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    Posted: 17 May 2017 at 7:50am
You can tell from the title, Jimmy be too dope
And he just like to talk shit, rap and smoke
I got more lyrics and I can roll a fatter blunt than most folk
After you read it you wanna hear it and have some fun but I'll make you choke
Make you slow, saw you pick a penny up off the floor, but I fucking know you ain't never had to take no mo'

Cause I been through struggle even though I'm white
I used to wonder why words would hit my brain at night
Until I learned I could spit and I did alright
And shit, now that I know I'm good I see I gotta fight
I smoke by the ounce, anybody got a light?

Top of the rap charts, I know it sounds ignant
But when I close my eyes I see it as my mission
Cause I know for a fact I could get there just by dissin'
Make a couple bucks over a video of Beyonce and Rhianna kissin'
Give a couple fucks when Rhianna give B a pussy licking
And I'll still have a better sound than Uzi when I'm shittin'

I rap like a hand grenade that's full of AIDS
Cause once it hits you it leaves you with your ankle sprained
Wait a minute, it's late today
And I fucking hate your face
Ever single one of y'all fake ass rappers got the same fucked up fade
Suck a dick y'all dudes are gay
And you getting fucked ain't even getting laid

I rap harsh like ain't got a conscience
And a lot of y'all been rapping nonsense
I know I didn't have to rap here but if I didn't I would have no option
But to throw out lyrical hip tosses
I rap fatter than Rick Ross is
Blunts the same cause I got more ounces than LAs worst rapper got losses
Go ahead, I'm looking at you, comment who the boss is.




Thanks for reading. These are actually the first lyrics I've posted online for anybody to read. I guarantee you they're not my best, but I'm here to grow as it is. Get at me.
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Liked the intro here,i can see you'll be up to speed in no time if you take feedback on
board,LA has some real class text/topical/audio heads here that are willing to help no
matter which area you want to strengthen yourself in,this was decent for a selfhype
piece,your rhyme scheme was basic but that's no biggie,a few inner rhyming words/
multi rhyming words would boost this piece no ends,anyways Welcome aboard read
the rules,post and have fun..peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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[EDIT: WRONG PLACE]
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Hey man, I really appreciate the feedback. Selfhype isn't my strong suit and I was testing myself as it is. I have so many more better lyrics and I really believe myself to have massive potential, so keep up with me, and I'll return all of the love once I figure out how to navigate LA and start to learn more about the community.
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Cool i look forward to reading your work in the OM section,there i will leave detailed
feed,and as you are new here,remember this,if you want to be fed,feed other in the
process regardless your knowledge in poetry/raps..peace.
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before you can dare make an entrance".
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