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Cee-Jay Outlaw 
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 Topic: Round 2 - Trizzy Tre Vs Kay BPosted: 30 April 2013 at 10:18pm |
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16 Lines Verses Submitted to me
Good Luck
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Trizzy Tre
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Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
Posted: 01 May 2013 at 3:06pm |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 2:41pm |
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Need both
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:37pm |
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My verse is in...
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 07 May 2013 at 7:41pm |
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got both, will drop after deadline
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 9:56am |
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Kay
*Claimed he was sending origonal verse, but the one he posted mentioned his opponent not showing up...AFTER he had no-showed ** Kept pm'n me about closing his battles Here via default, so don't relax or ya lost this Ima damn mod, it's only right that i add to your losses.. Shadow boxed ya way into round 2, sick of this bitch Check his avy, you know this fags just used to kiss-in a pic Script's wrote, n like ya verses on paper, gettin' ripped up Like a lonely orphan-aged kid, desperate to be picked up Ya see this kid claimed he had a "Beast of a verse ready" Just prayed his opponent didn't show, n make him disperse early Had an extra eleven day's, Tre don't feel so sore What happened tre?..Is this really all that practice made? Call him shit prison food, cause im stormin' in n smashin' trays Searching my profile, but i won't be bruised n sore Cause here's a prediction, you'll bring NOTHING not used before Journey's over Tre, face facts, iv spoke, it's done An' dont worry, No need to even pm me to close this one** |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 9:57am |
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Trizzy
BARZ… Ayo listen… Ur dying today! wit those same old schemes never do to improving, foolish.. Cuz I’ve seen better dialog between actors in porno movies muted! We’re confused kid, when ur battle activities nonexistent n late like a curfew… Cuz he’s no Doctor yet with all those ‘patients’ its still not a virtue! You’re the worst dude! I’ll body this man, he’ll feel the back of my hand..…. Cuz you never ‘come wit FIRE’ …..Proof he’s just a flash in the pan! Ur never battling man! You’re losing time as your moves decline… Cuz like bad phone customer service, you miss-direct us though your lines! So fuck this! My haymakers lay fakers ur a weak vet, I know that he’s shook… When his punches are going ‘south paw’ proving you can’t pen to write hooks! * His barz goin over my head? That’s absurdly, when I’m willing n worthy.. Cuz the only time “Kay B-on me” is if I'm wearing a Kentucky Wildcats Jersey! Time to burry this TRASH, smash his face then I’ll throw you around this place… Proving you’re just like my signature,…cuz having you a round’s a waist! (waste) R.I.P. Kay B! Now Trizzy he’ll fear, but know one cares that I’ll dead this queer.. Cuz just like Lil Wayne in the 90’s, when you die not one person will shed a tear! *** * Right hooks/write hooks ** Kay Beyond me/Kay B on me *** In the early 90’s Lil Wayne didn’t have tear drop tattoo’s on his face |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 12:56pm |
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Kay- You came very professional with this, considering that you've not been on your battling shit for a while. You were very consistent with the structure, whilst giving those solid and subtle personals. The Kiss-in bar, prison food bar and the closer were very dope to me. Original and hit him where it hurt.
Tre- You came with a solid verse too, but it lacked personals by and large. I liked the Kay B in bar, but whilst it was nice writing, it didn't really smack him about, more made him go 'ah, that's a clever way of using my username', you know what i'm saying? Your flow was on point, maybe even more than Kay's to be honest, and in particular the customer service bar was dope as fuck.. But it was all very general, so even when you were using some nice lines, because of the lack of being 'direct', I had to sometimes remind myself that this was a verse directly at Kay. Both were dope, but for being more direct and getting those personals in.. MVGT- Kay B Keep up guys.
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 08 May 2013 at 1:11pm |
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Yeah this was a nice battle
Tree some nice rhymes here but def lacking that personal feel Kiki summed it up very well Kay you done a fire verse here man That smashing trays play was nice Great execution throughout for a confident win....looking deadly Vote Kay b Props to both |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:21am |
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I'm sorry his verse was horrible. And you want personals? Read my first 4 bars. Fuck out ta here dick riders
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fuckoff
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:46am |
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Ur dying today! wit those same old schemes never do to improving, foolish..
Cuz I’ve seen better dialog between actors in porno movies muted! i dunno if this is a set out rhyme scheme he always sticks to, i dunno, imo not a personal. but thought muted porn was funny as fuck We’re confused kid, when ur battle activities nonexistent n late like a curfew… Cuz he’s no Doctor yet with all those ‘patients’ its still not a virtue! he doesnt battle often, i will assume is the personal here, though i will say this is a statement not a punch, and doesnt clown him at all.. tbh, i get the patients/patience play. aside from him being a doctor and im pretty sure he aint. i dont get how this is personal. personally wasn feelin this bar You’re the worst dude! I’ll body this man, he’ll feel the back of my hand..…. Cuz you never ‘come wit FIRE’ …..Proof he’s just a flash in the pan! really cant see the personal in this tbh, that bar was as generic as it gets could be used on anyone Ur never battling man! You’re losing time as your moves decline… Cuz like bad phone customer service, you miss-direct us though your lines! again generic. i do think it was a cool play, but dont think it comes off as a punch. im not a hater or dickryder, jus think you over reactin a lil, i liked your verse it was solid, and woult take alot people ive read on here but. mvgt to kay. first bar was funny and strong, 3rd 4th n 5th bars were hard hitting personal punches the 6th had a nice play n the closer was a another hard hitting personal. nice multis all the way through, flow was solid. if you cant see you lost this battle somethings wrong |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 2:13am |
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I'm sorry but using mod emails as personas in battlel could be the biggest homo thing I have seen in online text battling.
Embarrassing you'd go to that extent. |
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fuckoff
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 2:19am |
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it sorta looks like your catchin feelings man. anythings game.
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 2:21am |
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Its weak anyways you look at it going that route. All good. But weak.
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 6:35am |
Ha ha Stop fuckin crying Ya cocksucker |
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 09 May 2013 at 9:55am |
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Tre. Your first two bars could've been said to A LOT of people, not that they're not nice, but they're also NOT personal.
In the nicest way possible man, stop bitching. You're a nice and humble dude with a lot of people behind your elevation, don't spoil it cos you feel hurt by what's been used in a battle. This is why people don't vote.
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 10:29am |
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Tre, quit the bullshit
2-0 Kay |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 11:06am |
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That's a 3KO my friend
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The original comeback kid
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 11:07am |
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i only count two votes... Kiki and Spume...
unless FuckOffs is hidden in there AND IT WAS Nice one for the spot Dress 3KO to Kay Locked. |
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