Open Mic: unfinished... damn.

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    Posted: 16 April 2011 at 1:10am
walken through the jungle, avoiden every booby trap
searching for these rubies hopin they will truly last
but jewlery snaps, as an increase of beauty caps
lifes underpriced, the opposite of movie snacks
cuz if you dont take advantage of every skill
you posses, then you dont have any will
take life by the horns and ride it to the bank
and make, a name, that nobody can take
create an empire bigger then the roman army
blast haters with the words that are spoken darkly

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this was ok.. it flowed well and the was balance.. the content does'nt interest me.. but who knw someone may like it.. but other than it's good as it is...  
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