Joker (J = J504)
Bruce Wayne – Batman’s identity
Christian, Bail – Christian Bale played Batman (bail = slang for “leave”)
Cat., Woman – Catwoman is a Batman villain (Cat. Short for “category”)
Batman is “The Dark Knight Detective” (I did the “detective” work on Comp lol)
Harvey Dent decides on crimes by flippin’ a “Lucky” coin
Bruce Wayne's parents were a "couple who were slain" in Crime Alley 
E.Nygma – Batman villain “Riddler’s”  real name is Edward Nygma (enigma)
The Bat Signal – a light with Bat logo that calls Batman into action
 
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Any feed? Unhappy
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