Raw Tactics: The final - Orion vs Lawless |
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Topic: The final - Orion vs Lawless Posted: 03 October 2004 at 7:01pm |
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Posted: 03 October 2004 at 7:01pm |
good luck to both
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 07 October 2004 at 11:57am |
I'll battle the winner for the title I'll battle the loser too, title might or may not be on the line. Just set up when this is up. Law and Onion, let me know if you guys want me to vote on this or not. As of now, i'm not, but if you want me to, just let me know. oh, and lawless, check the Renegade Productions page. your beat awaits... |
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Insert something rappy here
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LaWleSs
Standard Member Joined: 01 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 431 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWLLWL |
Posted: 07 October 2004 at 12:03pm |
Yeah i got the beat, i think we shud keep it noc rew votes altho i know youre a fair voter so it doesnt bother me a whole lot..
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 07 October 2004 at 1:18pm |
Yeah Jehu it's best you just don't vote. A comment would be welcome but don't draw a conclusion (if you follow) so that way it doesn't count toward anything and doesn't sway either. 1
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 07 October 2004 at 5:22pm |
cool, cool, so spit, fuckers! I wanna be entertained...
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Insert something rappy here
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:16pm |
Law..
FYI Illa Retired after he lost to me You fear me like CANCER MAN i'll put the FIRE INSIDE U good luck..ones. |
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:16pm |
orions
I really didn't wanna explain anythin' 'cuz it takes the natural feel from the verse - but then I get the feelin' if it costed me I'd regret it... so readin' through the spit in order, here are explanations... Warrior Princess as in Xena, Lucy Lawless, and the winner of this goes to face King Jehu. O is above L on the keyboard. Linda McCartney was a vegitarian (duck the beef). Ws redundant as in his wins to get to the finals mean nothing as he'll lose, and sword's W is silent, hence redundant. Renegade activists in the USA have talked about burning the constitution (Law). Law has criticised my shit before, saying I'm average at best or something to that effect. Bruce Springsteen's AKA is The Boss, and he made a song called Born In The USA, Law and I are both from the UK. Damilola Taylor was a black infant who was stabbed then left to die, he crawled down the street, into his house and up stairs before eventually dying, leaving a long trail of blood behind him. Bobby Moore led England to the football (soccer) World Cup, and died of bowel cancer; as mentioned Law and I are both from England. Lawless recycled lines from an old battle with IceC against me in our first battle, I have no proof as it's been deleted now. L is the last letter in final. Yo... Left you slaughtered an' chin-checked when I fought witcha in text ...1... |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:18pm |
My voice...? I haven't done audios because I don't have the time or space, I've never mentioned my voice anywhere... just thought I'd clear that up... Good luck. |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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LaWleSs
Standard Member Joined: 01 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 431 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWLLWL |
Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:22pm |
Imnot gonna find the thread about that line cus i cant be fucked, its a valid personal tho..
yo EDIT i didnt mean tequila i meant 20TH**** |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:25pm |
That was Frank White punching to BSD, not me...
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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LaWleSs
Standard Member Joined: 01 July 2004 Status: Offline Points: 431 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-5-0 Form: LWLLWL |
Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:28pm |
nah it wasnt anything to do with them, Anyways votes.....no more cloggin |
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Senor Perfecto
Veteran 1st Battle Winner! AM I 'ECK Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: Manchester Status: Offline Points: 3272 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #6 Stats: 66-36-2 Form: WLWLWL |
Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:38pm |
Lawless... simple but effective flow... Good wordplay and punches... Simple rhymes were ok... but attempts at complex multisyllable rhymes were very forced... Orion... transitional rhymes assisted an already effective flow... Rhymes and punches were more original... Vote: Renegade... Adios... |
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20theTruth
Superior Member Joined: 10 August 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2155 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 16-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 12 October 2004 at 12:21am |
**edit my name is 20 "The Truth" haha just to clarify....but commence da votin'...
Lawless = damn kid got skillz, multis were apparent in Some parts, flow was nice and the wordplay was ridiculous. I think ya wordplay is da highlight of ya skillz. Some nice simple rhymes but amped up it wit some complex 1's later and also punchez were good, personals ... ionno cuz O sayin he didnt say that... but whatevz stilla personal to me....*claps* Orion = Big O...Big O...Stealin da WHOLE goddam SHOW....SP wrote all that i think... flow was on-n-off strectched lines has less-syllabic words so it actually worked...punchez innovative -n- creative, vocab flowin out da ASS CRACk...goddam kid muss be walkin dictionary, alliteration-multies were nice touches....last 2 bars ST8 KILL'T IT. damn....propz ....Lawless came really hard and so did O i think Lawless would've beat any 1 else if it wuznt O but yah....propz where propz deserved.... v/ Orion |
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no more
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frank white
Veteran First Audio Battle Winner Joined: 23 April 2004 Location: United Kingdom Status: Offline Points: 1556 Crew: XFade: Phoenix Text Rank: #13 Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LLNWWL |
Posted: 13 October 2004 at 7:57am |
ok my vote
lawless; i take back all i said previously said i think ur dope man i like how you made out you were the underdog and talked about orions easy passage to the final. i really like this verse man keep at it you really diserve the tag elliete orion; now for you i loved you verse even more i love how you put thinks in your verse that me and a man of the world and news can relate 2 and be able to make me laugh at them even sick things like the damiliola line the punches stay frash this time more than in the semi as you new you had to step up. vote .... orion lawless many props to you and i rekon you can also give jehu a run for his money |
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the punching machine
bad boy 4 life biggie smalls was the illest |
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Eternity
Superior Member Joined: 16 July 2004 Location: Vietnam Status: Offline Points: 1656 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-3 Form: NWWWL |
Posted: 13 October 2004 at 9:30am |
Lawless: Simple rhymes, but made to work. Flowed okay. And wordplay and punches were hard hitting. You didn't have much imagination or creativeness, which made you lack in this battle. Well done with this verse. Orion: Nice wordplay, punches were on tact. You have some very creative lines, too. The "O above L" one was very original. Also the finaL one. Flow was on track, multies were there. I'm voting for Orion, because he had, all-in-all, a better verse. Lawless had many of the required elements, and was able to put a good verse up against Orion. But Orion won with a better verse. Vote: Orion. |
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-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Posted: 13 October 2004 at 9:37am |
Well... I think it was closer than 4-0, much like the LMS finals was closer than 3-0... and I'm sure people will have their shit to say as they always do... And for any that applies to, you see the callouts section... Lawless... kinda like Frank said I take back any criticism of ya shiz 'cuz that and other recent ones have been fire... and I think you more than deserve a rematch some time in the future on the fields so that can happen... Thanks for the votes, LA... 1 |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Posted: 13 October 2004 at 12:33pm |
yeah the o-man gets this..
fantastic verses both of you tho. Lawless you can hold your head up high - as you came through a shitty draw to get here. Winner of raw TACTICS!! ORION! |
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