Text Battle Archive: [Text] Beans vs NBread (3-1)

In this battle of nutrition a wrong choice has a great consequence\
If you get Bread you get money, beans will give you the shits\\
My name origin is from fucking with words that relate liberally\
Not tactful in relating beans to irritated asshole: cause, epitome\\
His rap alias reps a city critical to forming the country we have\
He's a true patriot down to the deflated balls in beans bag.\\
I peeped massacre, a lot of praise and I'm not saying you're unworthy\
Seemed like you were happy with Bob barker punching you through your bruins jersey\\
My Whole setup conveys foremost I'm heinous under no false pretense\
I'll Load it up and Cum spray like post anal sex flatulence\\
This conceited demon got you feeling defeated from repeated verbal maltreatment\
My advice, use the 30 hours left to make your shit nice, you're gonna need it.\\

This vote has been accepted by a moderator.

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NBread..


In this battle of nutrition a wrong choice has a great consequence\
If you get Bread you get money, beans will give you the shits\\

(well i'll start by typing I liked the concept here,(nutrition= Beans/Bread) 1 alias being
needed the other not being wanted,was quite creative and humorous really,however un
be knowing to you,this is also a played concept to your opponent,ppl here have seen
this angle used against him umpteen times,but you did bring a new slant within the set
up that made a tiered punch seem fresh,so props there,the wordplay was also good,
nice bar and opener..)

My name origin is from fucking with words that relate liberally\
Not tactful in relating beans to irritated asshole: cause, epitome\\

(like i stated previously not a new approach here,you stayed with the Beans/bowels
angle which in itself isn't a bad punch,just a rather tiered one,but i'll give you the benefit
of the doubt,as you may not of known this,so good bar..)

His rap alias reps a city critical to forming the country we have\
He's a true patriot down to the deflated balls in beans bag.\\

(well done,nice personal/punch here,and the wordplay was also really good,Boston/
Beans just weighted the punch thrown,I liked it,and again the humour is present that
also added to this bar,from set up to angle this was good..)

I peeped massacre, a lot of praise and I'm not saying you're unworthy\
Seemed like you were happy with Bob barker punching you through your bruins jersey\\

(there seems to be a pattern with you,your like Noah,everything in 2's,that how you've been going at Beans,in couplets bars,here again you've created a personal via a past
battle and where he dwells via a hockey shirt,again nicely played and a good concept
again..)

My Whole setup conveys foremost I'm heinous under no false pretense\
I'll Load it up and Cum spray like post anal sex flatulence\\

(I get what you was aiming for here with the wordplay/punch,but it didn't quite land
really,not only was this bar stretched,it also a bit of a reach too,it was worded well though,just for me it seemed predictable and not to my preference,still although plagued,it still had merit..)

This conceited demon got you feeling defeated from repeated verbal maltreatment\
My advice, use the 30 hours left to make your shit nice, you're gonna need it.\\

(yeah a good closing bar,not as hard hitting as others bars in this verse but it was a
good personal still,I like the way you been quite consistent in this tussle,your vocab
and wording have also been a highlight in their own right..)


Beans..


bro...
Even Ya clique got Beans on their plate, 1 punch & I'm knockin heads
Str8 devour ya crew & I aint talkin fine dining way I'm start'n W/Bread

(yeah nice shot and personal via alias flip,the wordplay was good also,the thing I also
liked was the aggression you showed in this bar,I'm unsure sure about the crew parts though,I mean he isn't in one here,that leads me to believe you mean it theoretically,
so I'll also say good bar and opener still..)

Plus I toss racks while cough crack, broke kid is Not smart
Kid could afford a Bargain if he was trying to find Love @ Wal-Mart

(nice personal flip via his OM,the set up was worded awkard though,I'm guessing your cough alone is strong enough to toss bread of racks,hence the broke kid,Beans Beans you should no better than to leave a voter in doubt,but this still had merit really,it still
managed to work overall..)

these guns'll tare ya body apart, Bow to me or get the clip quick
Cos Beans Mus'Limb bodies, after this they'll think U a Quebec Victem

(this was creative via wordplay,and I'm not a fan of gun play bars,but this was good on
the whole,it did however have a generic vibe to it though,it was sloppy in direction I thought,which for me weakened this bar overall..)   

Kid a weakling is facts, His chick get on this dick than I'm beatin'her ass
One night W/Beans & she cant fuck u for months...Is what you callin "Sneaky Attacks??

(although this bar is again generic,again the words was good,i do like sick bars,shame
this wasn't directed or aimed better,it would of been a solid concept,if it was executed
better..)

Ur garbage bro, Send 29 bodys @ me & know they'll crumble
Everything I bring to this ring Reigns, & you not Orton in the Royal Rumble

(OK I get the wordplay and all,but am I missing something here?,I mean again this seems generic and aimed poorly,what ties NBread into this bar?.pls enlighten me as
at this point I'm miffed..)

Ya spinal get gripped, Broken & shattered cos Im droppin you bitch
Think battlefield league, cos ya backs the subject & I'll make sure that Topic'll twist

(well good to see you pick up some for the closing out bar,but still this seems to be a
forced bar,again nice wordplay but the last half of your verse seems to be good but generic,I do feel you may have rushed this piece,as the norm for you is a well directed
Verse..)

Ok this was a strange battle for me to vote on really,Beans wasn't delivering his trademark punches here, which threw me out really,whilst N Bread came with a more
consistent verse with sparks of good creativity..

Vote..NBread..peace.

Edited by Crimson Juice - 04 February 2017 at 8:49am

This vote has been accepted by a moderator.

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Nbread:  Your opening bar was creative but the flow was so off key it ruined the punch.  You could have nailed it tho. Your second bar was cool.  Lines were a bit stretched tho.  Third bar see this bar could have been a fucking killer but the flow was off again.  It wasn't smooth but the concept you had was dope.  You have to work on that execution.  Fourth bar that was fucking comical.  I liked this bar, but again the second line was stretched but def your hardest punch so far. In my eyes your next bar didnt even rhyme.  Not sure what you were thinking with that one.  Your closer was cool but i've seen the concept done a million times.

Beans wins in Best of 5