Mixtapes: Rejuvenating Poisin

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   Belows a liink to my first mixtapeproduced and freestyled and/or writtten by myself and some guests.
 its more of an album and the best example of my early work.
I made this over 8 years ago, 
 Through the grim it's a good listin. 

https://soundcloud.com/justbelief/sets/rejuvenating-poisin

Edited by Just Belief - 05 June 2016 at 8:41am

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Just Belief Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 03 June 2016 Location: L.A County Status: Offline Points: 54 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote Just Belief Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Rejuvenating Poisin Posted: 05 June 2016 at 8:25am
	Belows a liink to my first mixtape produced and freestyled and/or writtten by myself and some guests. its more of an album and the best example of my early work. I made this over 8 years ago, Through the grim it's a good listin. https://soundcloud.com/justbelief/sets/rejuvenating-poisin Edited by Just Belief - 05 June 2016 at 8:41am

Endeavor Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Endeavor Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 08 June 2016 at 11:20am
	Two things I need to enjoy a track. 1). Flow 2). Delivery Unfortunately, you didn't have both on any of the tracks. To me, the entire project came over as freestyled which ain't bad if you're Supernat. This is also the reason the delivery wasn't good. Try to spit from your diaphragm as this adds a lot more emphasis to the bars. You also use the word "fuck" a lot. It's not that bad but you use it so much, it's distracting and it feels like a cheap way to fill in the bars. A pro tip would be to listen to this: https://soundcloud.com/elite-14/pay-my-tithes-feat-la-neek-and-ch3kk-g That's all folks!
	#Bananas

Just Belief Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 03 June 2016 Location: L.A County Status: Offline Points: 54 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L	Post Options Post Reply Quote Just Belief Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 10 June 2016 at 5:49am
	Yeah i only wrote three tracks the rest of the albulm is all collection of freestyles. It's more a look into my younger self, than it is a mixtape. And Yeah i did say Fuck alot. Thanks for listening