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    Posted: 13 November 2003 at 3:33am

a yo im straight from da street//

gotta pretend 2 b blind jus ta get sum change 2 eat//

got a pair of ol skool kicks on mah feet//

and bitch on tha floor is where i sleep//

all ya niggas still beefin wit me//

ya niggas wont let me be//

2 me all ya niggas spit tha same//

straight out da dictionary//

AND ITS GETTIN FUCKIN LAME//

clamin yall dont like mah rhymes//

then i see its been looked at over a hundred times//

ha who u tryna kid//

i dont give a fuck wut yall say//

imma stay da same//

yall can follow da rest//

but then dont bitch when im on top cuz im da best//

yall bitchs would fail a gangsta test//

cuz all yall lie//

yall neva even seen da inside of a jail//

so stop tellin lil fairy tales//

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2003 at 8:23pm
Blah.. simplistic, mediocre, fake thug shit

This verse has absolutely nothing to recommend it

Except, if I wanted to laugh at someone whos horribly wack.........

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 November 2003 at 11:04pm
if u wanted 2 laugh at sumfin wack y dont u write a verse.HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! talkin bout mah freestyles when yo shit is straight up GARBAGE!!!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHA
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 November 2003 at 11:20am

 

Keep it rolling D, these dicks no shit, ur style is aggressive but who gives a shit.

 

Peace out!

 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 April 2017 at 6:49am
Bad ass rhymes homie don't let them get you down
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 April 2017 at 7:03am
Yah? Really? A thread 14 years old?
#Bananas

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 April 2017 at 5:29am
He got more reactions than this

http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/the-lycantropic-life_topic44835.html
http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/rapper-t-vs-schematic-horrorcore-02_topic45919.html
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 April 2017 at 5:32am
one of the best open mics i have ever seen. the word play and flow was just unbelievable. dude is a fuckin LEGEND 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 April 2017 at 5:56am
I'm all for people feeding stuff that is older. But this is a bit excessive. Feed stiff that is more relevant, something the writer might actually take some from it.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 April 2017 at 1:21pm
Yo double lol...I don't know man but my advice to You is just craft the way You know how,but You a bit cocky tho you remind me of that jaz cat kid he was a bit cocky too but he vanished lol...I dunno why so don't ask you got skill tho bruh peace!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 April 2017 at 2:26pm
Originally posted by DOUBLE DOUBLE wrote:

a yo im straight from da street//

gotta pretend 2 b blind jus ta get sum change 2 eat//

(I feel you. Gotta get those macronutrients in to fuel your body for the grind).

got a pair of ol skool kicks on mah feet//

and bitch on tha floor is where i sleep//

(I'm liking the execution here. You sleep on the floor and are not happy about that fact, so you up the aggression and anger by starting the line with 'bitch'. Raw)

all ya niggas still beefin wit me//

ya niggas wont let me be//

(14 years later that shit could not be more true. LA has yet to reach the peak it did when you walked among us).

2 me all ya niggas spit tha same//

straight out da dictionary//

(Yeah I prefer words that aren't in the dictionary to be honest).

AND ITS GETTIN FUCKIN LAME//

clamin yall dont like mah rhymes//

(Passion, I love it. You are like the Daniel Day Lewis of writing rhymes. You ooze charisma).

then i see its been looked at over a hundred times//

ha who u tryna kid//

(You see right through the bullshit and tell it like it is. Gotta respect that).

i dont give a fuck wut yall say//

imma stay da same//

(Definitely. Why would you need to elevate when you have already reached the highest pinnacle imaginable).

yall can follow da rest//

but then dont bitch when im on top cuz im da best//

(Even Ali had his haters and doubters).

yall bitchs would fail a gangsta test//

cuz all yall lie//

(Rule #1 of being a true gangsta is to never lie. Even to police).

yall neva even seen da inside of a jail//

so stop tellin lil fairy tales//

(Your word is law. I'll let everyone know).


Well you might be dead or something but I'll leave you feed anyway. Overall this was almost so dope that it was beyond my comprehension. The subtle details mixed with the raw emotion gave this so many layers of flavour that it was a full on assault on all my senses. I feel like I have just taken a mixture of LSD, DMT, peyote and mescaline and visualised every sub atomic particle in existence from here to the edge of the universe and beyond. My eyes are open but my mouth is shut as I will continue to study your work. I think you may have achieved the much fabled skill of rapping in the 4th dimension and for that I salute you. I am truly humbled and may commit suicide as a testament to your unreachable status.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 April 2017 at 3:17pm
I see the young kids around here still gangsta!

Verse was boring, be real and origonal
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 April 2017 at 3:18pm
Holy fuck I'm locking this.

Dude hasn't logged in since 2005, we can all be more productive with our time
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