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    Posted: 03 October 2004 at 7:01pm

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 03 October 2004 at 7:01pm
good luck to both
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 October 2004 at 11:57am

I'll battle the winner for the title

I'll battle the loser too, title might or may not be on the line.

Just set up when this is up. Law and Onion, let me know if you guys want me to vote on this or not. As of now, i'm not, but if you want me to, just let me know. oh, and lawless, check the Renegade Productions page. your beat awaits...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 October 2004 at 12:03pm
Yeah i got the beat, i think we shud keep it noc rew votes altho i know youre a fair voter so it doesnt bother me a whole lot..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 October 2004 at 1:18pm
Yeah Jehu it's best you just don't vote. A comment would be welcome but don't draw a conclusion (if you follow) so that way it doesn't count toward anything and doesn't sway either. 1
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 07 October 2004 at 5:22pm
cool, cool, so spit, fuckers! I wanna be entertained...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:16pm
Law..

FYI

Illa Retired after he lost to me
He is seeded 1
I took down many favorites..hes had a easy ride..surprise
"DR"= dickrider..and doctor..abbreviation wordplay
Daze=Days
He wont make audios cus hes scared of his voice, he said so..
He predicted me to win the tourny..lol
Dis-count =discount real easy
Chants=Chance
X-L Lense= Exelence, it truly does work, ahaha, Oversize glasses..
Shakespear wrote word-plays
Batchelors sleep by themselfs..lying.lieing..
Orion is a belt, Cant take a shot at it..its a cloudy night ..get it

You fear me like CANCER MAN i'll put the FIRE INSIDE U
How u gonna STAND A CHANCE dog i RETIRED YOUR IDOL
Sonnin with EACH PUN , Im SCORCHING THIS HERBS STYLE
Gettin rid of SEED ONE like i was ABORTING MY FIRST CHILD
U faced Xx, tequila, a clips? i had to LOOK ROUND AND SAY SHIT
You had a easy run while i TOOK DOWN THE FAVORITES
Im going "to the top" its your fate im CEILING
Your verses nothing but weak structure like run down BUILDINGS
Begged you to lay off my dick..You WORMING ME STILL
Orions always reling on "DR" like the TERMINALLY ILL!
HE STAY INCOMPETANT while im REMAINING DOMINANT
And now u at the "end of ur daze" like REGAINING CONSCEINCENESS!
And we all know that you werent PREPARED FOR THIS BOY
the pussy type, Wont do tracks cus he SCARED OF HIS VOICE!
Smooth when i Inflict the fright, YOU GETTING RIPPED TONIGHT
Dont worry dog at least you PROVED YAH PREDICTION RIGHT!!
I'm SHAKING THIS BITCH NOW till he LAY WIT A FIXED FROWN
"2 for 1 sales" is the only way your MAKING A DIS-COUNT!!
You never leave yah keyboard..cant make friends, are you the WRONG TYPE?
And u "aint got the CHANTS" like Choirs ON STRIKE
You having a wack punch About beating me is PREDICTED
Just hope since then you riders havent been RESTRICTED
Tha-end for you I came thru yah Garden and took down DA-FENCE
Proving you could be carrying Oversize glasses, but cant bring the X-L LENSE (think about it..)
Spit so powerfull the curb shakes..Make yah NERVES BREAK
In battle grounds i SHake-Spears, U still learning basic WORD-PLAYS
I been Ripping cats like you Since 12, Yo..MOVE WIT STEALTH
Think you beatin me? Dog like a "batchelor" your "Lying TOO YOURSELF"
Im slicing thru yah Health You dont want a ROUDY FIGHT
Wont get a good SHOT AT THE BELT, Look ORION its a CLOUDY NIGHT ahahhaha

good luck..ones.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:16pm
orions

I really didn't wanna explain anythin' 'cuz it takes the natural feel from the verse - but then I get the feelin' if it costed me I'd regret it... so readin' through the spit in order, here are explanations... Warrior Princess as in Xena, Lucy Lawless, and the winner of this goes to face King Jehu. O is above L on the keyboard. Linda McCartney was a vegitarian (duck the beef). Ws redundant as in his wins to get to the finals mean nothing as he'll lose, and sword's W is silent, hence redundant. Renegade activists in the USA have talked about burning the constitution (Law). Law has criticised my shit before, saying I'm average at best or something to that effect. Bruce Springsteen's AKA is The Boss, and he made a song called Born In The USA, Law and I are both from the UK. Damilola Taylor was a black infant who was stabbed then left to die, he crawled down the street, into his house and up stairs before eventually dying, leaving a long trail of blood behind him. Bobby Moore led England to the football (soccer) World Cup, and died of bowel cancer; as mentioned Law and I are both from England. Lawless recycled lines from an old battle with IceC against me in our first battle, I have no proof as it's been deleted now. L is the last letter in final.

Yo...

Left you slaughtered an' chin-checked when I fought witcha in text
Ya ain't gettin' a shot at the King whilst you still a Warrior Princess!
Ya oughtta come impress but ya crew just don't flow
I left all-a ya in wrecks 'cept the two that no-showed! (truth)
Don't be tellin' me smashin' this bastard is a felony
You could flip the board but O will still always top L in keys
Ya punches hardly hit, the crunch is ya rydin' party's split
So if you duck the beef I'll kill you quicker than McCartney's bitch
Ya gotcha foot in ya mouth, they only herd ya raw (get it)
My slices leave ya Ws redundant like my words are swords
The wrath I incurred before has left this faggot's curtains drawn
Second battle's turned to War, my third resort is to rep Renegades an' burn the Law
This a certain score, I broke this cat, you far from astonishin'
Stop the quotes n' caps, a turd's still a turd before or after you polish it!
You admonishin' my rap scripture's but they torn this fool's essay
This faggot couldn't be The Boss if he was... BOOOOOOOOORN IN THE USA! :D
Excesses of text vets have set threats an' then been left wrecked
But if I ever swallowed your flows I'd just piss 'em out again as excess!
Whaddaya expect? You failin' kid, even though you probly pre-arranged ya spit
'Cuz I leave more trails of red... than tha stab wounds on Damilola Taylor did (brrrrddat!)
Ya bark is sub-woof, I treble the force, I'm a Renegade, rebel of course
I'll clean sweep this obscene freak like janitors in psychiatric impediment wards (whaaat?!)
You ain't leadin' England to the top of the game, those is foul rumours
That ain't hot shit you droppin' son, you jus' excretin' ya bowel tumours
You've failed fool you're useless, no I won't mail you a new spit
Last time the only thing more stretched than ya bars was ya trail of excuses!
Now watch me strike in our sequel, untouchable, I'll never fight with an equal
I know I've already broken the Law but that doesn't make recyclin' legal! (:O)
Orion slashin' all rivals, watch this cat scratch for survival
Schoolin' ya to organ-eyes ya raps when ya pupils mashed in ya vitals
Whether breakin' records or smashin' the vinyls, I'm King of rappin' recitals
Only claps you have are vaginal, bitch... It's truth that L always comes last in the final!

...1...


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:18pm

My voice...? I haven't done audios because I don't have the time or space, I've never mentioned my voice anywhere... just thought I'd clear that up...

Good luck.
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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:22pm

Imnot gonna find the thread about that line cus i cant be fucked, its a valid personal tho..

 

yo EDIT i didnt mean tequila i meant 20TH****

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:25pm
That was Frank White punching to BSD, not me...
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:28pm

nah it wasnt anything to do with them, Anyways votes.....no more cloggin

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 October 2004 at 5:38pm

Lawless... simple but effective flow...  Good wordplay and punches...  Simple rhymes were ok... but attempts at complex multisyllable rhymes were very forced...

Orion... transitional rhymes assisted an already effective flow...  Rhymes and punches were more original...

Vote: Renegade...

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 October 2004 at 12:21am
**edit my name is 20 "The Truth" haha just to clarify....but commence da votin'...

Lawless = damn kid got skillz, multis were apparent in Some parts, flow was nice and the wordplay was ridiculous. I think ya wordplay is da highlight of ya skillz. Some nice simple rhymes but amped up it wit some complex 1's later and also punchez were good, personals ... ionno cuz O sayin he didnt say that... but whatevz stilla personal to me....*claps*

Orion = Big O...Big O...Stealin da WHOLE goddam SHOW....SP wrote all that i think... flow was on-n-off strectched lines has less-syllabic words so it actually worked...punchez innovative -n- creative, vocab flowin out da ASS CRACk...goddam kid muss be walkin dictionary, alliteration-multies were nice touches....last 2 bars ST8 KILL'T IT. damn....propz

....Lawless came really hard and so did O i think Lawless would've beat any 1 else if it wuznt O but yah....propz where propz deserved....

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 October 2004 at 7:57am
ok my vote

lawless; i take back all i said previously said i think ur dope man i like how you made out you were the underdog and talked about orions easy passage to the final. i really like this verse man keep at it you really diserve the tag elliete

orion; now for you i loved you verse even more i love how you put thinks in your verse that me and a man of the world and news can relate 2 and be able to make me laugh at them even sick things like the damiliola line the punches stay frash this time more than in the semi as you new you had to step up.


vote .... orion

lawless many props to you and i rekon you can also give jehu a run for his money
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 October 2004 at 9:30am

Lawless: Simple rhymes, but made to work. Flowed okay. And wordplay and punches were hard hitting. You didn't have much imagination or creativeness, which made you lack in this battle. Well done with this verse.

Orion: Nice wordplay, punches were on tact. You have some very creative lines, too. The "O above L" one was very original. Also the finaL one. Flow was on track, multies were there.

I'm voting for Orion, because he had, all-in-all, a better verse. Lawless had many of the required elements, and was able to put a good verse up against Orion. But Orion won with a better verse.

Vote: Orion.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 October 2004 at 9:37am

Well... I think it was closer than 4-0, much like the LMS finals was closer than 3-0... and I'm sure people will have their shit to say as they always do... And for any that applies to, you see the callouts section...

Lawless... kinda like Frank said I take back any criticism of ya shiz 'cuz that and other recent ones have been fire... and I think you more than deserve a rematch some time in the future on the fields so that can happen...

Thanks for the votes, LA... 1

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 October 2004 at 12:33pm
yeah the o-man gets this..

fantastic verses both of you tho.

Lawless you can hold your head up high - as you came through a shitty draw to get here.

Winner of raw TACTICS!!

ORION!
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