Raw Tactics: (Group B)Senor Vs Carnage |
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
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Posted: 13 September 2004 at 5:33pm |
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Carnage
Superior Member Joined: 23 April 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 315 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-8-1 Form: Unknown |
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Everyones in a rush to try and crack this dude |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
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ˇYo...! Everybody's in a fucking rush to try and attack me, Adios... |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
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Carnage, your flow was OK, I liked the way the structure got longer and longer as it went on and to rap to it was good how it made it climatic, but there was a lot of filler in there, rhymes were simple, wordplay wasn't too effective. You had some jabs but... not your best. Senor just came with a more solid verse... flow was nice, multis were constant and the rhyme scheme was nice, punches weren't as frequent as you'd have liked, but you had a mocking style, sorta like constant jabs to keep him at arm's length... and it worked. VOTE: Perfecto |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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20theTruth
Superior Member Joined: 10 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2155 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 16-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
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Carnage = good stuff. Flow got a lil mixxd up @ da end stretched
lines..but it still flowed just switched steeze. some alright wordplay but no hardkore punchez. Perfecto = tight verse. very nice on the multis. punchez were good. Jus flowed really good from beginning to end. v/ Perfecto |
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no more
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Abstrakt
Standard Member Joined: 23 March 2004 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1702 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 32-17-2 Form: LLNNWW |
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Perfecto's multis and flow was amazin!
Wise creative lyrics while still punching his style is like a mix of Canibus & Guru Carnage no real lyricism, should work on all areas before challenging peeps like SP flow was ok though besides that, it bored me to death! Vote:SP |
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