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Kid Kane
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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 1:10am |
walken through the jungle, avoiden every booby trap
searching for these rubies hopin they will truly last but jewlery snaps, as an increase of beauty caps lifes underpriced, the opposite of movie snacks cuz if you dont take advantage of every skill you posses, then you dont have any will take life by the horns and ride it to the bank and make, a name, that nobody can take create an empire bigger then the roman army blast haters with the words that are spoken darkly |
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Rameez
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this was ok.. it flowed well and the was balance.. the content does'nt interest me.. but who knw someone may like it.. but other than it's good as it is...
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