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    Posted: 13 September 2004 at 5:33pm
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Carnage Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 11:28am

Everyones in a rush to try and crack this dude
i jus tie up my laces and race right through
dont hesistate when i got a point to prove,
over when u read my spit then your on the evenin news
your 25 and tryin to battle a bunch of teens,
u couldnt do a tight spit if u did it wearin leather jeans
i'll fix mirrors on your eyes so u can see yourself internally bleed,
u can watch me kick ur ass as i twist your head one-eighty degrees
please, i'll kick u higher than a mounties, u say adios more times than Spanish cabbies
wheres your expertise? your no heavyweight, u blow away when i sneeze
dont be distraught, fly you on first battle beater airways no need for a passport
i provide the transport as i flip the script when your brought back to the porte*1
u think u bring heat just cos u wear firetrap we dont wana hear no more cavemen rap
so slow when you react*2, wake up man, so stuck in the past u cant even open a child cap
ur rhymes are getting more tied up than knots, gettin so old u cant even hear a gunshot
im sure u forgot, but remember what happened to the last person who used multis alot?*3


*1 - First battle was with PorteX

*2 - Takes a long time to answer to posts

*3 - Big L - Deceased

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Senor Perfecto Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 3:40pm

ˇYo...!

Everybody's in a fucking rush to try and attack me,
But I'd lap them all easily if we ever met in a track-meet,
I pack heat in my rap-beats as a treat for this sad geek,
He can't keystyle... he started prewriting last week,
He can't squeak or smile with a mile-wide slashed cheek,
He'll have his ass beaten and blasted by a massive gas-leak,
Next time... ask before you try and surpass me,
He acts weak... so I'ma sit in the backseat and let facts speak,
You listen to Backstreet Boys and Busted,
You're happy to eat sweet, poisoned custard,
You should have spit your crap into a toilet and flushed it,
You think all you need is to get in a team and you're trusted...?
My jeans are clean... yours are semen-encrusted,
I spit at your screen and it's seemingly rusted,
You'll break like a seedless grape when I crushed it,
You were butt-raped by your great leader and you loved it...

Adios...

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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote -Orion- Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 3:46pm

Carnage, your flow was OK, I liked the way the structure got longer and longer as it went on and to rap to it was good how it made it climatic, but there was a lot of filler in there, rhymes were simple, wordplay wasn't too effective. You had some jabs but... not your best.

Senor just came with a more solid verse... flow was nice, multis were constant and the rhyme scheme was nice, punches weren't as frequent as you'd have liked, but you had a mocking style, sorta like constant jabs to keep him at arm's length... and it worked.

VOTE: Perfecto

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote 20theTruth Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 September 2004 at 6:18pm
Carnage = good stuff. Flow got a lil mixxd up @ da end stretched
lines..but it still flowed just switched steeze. some alright wordplay but
no hardkore punchez.

Perfecto = tight verse. very nice on the multis. punchez were good. Jus
flowed really good from beginning to end.

v/ Perfecto
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Abstrakt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 September 2004 at 9:36am
Perfecto's multis and flow was amazin!
Wise creative lyrics while still punching
his style is like a mix of Canibus & Guru

Carnage no real lyricism, should work on all
areas before challenging peeps like SP
flow was ok though besides that, it bored me to death!

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