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Elite 
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 Topic: Elite - Forever (Not Alwayz)Posted: 22 April 2017 at 9:03pm |
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https://soundcloud.com/elite-14/forever-not-alwayz Back with my first original material in months. This track details some things I was going through during a bad period recently, so hopefully you can see where I'm coming from on this one. New album on the way. Peace LVL Productions 2017
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ch3kkgame
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Posted: 22 April 2017 at 9:22pm |
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This is dope bruh. Gotta wesst coat feel to the beat. Your mic voice and delivery have improved greatly. I can hear the emotion in it. Shits nice bro. I'm feeling this, laid back vibe with a message. Looking forward to hearing the album.
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Elite
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Posted: 22 April 2017 at 10:09pm |
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thanks for listening man!
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Lord Puente
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 12:12am |
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Ok, playing as I feed. Beat is cool, nothing amazing, but something I'd spit to too. Now we starting, I like how this is mixed with the voice sounded like it's off a phone or radio or some shit, I like how it breaks it up, some parts hard to hear tho.
Ok verse started quick with great delivery and a nice scheme at the start. It's mellowing out now, gonna give it a sec.... First verse was dope I like the delivery, I feel like this is one of you better sounds I can remember. The hook is alright, the verses are the bigger highlight here no doubt. Overall this was a nice little track out together, mixing is cool, verse was dope, especially first part with sweet scheme in it. Solid drop here elite! |
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 5:46am |
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THEY SAY I CAN'T COMMUNICATE!!! MAYBE IM TOO FULL OF IT...
This beat is stupid sick. like legit. im digging this. "might spray the nine and pray"..your flow is potent. 'death on the fragrance'... this is some shit you could smoke to. mix sounds very nice man. damn bro. this shit is real sick. not much else to say except it needs an auto-replay feature lol. |
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#Bananas
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Elite
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 2:00pm |
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Good looks on the feed guys!
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Kairo
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 3:10pm |
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I just want to preface this with the fact that I'm new and have a fairly mainstream point of view in terms of what I like in terms of musical quality.
The first thing anyone hears is the hook and I think there's a really really strong idea here. The background voice with distortion / pitch shifting is incredible ~ even in terms of the mixing it was so clear I understood everything you said. Great job on that. My only hesitation with it, what separates this from being perfect is the "something lasts forever". There should be a bit more variation, change the pitch for every other "ever", like speak it a pitch/tone lower (right now you're implying an "E" for every ever, drop the second one down to a "Db" notation wise). It will add some color/variation. Lyrically I think this is hella strong, once again great job on that. The verse is definitely the highlight, emotionally charged, lyrically potent, and the flow is hella smooth. Overall, great job!
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Elite
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 3:33pm |
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Thanks man! There actually is a 4th layer with variation on the Ever, but it is rather quiet. Im gonna be tweaking and re-recording some bits for this for the album version.
Get at me in my PM bro, i would really love to have you do one of those dope ass singing hooks that you had on Shortcomings of Society. |
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Kairo
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 4:14pm |
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Word! Okay yeah, maybe boost that or make it the main layer for the second ones or something of the sort just to help that lower note come through. Great track though, can't wait to hear what other stuff you've got.
Will do! I'm glad you dug it! EDIT: Not yet a "Groupie" on the site as soon as I hit it I'll PM you lol.
Edited by Kairo - 23 April 2017 at 4:23pm |
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Elite
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 5:01pm |
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No need bro. Just hit my email
willsmith2700@gmail.com |
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 7:50pm |
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first thing, the beat is nice. simple but effective with a nice synth coming through in the background.
your voice sounds very dope with the telephone effect on it for the adlibs. in fact, your voice sounds nice for the whole track except maybe the hook. there's something i cant vibe to about it.. i think it just needed a little more experimenting with your voice, maybe a softer tone or something. im no expert on singing though lol. dope concept too. overall its a nice track bro, i fuck with it!! |
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Sammy
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 11:03pm |
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haha yyeeaaaa! love the arrangement bro. very epic, imo, the way u breakdown each segment to their own element. beats dope too man. ur beat, right? my only gripe was that i wish it was a bit longer, i guess depending on how u take it, it can be a good thing or bad thing. delivery was crisp, lyrics was ill.
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Elite
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 11:12pm |
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thanks man! beat was not mine btw. i dont rap on my own beats too often.
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Mission
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Posted: 30 April 2017 at 3:22am |
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This was flames man had some heavy J Cole vibes especially that one flow you hit near the middle of the track. Awesome single.
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Elite
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Posted: 30 April 2017 at 12:49pm |
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Aye good looks mission
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Posted: 30 April 2017 at 5:11pm |
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The beat was cool. Had a west coast feel to it sounds like something you'd drive to on a hot day. It added to the atmosphere of what the track was all about. The hook was good, it was snappy and a quotable imo. Your mic presence and flow were on point, I didn't hear you scrambling to fit a line in or finish one early to leave the beat hanging. The lyrics in general were dope, didn't have a problem with them. Only thing I wasn't too keen on was the long intro but if that was your intention then fuck it lol. Good stuff man, keep it up.
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Posted: 02 May 2017 at 8:32pm |
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I like this. Not much I can say that's different than what others said. Your hook vocals could be a little louder, as the beat overwhelms the vocals a bit. The hook is where your voice should be louder, so maybe sum all the layered vocal tracks together and put them through a compressor so all parts sound equally loud.
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Insert something rappy here
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Elite
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Posted: 04 May 2017 at 12:38am |
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Good looks Goryo and Jehu
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