Open Mic: Merry Can.

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   America.

the place where wrongs become right. 

they say time.. is of the essence..

and in the present? its strife. 

but centuries of lessons, gave life. 

we fled oppression, caused oppression
regretted that plight
but that pilgrammage was built on innocence
and gripes. 

your guise, that we're guys 
controlled by televised signs
propelled by secret societys, right? 
"Freedom" is a lie. scream it til you die. 

We do. you should join us in the fight. 
send molotovs to every mall and shop
facebook live. never let voyeurism shy. 
I will tell you 3 hundred million reasons why. 

for every hiroshima, 
theres been several hundred treatys
world peace isn't won with bombs..
and I'm agreeing..
but you said we act late...
I said we negociate with reason. 

fuck the police, and everything they stand for.
I thank the military for all things they never ran from.

you got America twisted
thinking its a box of chicken
two large fries and a blizzard. 

dysfunctional family. 
but we function fine
with some good ole ass whippin'.

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Neek Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Super Mario Slaughterer Joined: 05 October 2004 Status: Offline Points: 3862 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: LWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Neek Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Merry Can. Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:33am
	America. the place where wrongs become right. they say time.. is of the essence.. and in the present? its strife. but centuries of lessons, gave life. we fled oppression, caused oppression regretted that plight but that pilgrammage was built on innocence and gripes. your guise, that we're guys controlled by televised signs propelled by secret societys, right? "Freedom" is a lie. scream it til you die. We do. you should join us in the fight. send molotovs to every mall and shop facebook live. never let voyeurism shy. I will tell you 3 hundred million reasons why. for every hiroshima, theres been several hundred treatys world peace isn't won with bombs.. and I'm agreeing.. but you said we act late... I said we negociate with reason. fuck the police, and everything they stand for. I thank the military for all things they never ran from. you got America twisted thinking its a box of chicken two large fries and a blizzard. dysfunctional family. but we function fine with some good ole ass whippin'.
	#Bananas

daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:39am
	merica motherfucker, you feel it? Its like an eagle touching my soul while im getting road head in a chevy silverado and shooting an Ar 15 out the window while the pledge of allegiance is playing on the radio during 4th of July type verse

The Rap Daemon Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 05 August 2015 Location: Purgatory Status: Offline Points: 1108 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-14-0 Form: LWLWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote The Rap Daemon Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:42am
	Lmao - amazing title. Definitely a lighter response compared to mine against the just as 'aggressive' piece from dizzy.. The way you countered the shots was clever, with the scheme of reasoning everything you stand for making for a very easy to read, simple but effective piece filled with pride and acceptance. Wasn't deep in terms of wording but it was exactly that when it comes to channeling some thoughts, emotion or whatever.
	Faggot

Goryo. Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 28 June 2016 Status: Offline Points: 431 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-4-0 Form: LWLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Goryo. Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 27 April 2017 at 9:52am
	Cool. Similar to Dizz's but totally unique at the same time. What I got from it was pointing out the hypocrisy of people who blame America for a lot. I liked that shot taken at conspiracy theorists because I hate people who always link anything to the 'Illuminati'. The schemes were cool, all random lengths and switching a lot but it came off natural and didn't look unorganised. I expect that style from you anyway. Keep it up.

alicewonder Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 09 May 2015 Location: uk Status: Offline Points: 653 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-2 Form: WWLNN	Post Options Post Reply Quote alicewonder Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 30 April 2017 at 10:42pm
	Well, look who's back!! nice to reading some of your work again. I really liked the unconventional schemes and switch ups here, everything fell into place effortlessly. The content was slightly poignant and interesting. I'm not familiar with the 'background' theme to this, as I was absent lately, but I thoroughly enjoyed this. Especially because of its (high) actuality. The highlight to me was the 'freedom' to 'I will tell you 3 hundred million reasons why' segments. Hope to read more.

Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 May 2017 at 12:53am
	Very subtle yep i liked it,your had incorporated some of the failures well here,you described America as a country that's growing,and you know what it is,and truth is you have along way to go to catch up with Britain on most fronts for fuck ups, but thankfully USA is learning quicker,and another truth here,I don't care who i piss off by saying this,but there is no other country i'd rather fight with or for for that matter,in comparison to others on the world scene,America looks kind off innocent really,and you caught that here within this piece,i also found your rhyme scheme intriguing,very spatial but it worked,it seemed to naturally change the pace at the right parts,which stopped this piece from becoming a rant,but a piece with some substance,good work here really quick but enjoyable read..peace.
	"You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance".

Exoduzt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Exoduzt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 May 2017 at 4:15am
	Neek good to see you posting in the OM again! " for every hiroshima, theres been several hundred treatys world peace isn't won with bombs.. and I'm agreeing.. but you said we act late... I said we negociate with reason. fuck the police, and everything they stand for. I thank the military for all things they never ran from. you got America twisted thinking its a box of chicken two large fries and a blizzard. dysfunctional family. but we function fine with some good ole ass whippin'.----This was fucking great. I loved this section. It's absolute truth. Not sure if your take on it is sarcastic but it doesnt seem like it. but again for future reference please make this shit longer. I know your a more audio dude but your leaving me hanging on shit like this.