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    Posted: 21 September 2004 at 10:56am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 September 2004 at 11:08am

Yo... Jacko's nose once started melting on stage, Clipz only got through 'cuz Senor took the piss as he thought he was through 'cuz of the no-show. He asks me for a lot of advice. Brian Clough died of stomach cancer (yesterday), everyone knows about the multiple accounts...

Such is my heat the Mike melts like Jacksons nose, this cat is owned
This bastard would be out if the other rapper'd shown (you KNOW THIS)
The minds in ya crew flopped so I'ma crack the dome (think...)
No chaperones, ya dickrydes unrequited so ya smack ya bone (lol)
Gonna eat this cheesy pussy 'cuz I'm wantin' this
An' I'm not talkin' 'bout givin' oral to Wisconsin chicks
If you ever spat sickness, the mic is ya remedy (get it)
You'll never win this war 'cuz you get ya advice from the enemy (owned)
Ya spit trash hasty, ya raps ain't heat you wack fuck
Gon' blast A-C quicker than overheated adapters (:O)
Defeatin' this cat 'cuz he's cheap an' he lacks guts
Ownin' this geek, he flows in his sleep? With a sheet on his mattress!!!

Finished ...now stay down...

My spits are cancerous, you've tried enough
Stomach this an' you'll die quicker than Brian Clough (ohhhhhhh!)
Orion eradicates this herb for fun
You lie an' bluff but my spits burn lascerations per-ma-nent
You see the grand O rushin'?
Clipz thinks he can key but the grand piano's crushed him
Ya father was shamed  an' beat ya
You're so scared of me an' I know you'd rather've faced ya leader (true)
I'll fuck you up, A-Clipz isn't ready?
Like whenever you try to come hard the most you'll get is a semi!
Outflow me? You left trounced in the water
so not even AnonyClipzDro can account for this slaughter!!! (WHAT?)

. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 September 2004 at 5:27pm

(Quick Lil' Warm Up)
I'll Blast This Fake make him Gasp & Shake
Tie ya Legs to ya Arms then stick a Mast in ya Face

I'll hit you wit Mac Hits & make you do Back Flips
You realy a Wack Bitch, Trying to Attack ClipZ but i Pack Blitz

And wen AnonyClipzDro spits he'll make you Drepressed & Crook
Im Spitting now Guess Who's Shook, Orion'll be Dressed In Hooks

(Taking Over This Tourny)
Whats gona happen, cos its time to Diss the Mole
'Orion' i'll Rip Ya 'Sul'/Soul, open up ya neck & Slit some Holes

Im the 'Welsh One' but i'll be leaving Orion KO'd 'Counting Sheep'
Bitch i'll put you in 'Open Water' like 'Daniel Travis' so he aint the only one 'Drowning Deep'

(Time for you to Go Home)
Killin' you with Tight Types, you cant 'See Me' like you blinded by a Bright Light
But im Quite Nice like Iron Mic on Fight Night, like 'Tyson' Orion Might Bite

Use a Raptor punch & Slit you with Thick Bits 'a Glass
This is Orions Homo'Side/Homicide, He was found 'Dead' with a Dick in His Ass

Lisnen 'Brown Nose' you need to stop Licking IceC's Hole
Some old personals on me man, what happen to ya Spicy Soul

(Walking to the Final Finisher)
Broke ya Arms & its ya Neck Next, Riding Neek & how is Chin Checks Sex
I Wreck Text, Orion ya now Blind so you gona need them star Trek Specs

...Vote Up Fuckers...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 September 2004 at 6:22pm

Lmao...

Orion: Tight fuckin' verse man! Some of those punches had my rolling on the floor. You had a nice selection of multies. Your flow was on point for pretty much all of it, if not all of it. Your punches were funny and were creative. The Michael Jackson one was funny as fuck, lol. I also liked the "If you ever spat sickness, the mic is ya remedy"  line.

A-Clipz: Nice verse. Some played punches though, like the Tyson one, and the brown nose thing. Other than that you had a okay verse. A few multies, not many that flowed fully. Your punches on the whole came strong, some times a little weaker than others, but still hit. You're better now than I've seen in a while. You're elevating a hell of a lot man, congratulations. Keep up the nice spits.

Favourite line #1: Listed above.

Favourite line #2:

"Im the 'Welsh One' but i'll be leaving Orion KO'd 'Counting Sheep" ...Original. lol.

Vote: Orion.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 September 2004 at 6:48am
ok boyz and girls.....
this is much closer than people give clipz credit 4 his audio may sound like a constpaited sheep but he text is getting ill

now orion mate this is not my fav verse from you still dope but the punches did not have the damm factor yours usally have

clipz i loved the sul soul line not many have used orions real name against him well played

orion some nice multis and a lot of personals alough i did not feel all hit clipz hard

but on skill leval and the verse that ticked the most criteria boxes

vote... orion

well palyed clipz u still fucked that orion cat up and funnily i think ur verse wud of won on audio but by no means i recommend u doing it
the punching machine

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 September 2004 at 8:32am
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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 September 2004 at 1:17pm

my vote...

MULTIS: ORION
PUNCHES: BOTH
HUMOUR: ORION
FLOW: BOTH DECENT
PERSONALS: ORION
STRUCTURE: BOTH GOOD
WORDPLAY: ORION

Orion..you never came as hard as normal but you still ripped it up, The multis were the and they mostly flowed well, funny parts had me laffin my ass off,
good imagination and creativity with good punches but could have been harder.

Clipz...I have seen better from you too, you had some good lines and your punches were mostly decent, your flow was slightly off in parts, you have got better but your not upto orions standards just yet.

OVERALL VOTE: -ORION-

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 September 2004 at 4:53pm

this was an orite verse by orion, by orite i mean i expected alot better, he rushed it although there are some nice multis and decent punches, your personals werent hitting as hard as you normally do apart from:

"If you ever spat sickness, the mic is ya remedy (get it)
You'll never win this war 'cuz you get ya advice from the enemy (owned)" -gud line.

Clipz- you are gettin dope but like frank said i dnt recommend you do an audio on it, you spit enough sickness in "one gurl", good verse though best ive seen you do, keep going man, but you aint to orions standards yet....

best line- Walking to the Final Finisher)
Broke ya Arms & its ya Neck Next, Riding Neek & how is Chin Checks Sex
I Wreck Text, Orion ya now Blind so you gona need them star Trek Specs

I liked tha finisher, but orion beat ya, good match im impressed........ stay to txtin

vote : orion

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 September 2004 at 4:54pm
Lock this...
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 September 2004 at 6:58pm
so orion is in the final...

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