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Cee-Jay Outlaw 
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 Topic: Battle for 3rd - Kiki Vs SpumePosted: 28 May 2013 at 5:15pm |
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Due Monday 10th June Midnight BST
Same as before 16 Lines 8Bars Blind Drops to me Good Luck Fellas
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 05 June 2013 at 3:35pm |
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Just to say Spume, I PM'd my verse a few days ago, because I knew i'd be filming on the couple of days around the deadline.. So whenever you're ready, i'm ready.
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 8:52am |
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Ok brother mine is done on paper
Will try and get typed up and sent to cj today Good luck fam |
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 06 June 2013 at 10:19am |
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 06 June 2013 at 12:18pm |
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You too man. There's nothing really on this, no pressure, no stakes, so it's all love and fun.
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 10 June 2013 at 4:09pm |
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KIKI
Hi, i'm Ciaran.. And I have a problem with Spume.. My names ALWAYS in this faggots mouth, Spume seems- To use Ki, but it's first names- So I choke you 'til you 'Spu C', Sue me.. You're on my crew, but dudes, this loons odd! I'll assume Spume's LI.. But what's he?.. Youth Squad? My God! I didn't know he was us, how's he in our lane? Like an artist with Parkinson's, he's barely in the frame, He's scary in his brain, but it'll hurt till he works out he's food, Come out your shell.. Turtle's more relevant in LI than you! May I remind you, that you got beat by a Kay, so maybe next- You'll be beat by me, relieved by a 'kk' like a lazy text, Aint he cool.. In his 30's, this turds a fucking absurd waste, Kids starvin' cos of the internet bill.. 'BUT IT'S 3rd PLACE!' It's sure hate, but then this loser steps to a higher plan, Cos the only Ben to inspire the Web, was in Spiderman.. *For 'non-UKers'.. Weatherspoons is a huge chain of cheap restaurants, and they have tables with sachets of sauces on.. Poor people/Students sometimes take them home, cos they're free.. *His name's Ben. |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 10 June 2013 at 4:09pm |
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SPUME
Ki voted Spume into the final, so you know he's done heard'a me Now I'm kicking that ass thru his spinal, performing Ki hole surgery These lethal cuts will murder Ki! Wannabe actors a dead bastard No Oscar!..... Nope he aint even moving from this red carpet Lookin all Lee Rigby to ya folks up north I'll send em a corpse cos you fake beef product like that next job...back end of a horse Ki pretends he's a force, noob slayin! and he reckons thats firing spare me the dribble, Pro's stop Kiks in the field like Beckham retiring Brother catch a cracked skull bone, no respecting how you murk squires S'why I aint fitna fixin his dome when bringing lead teh church Spirez drive by shootin a Kiki Spirez verse dead, better than dress to kill did! after I take out the waist.....theres no supporting his chest teh field shit its that lets be real shitt! I've stopped kiks like I've stepped on his balls cos shitting on his whole movements the only way I'll let him go fourth Poet jog on back to the city of gators, you been dealt with ya bitch not rocking my nikes though! I already gave you enough belts with my fist |
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 10 June 2013 at 4:30pm |
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LET IT BEGIN!!
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The_Guy
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Posted: 10 June 2013 at 5:29pm |
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I've read both verse about three times each to try and pick up on each personal, punch, and nameplay or wordplay so that I can give the more fairest vote possible...so here it is
Kik I liked your verse and I especially liked your closing bar and how his kid is starving but its only 3rd place...you threw some decent punches and some decent personals Spume I also liked your verse but I liked your verse a little better...each bar was a decent punch and each followed one another...I especially liked the no oscar line and the chesterfield line...again some nice punches and personals and internal rhymes helped with the flow of the verse Overall a good battle between two good writer's I gonna give my vote to spume by an inch....hope this was explained enough stay up guys
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 10 June 2013 at 5:31pm |
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Yeah man, no worries, I know you're a fair vote.
1-0 to Spumanator.
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 11 June 2013 at 7:00pm |
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Upping!
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 11 June 2013 at 8:07pm |
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Dope battle kiki
Anyone wanna? |
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DressToKill
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Posted: 12 June 2013 at 4:05pm |
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Kiki - you always seem to bring an original outlook on dissing your opponent. I respect that a lot, but you sacrificed your quality by using forced set up rhymes. Like "this loons odd", it wasn't fitting and I know you know that, I also felt like the first half of your verse wasn't as good as the last half. Consistency is hard to maintain but in a tight battle it can be a deal breaker. Though I must say that your closer was a fucking beast, great note to end on! I liked the verse, it just needed some fine tuning in a few areas.
Spume - you started a lot better than Kiki IMO. The opener was clever and aggressive, I really liked the tone of it. The beckingham bar was another goodie, but then you fell off a little in the middle with the church bar but quickly picked back up. I felt that you were more consistent in this battle, the quality of punches was the same but you had more. And for that.. Vote : Spume, good battle guys |
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The original comeback kid
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 12 June 2013 at 5:10pm |
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Thanks for taking the time dress and guy
Much appreciated |
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spume corrupt
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Posted: 13 June 2013 at 8:17pm |
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Anyone?
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O Block
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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 9:46pm |
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Good battle yall, Kiki ..
Aint he cool.. In his 30's, this turds a fucking absurd waste, Kids starvin' cos of the internet bill.. 'BUT IT'S 3rd PLACE!'
I couldn't picture dis bar comin out of any rappers mouth, And to add on that that it was corny, Callin him a turd? Spume: I think you took this battle by a mile, Good job bro.. MVGT: Spume |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 20 June 2013 at 6:38pm |
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upping this for Kiki, Since O Block is Suspended I will leave it down to him to agree whether this vote is fair or to disallow it and the score stand at 2-0 to Spume.
If Kiki Deems it fair, spume will win though if it is to be disallowed i would like Spume to also confirm he's ok with it being disallowed as the vote also concerns him aswell... Personally i think its a fair vote, and loads of battles before now have been closed with a Suspended voter having it included, but as this is a tourney i'm going to leave it down to the participants to decide the fate of the battle!
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Kiki Spirez
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Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 20 June 2013 at 6:42pm |
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Spume has got this anyway, with other battles, i'd fight this shit til the end, but we spoke before over pm, about how this is for fun, nothing at stake anymore, so it'd all be love. I'll admit that Spume slightly got me on this, so even though O is a cunt, and puts his vote like a cunt, I know the next 10 people would have the same eventual vote. So yeah, congrats man, you know we support each other, and it's been a pleasure battling in a tourney against a fellow LI.
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 20 June 2013 at 6:46pm |
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Nice going Ki,
Spume takes 3rd Place, good battle lads... great way to see the tourney out :) Locked.
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