Open Mic: United Fates

(In response to daydizzle89)

Ok... So I've heard some things -- about this bunch of hopeless states.

Not so united and great with Trump in the midst, shit
Couldn't even catch your own warnings run on the Simpsons (that episode where Trump becomes president)
Y'all call out doing our cousins as twisted
Yet your place is full of rednecks fucking their sisters!
Call us pussies in sport and claim your football in proudness
But wear protection, try your hand at rugby you foul shits!
You should do it in sex too so the world won't have to hold such weight in down kids
Joining wars in the latter stages to hide the fact their cowards
Y'all never do shit 'cept for eating oversized burgers and damn chips
Your big roads aren't for the bad traffic but your fat asses!
An Earthquake when they sit and tornados as gasses
Are released from them, no wonder why your shops have such mad taxes
It's to pay for the sad damage that'll be caused, the fall's deep
As I drop these depressing facts harder on y'all than Wall Street
More criminals with guns than your whole army which appalls me
So stop trynna teach the world a lesson when all your own school's weak!
Say we're smothered in denial but you can't accept their's global warming
But then again, that's only 'coz y'all know you caused it
Your wrongs protected by weapons n just 'coz in everything you own a portion
Yet y'all don't know what a portion is 'coz all the shit you've grown to horde it
Complain about our drunk whores and lads getting fucked more
But you're the ones with the issues and the drug wars
Even religiously there's no light under ya shut doors
Where McDonald's signs' more recognisable than the cross, you dumb boars
Which reminds me of your broken society, the corrupted policing
Moan about are rights to speech problems but how's that for the busting of freedom?
Haha, fucking Bay Of Pigs, so before you take the piss learn what you suckers are heating
'Coz shit'll come back down on you like a Trail Of Tears and burn n rip you motherfuckers to pieces.

rap guy. I sparked your response like the 4th of July. Kudos on the fast response. At least chu got nuts pal. Bring it Saxons!!!

Hmm interesting,you had some good points made here but i think you excuteded them
at times in cringe fashion,they came off in parts as titt for tatt,it also had a rush feel
about it,like you was to focused in just answering back quick,because within this verse
there contained quite a few solid lines/bars,my favourite being this one,

"Where McDonald's signs' more recognisable than the Cross, "

Ain't that the truth,a good example of the corporate web that exist globally,while we scurry and fight amongst ourselves for the sake of patriotism,(which is a taught
emotion and concept),anyways the wall street line was another one i liked,if you had
worded this better if could of been solid really,that's why I feel you rushed this drop
somewhat you thought of an angle and ran with it,instead of playing with it first,now
With that typed the verse on the whole was a plus for me,a little banter between ppl is
always entertaining,as I found this to be,good read,just take the time on delivering..peace.