Rebirth 2012: rd2: Steven T. Guidry vs Slick

 

Stevie aint even needing 16 to crush this lame poser,

Bitch how you get KO’d by RAM?  ß THAT SHIT is game over.

I claim your son aint yours and that your bitch Juan-ed beside you

And let me remind you: you get to be a vet, when the vets co-sign you

This lame thinks he is untouchable…cuz he been on the site for a minute?

When this fake wouldn’t have a punch if his arm had Tourettes in it

So he has gotta resort to changing rules as a form of self encouragement

You cheating bitch.  How the hell you going to battle and mod in the same tournament?

Shady bitch stacking brackets, proof of your faggot tactics,

But Steve builds death like a carpenter of caskets

Easy to murder ya, you got more no shows than IKON’s furniture

Easily disturbing ya, serving curb kicks to this little pricks jaw curvature

You lose cuz you suck. Then make fuck you threads to cast blame?

Instead of seeing how every one of your verses has the same rhyme scheme? (that’s lame.)

So call J5 Kosmosis, duck Manc, duck Ram, cheat, bitch, and stand for every thing I hate

While I sit back and win when I ask you to prove you’ve actually sold real estate.

 

Bitch.

 

Hmmm...

"Steven" - Some of the lines were a bit too long & some of the rhymes were a bit tenuous - most were simple - however, you got some decent punches in there, using decent personals on him...I liked that tourettes line, didn't like the 'builds death' one so much...overall, it was a bit 'in between' for me...there wasn't anything amazing in there, and some of it was a bit hyperextended...think it would've been a good verse overall had some of your punches been a bit choppier...best two examples of that were the rhyme scheme & modding the tournament, both had potential to be very solid, but were just 'ok' because they didn't get to the point quick enough...good setup lines in both of those though.

So yeah, I'd say it was a borderline solid verse...could have been more fluid in places & you had a couple of fillerish punches (jaw curvature) & one's that weren't as good as they could've been coz they were stretched...apart from that it was good, just a shame you didn't bring it all together.

XTC - Your opener definitely showcased you fluidity advantage, liked the style of running across the first line into the second...however, as a punch it would've been better if you weren't dropping the same time as him, that kind of punch is much better if you drop straight away on the battle I always think...plus I didn't like how you've had basic rhymes in your first four lines...emotional bitch was a good setup, but the end punch is a bit blah...next punch was ok, decent idea but again I didn't really think it came off for you...I get the idea, and it's true enough...but I think you need to be going at him harder than that. Next punch was good, nice personal & connection with the setup line as well...better, but still a simple rhyme...at least you had the 29/surprise rhyme in there as well which added a bit to it...next punch was decent, good idea but again I felt like you could've thrown that harder in his face (and if you're going to call someone out for using one syllable rhymes you should make more effort to demonstrate a more advanced rhyme scheme yourself!!!)...so yeah, while it still landed it was a bit like the opener where it lost some of the impact for me...you need to be consistently throwing multis at him to maximise the impact of that punch! Juan punch, didn't like it at all...geek filler was good, but the punch was ehhh...closer was decent

For me, felt like you've missed a relatively easy opportunity to progress here...Kos left the door open for you, all you really had to do with drop a few heavy punches, with a decent rhyme scheme and make sure you didn't miss any punches and you were through the door...but for me you didn't deliver that, you brought a simple rhyme scheme (really not much between you & Kos there)...had a couple of punches that I felt you could've done better with (similar to Kos, but at least his were because he stretched the line...you just didn't execute them properly)...plus you tailed off towards the end when you hadn't done the job properly.

Therefore, it makes it a hard one to call...read it twice now and still not really sure which way to call it. Re-reading it you can see that Kos has a solid first half to his verse & then tails off a bit with the carpenter (though I really liked the way the filler line on that flowed) towards curvature, then he closes it out with two decent lines...whereas going back through XTC's I can see that he dips in the middle (pussy for dick to simply pathetic - though the second was still ok) before having a better bar & then tailing off again right towards the end...

Since I've got to pick, I'll go with "Stevie" aka definitely not Kos. I think it was there for XTC to win but he didn't bring enough strength in his punches consistently...therefore even though Kos tailed off in part of his verse, it wasn't fatal like it perhaps could have been against a stronger verse. Felt he punched more & harder in the verse and in the end, that's what got him the win.

Vote = "Steven"

lol this was close battle though