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    Posted: 29 October 2004 at 9:21pm
  • First to FIVE explained votes wins (explanations to be judged by me), 5-0 is a KO
  • No minimum, and a maximum of 16 bars
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  • BLIND DROPS - all verses to be PMed to me once complete. Please INDICATE CLEARLY what parts of the PM should NOT be included in what is pasted into the battle and what should. Also do any formatting such as bold, links etc BEFORE sending it to me, I won't do any of that for you. You may re-submit your verse as many times as you wish before the deadline. Battles will be posted as soon as both verses are in.
  • Deadline: Friday 5th November - midnight GMT (GMT is forum time - 5, check in your profile to see what you have the time set to so you know when you have to send your verse by). NO EXCEPTIONS.

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    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2004 at 11:49am

    Hanging

    Illa.. Before I start, just one or two small issues
    If you lose this, will we still need the tissues?
    Cry-baby fuck, so vexed, can't handle the complex
    Little baby virgin – his only girlfriends Kleenex.
    Whats next? Thought he'd stepped from retirement
    Failed comeback, I wonder where the desire went
    Top of the tree, we thought he was a rapper with a gift
    Now, your styles being overtaken by gran in a stair lift
    Stanha? No need to stammer with grammar so outdated
    You been sedated? Only reason for the bullshit created
    Typical sick lines coming screw it I'll just burn you to a crisp
    Factor this, Rhymes so skewed, you must type with a lisp

    ILLA

    HMM things to kno he an x-fader... he retired as mod and i koed him the first time we battled
    used to bum scotty then now stuck up fo ice-c in an arument him and scotty had


    .:ILL-starr:. warm-up....

    This HEATED hispanic... givin u cracks like i clipped-an-addict
    Ur deleted its granted...HanGIn the MOD??! ill quickly banish
    Yeah ur SICK... but im ILL in the fields...  im all the difference
    And FUCK goths.. not literally cus 'being ugly' is ur ONLY sig-nifi-canse (ha)
    On the mic I THUNDER-cats these 'HOOOOO'es cant clatter wonder-raps
    Twistin' ya' bars' like 'beer-caps' u feelin camp? assed-up like clips photographs
    Leavin ya rhyme AMPED... amputated ripped open and fuckin violated
    Jackin this pussy... comin off sick'nen like rape'in shy old ladies
    Ur persona's weak, u rap and ur a goth, must be the new age teenage freak
    Compressin ya speech.. like squashin 's.hawkins' voice box wid my feet
    Hang' in thur BITCH like a forced fertility, ur spits catagorised as 'street-virginity'
    Plain stupidity, last time we clashed... a KO put u to sleep like child-cruelty

    straight death he HANGIN'...

    Shiiit him 'strikin' me down... is the only way he'd ever be 'shockin me'
    You can get pushed round streets... but this aint a game of monopoly
    Bye bye hangin' i CRUSH everything dawg my whole style is a blender
    Dark shit? u gonna have 2sets ov black eyes, by the time u surrender
    U down and out KNEEL im king arthur dick, swords like mics 'rippin apart shit'
    He the weakest vet, x-'FADERs' couldnt switch flows, being pushed on decks (wo)
    ILLA chokeslammin opposition, even as scottys bitch u couldnt play ur position
    And whats wid u dawg? is ice-c's pants a swimmin pool.. the way u dive fo dick
    No-wonder u was scared and shit...  cus jus Like mcDonalds u cant serve fo shit

    ILLA AKA WHAT CHU WANT?

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2004 at 12:16pm
    ok for me illa took this for me with a much harder hitting verse and his punches were things you could relate to you that was a sick verse hanging not your best but still ok illa came tight and diserved this one
    vote illa
    the punching machine

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2004 at 12:23pm

    HanGing... good flow and rhymes... but some punches were ok whilst others were not hard enough...  I do not understand why you posted such a short verse... especially when the limit was sixteen bars... and your opponent was illa...

    illa... HanGing's the Goth-Pimp... and I'm the heated Hispanic...  Other than that... rhymes were ok... but multis were too forced...  Wordplay was ok... and punches hit harder...  You didn't meet your quota of lines either... but you had significantly more content than your opponent...

    Vote: illa...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2004 at 12:30pm
    illa took this battle wit better multis, punches, personals.  Hangin at some nice disses but lacked wordplay.  Illa had some ok wordplay and Hangin didnt have any

    vote - Illa
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2004 at 5:56pm

    this is a good battle.....hard 1 to vote on but i gotts go with illa....illa had a decent bit of wordplay...but not much....

    vote = illa

    lately cats wanna know why poetics a cocky~fuck/
    cuz im rich im seein more ice then a hockey~puck/

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2004 at 5:59pm

    Vote: ILLA...

    His strongest elements were his punches, and his word play was INSANE! I was feeling his multie's too - how he structured them to not be so basic and average and flow with his rhyme scheme and topic in his punches. I also was feelin his disses over all - just straight up complex, 100%...hanGing's verse didnt appeal as much to me, mainly because his rhyme scheme was a bit too simple, and his disses wasn't as near as hard hitting as ILLA's was...my vote goes to ILLA.

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 05 November 2004 at 6:04pm
    ILLA advances to the Pool B finals... and... as Raptor doesn't look like he's gonna be showing... Facing King Jehu...
    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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