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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 August 2013 at 12:55pm
My bad, 4-2
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 August 2013 at 10:06am
Really good battle here fellas! Skill was on display here, which made it very difficult to judge.
Both teams came with some great material, but this is a competition.
So, on to the good stuff.....



PB&Cuba

This gay team of homos hate being so-low like KayB in Soho
About to drop a few hits and get forgotten faster than K-Ci and JoJo
A decent opener, good scheme, just felt the punch was lacking.
We'll disgrace Keeks it's no joke, and Dress? We know that this guy sucks
Their team has been second to us since the moment they signed up (co-sign bruh!!)
Thought this was pretty funny, great jab.
We're too potent to size up, our words make the whole game change
While Dress is only champ cos the noobs ain't hearda them old nameplays
Had to scroll the archives on this, Checked valid! lol
I heard LI's 'ride or die' so they on each others genitals quivering
These two pussies grinding on each other more than lesbians scissoring
Again, great jab, not a real hard hitting punch.
The text we're delivering will diminish these faggot's lines
Got Keeks struggling with Dress like auditions for pantomimes
Pretty solid right here, good punch.
Cos we're the golden pros with holy flows like hosepipes in churches
You only punch consistently if Manc's around to ghostwrite ya verses
Hilliarious, damn hilarious!
And since CJ's deleting every post that's embarrassing ya crew
It won't be long until both your verses are vanishing from view
Another solid punch.
And fuck what he said, we didn't need to 'bring our best' to defeat yas
We've brought an end to DK like fuckin dental procedures...
Not a huge fan of your closer


8 bars, each graded on a scale of 1-10, 80 possible.
PB&Cuba score=66/80



DTK

Individually murdered you both..add Kiki, the team is fatal!
The only time Cube is coming on Point is when giving Dean a facial!
Decent opener, not real strong but decent.
Point, he ain't able! Made the L.I. Rejects, needed his own crew!
Musta been recruiting noobs! Cuz he wouldn't battle with his own dudes!! (True!)
Solid punch here, good.ish.
Thirsty for fame! We're a Dukes of Hazard horror remake..General-Lee feared!
Cuba a true champion? How!? He had no title defenses in THREE YEARS!
Not sure about this one's validity.
Plus he already condemned Point! Let me break it down for folks..
Claimed I dropped subpar? I guess my worst is leaving him clowned for jokes!*
Solid closer IMO



KIKI


These days P sways like a Hilsborough fence, forgotten to stand better,
Point S- P.S with an obsession to 'M like the bottom of Stan's letter,
I thought you haf the best opener here.
His man's a 'bland setter', slow drop, known flop.. Ex champ is no martyr
His views hope for Mo' Bots, so I have to beat the Cube like Mo Farah,
A decent jab right here.
A non starter- No title to get docked, and P's free's seem less hot
Sex blocked from their desktop = Couldn't get off soon as the Dress dropped,
I liked this rigjt here, one of the best in the battle.
Let's stop with the bullshit- P has no metal, like I refused to use a piss can,
We'll laugh at lack of PC, like ending a gross explosion joke with 'ISLAM!'
The first line, ehhhhh, the second line saved it. Ok closer.


8 bars, each graded on a scale of 1-10, 80 possibe.
DTK&KiKi Score=69/80



Super close, but in the end........
MVGT-DTK&KiKi
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 August 2013 at 10:31am
4-3, thanks a lot Goose!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 August 2013 at 12:08pm
Thank you again to everyone that's voted for either team. Hottly contested battle, can only be good for LA.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 August 2013 at 7:23pm
Goose, can you add a brief explanation of why you picked DTK and Kiki - as bar breakdowns alone isn't enough to count as explained.
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At least say what you rated each bar
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 September 2013 at 1:32pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 September 2013 at 2:21pm
Keep voting... 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 4:22am
8 bars is really shitty in my opinion...even if its a tag match.  I mean damn  you need room to fucking breathe a little...up the bar limit...no one can show there true skill being held back so much

Ki:  I was a big fan of the transitions throughout ya rhyme to make that flow smooth...I really liked your opening line but the one to follow it to complete the bar I wasn't really feeling so much...the dress dropped line was really nice I loved the whole set up for it as well...at first I didn't understand but then I looked up your Mo' Farah bar and it came out pretty ill....Your closer was really nice and flowed smoothly.. nice way to end it

DTK:  your opening bar was just brutal in my opinion...seriously shit was crazy and set the whole tone for your verse...and the bar that followed was nice and hard hitting as well....The Cuba title defense shit  was killer...I liked how you fucking came with your whole verse...closer was nice as well...overall a dope fucking battle verse....very nice DTK especially in a tournament..

PB & Cuba  Your flow is especially nice in this...that stood out to me...I also like the way you combined the team as a whole in the way the rhyme scheme is but I also wouldn't concider it better either... I like that noob name play line a lot..that was a clever and smooth as fuck way to flip the whole situation...Even tho you diss L.I you know that ain't gonna change the way I vote on battles..now with that being said...the genitals quivering and lebians scissoring bar was funny as hell to me it was comical... that CJ line was nice and hilarious.. I like the vanishing from view finish...I really do think you could have come with a stronger finish tho...it was creative but you should have ended with more of a personal

MVGT KI & DTK

very close battle and it could have went either way....but thats my vote...this was so hard to vote on due to the different formats each team used and it was just close as fuck but I just think DTK & Ki edged it out overall as a team....





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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 12:40pm
4-4, we got a nail biter! Thanks to all the voters so far!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 12:50pm
Although it may depend on Goose coming back. 

Technically it's still 4-3, in Scottys eyes.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 1:29pm
sorry fellas had no idea about the vote thing here.

PB&Cuba

Not taking any credit away from yur drop, it was good, hard even
and if this were an ordinary batte I might have voted differently,
I just felt that you lost focus. This was a 2vs.2 tourney, not a crew battle, not PB&Cuba vs. DTK.
You swung for the fences knockin.out all the spectators, but you barely bruised
KIKI cheeks! My opinion fellas

DTK&KiKi

You guys spread the "hate" out pretty evenly. Just about all of youd jabs and punches
were on target(S). Well rounded verses from both of.you. But id like to reiterate my point, I gave you
the edge because you consistently swung at yur opponents with personals aimed at there invidual status.

AGAIN MVGT DTK&CUBA
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 1:36pm
Thanks for coming back man. 

4-4. 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 1:37pm
I'm assuming that last bit was meant to say 'DTK & Kiki' instead of 'DTK & Cuba' LOL
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 1:52pm
HAHAHA.......ya bruh party foul, my bad lol
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:52pm
alright I hate to be the one to do this but I have to keep it real PB in Cuba entertained they put on a show it wasn't the regular. don't get me wrong keeeks and dress did they thang. I think that defendin his title line by dtk was hot as fuck...keeks i fucks wt u but i wouldnt have really gotten your lines until i read tha expos but maybe its my fault tha lines went over head..but at tha end of tha day...this comes down to which style u perferred...and i loved how pb and cubes came at this...im sorry i caint do a bar for bar or do exact quotes of my fav bars cuz im on this phonen..n its takin me a long time to.write this out...



Mvgt pb &nd cuba

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 02 September 2013 at 9:05pm
Thanks for the vote Sass. No hate. 

PB and Cubes, whilst, if i'm being real, I disliked your conduct in this thread, i'd never deny anyone their dues, well done for a hot verse, and all the best in the final. Peace.
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