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    Posted: 27 June 2011 at 2:07am
Black lights make things glow in the dark
At the time of the GTA game demo - it was the most graphic ever



I rep INC so my pen-ance is essentially demented
my sins are unassailable, not meant to be repented
my style is tenacious, d-fensive I am now
I jack black lights, sit underneath em to stand out
glowing with a dark pungent aura, I've gotta hate
oscilate my cock & drop the Fossil-gades with lots of weight
pound for pound, I'll bet my bottom dollar I'm uniquely great
my freakish ways are what make this demo graphic - G T A
ILLER than apothecary customers, morose in jokes
closing quote, "I'm like an Aardvark when I dig holes in blokes"








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This was nice, i would have liked to see a little more but the jack black line was nice. You should said something about your whiteness or some color that actually glows under a black light. Just something i woulda done
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Manc Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 June 2011 at 8:50am
Thanks for reading but dude........ I could only do 10 lines cuz thats what the rules say. Its a word comp - not a usual type of OM

Oh - and the glow/black light shit is like a metaphor for me shining


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Any votes on this lads, before this weeks ends??
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Dope use of the words this week mate
Looks like its gonna be just us 2 though?
Opener was pretty cool an the Jack Black shiz was clever
I'd say you worth a 9.5 on this one

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The Jack Black/ Tenacious D wordplay was dope as shit. Clever use of this week's words and excellent concept linking as well - deserves a 10.  
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