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 Topic: Nomedic Vs Okie [0-3]Posted: 04 June 2017 at 6:49pm |
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nomedic
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Posted: 04 June 2017 at 8:03pm |
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Cut the act ya existence is meaningless like ya fucking threads
Call my punches rutt or somin they just here I guess to shut your trap Your a comic my Kane whip or dirt my broom cleans maggot You had Stal served with a corpse like he's Green lantern He says he is Ty Roller I say he's a liar for real bruh I'm tie breaker then and my drops decides who's the winner I just shot an agent with the Smith nom be spraying Only way i see keymaker killing is if this was the matrix I saw your other battles I don't know of another way to put it I read some whack shit from you like how your avy looks I got a question why you gassed when you know you gone die I'll show up to O zone spraying spraying spraying till he holy and high https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Green_Lantern_Corps: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stel |
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Okie
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Posted: 06 June 2017 at 2:41am |
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*Nelson Mandela (hope u know) Avy is JOKER = Wild in game of poker U pussy wit ur Pre-writtens, no no U grew to be a pussy like kittens- PSH! Pathetic, Ya gettin shot up on this Battlefield on ur home site to bleed out No Medic Lil John Voice! LMAFO - Shot shots shot, shot-shot shots leavin No medic like 3rd world countires Okie... Face Punches warpin ya sight like heat vapor, more to ya chest n skip ya hearts pace Step n Draw Arms like ya avy-- Shot Clappin at ya Face O's gettin from behind his bars like Mandela n run this African, haters will keep this controversial Hunger games? yea blades scrapin his guts leaveM lookin like da poor ones in the commercial Fistin coce on the table is the only way u hit with Dope punch lines so this win for you's a wish! Cause its clear you struggle with lines like hooked fish Ima pull his card and go WILD on this Joker Stab this bitch over and over and over I'm playin a game of Poker |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Posted: 06 June 2017 at 7:06pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. This battle was painful if I'm honest. Everything from both artists seemed forced. Nomedic - bruh you usually bring that heat. Not one line in your verse rhymed until you got to the closer. I'm sitting here reading a bunch of statements, not a verse. I really don't know where I can pursue further on this. I think avy punches are really weak anymore. If I'm very honest, I'm disappointed as fuck. At least you had delivery and a flow. It just didn't give any help with missing rhymes. Okie - first verse I am reading from you. All that extra shit in your verses don't mean anything to me. Like Nomeds.. you're forcing. Trying to make plays out of something that has minor grip. Hooked fish line is '06-'07 maybe earlier with the "cum in your eye to see me coming" lines. Moving on, your flow is all over, delivery is butt. I guess you have to read your verses more like a SMACK rapper. You had rhymes. I really don't know what to do with this. A tie isn't a vote in my opinion. Let me think... .............some hours later.............. I literally wrote, N on one side of a quarter and O on the other. Okie wins.
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King Jehu
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Posted: 09 June 2017 at 1:50am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Nomedic's rhymes weren't very tight, and the punches didn't really hit hard. I wasn't going to read two wiki entries to get the Green Lantern punch, and it wasn't even that good. I'm finding it hard to imagine getting 35 wins with these kinds of punches and rhymes Okie had a semi-decent line "Fistin coce on the table is the only way u hit with Dope punch lines" but misspelled coke and didn't rhyme the bar with anything! The bar about bleeding out in the battlefield with no medic was clever, but it's something I can imagine many others doing already against him. The joker/poker lines (actually, most lines) were simplistic but at least you tried. For seemingly trying, Okie wins |
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nomedic
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Posted: 12 June 2017 at 7:05pm |
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Sorry guys can a mod edit my expos
Bar 1: he has a threat called trap trap trap which Rutter had closed K Bar 2 :Kane and broom both created a comic and the main characters Stel, okie has a battle with Stalin Corps/corpse 3rd bar:he claimed he is Tie/ty roller 4th bar: the key maker was killed in the matrix And key as in okie "make a killing" 5th bar: I read (eye red) that's his avy lol Closer:self exp Sorry it not breaking down these bars |
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The_Guy
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Posted: 12 June 2017 at 7:19pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Nomedic Your verse was off bro, it didn't rhyme and after reading your expos the "I red" bar was forced imo. The key/matrix bar was good but everything else wasn't hitting on anything. Your punches weren't landing at all. Okie Your opener was nice. It worked out well for you being that nomed did drop not too long after the thread was posted so it may have been some pre writtens Overall you had the better verse here, better punches etc Vgt Okie |
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Nigma
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Posted: 28 June 2017 at 3:33am |
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Okie wins via 3-0 KO
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