Open Mic: Fucking a Three Year Old

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    Posted: 10 August 2017 at 9:51pm
In dog years, Baiting you fucks is easy
Chain a bitch, short shit walking under bars freely
Saw your girl, Six feet tall bitch limbo looking freaky
I might be short but fuck bro, your still beneath me
Measly rebuttals trying to attack D discretely
bet you can eat her bikini region without getting to your knees (geez)
Please believe me C, i get why your short bar game so creamy
She can be on her knees and you can still hit that shit while standing
And Titu, you gonna block me on media, you're just as big as a faggot
Daddy paid your way and you acting gangsta isnt something to brag bitch
Without your father, you wouldn't have jack shit
You praise Allah but whats with the drinking? A bad habit
Let ya dad catch ya kid, your almost 30 and still will get your ass kicked
Just like your country, your rapping is rubbish
I bet when you get B in college, your daddy gonna punish
Fuck it, Two flakes ive already slayed on my bucket list
A short shit talking about me touching kids and a Muslim taking drugs nd shit
What the fuck is up with these punks acting like they swung on dizz?
To sum it up, Their value hold less weight than 2008 stocks plummeting
These little fuck nuggets shouldn't be judging shit
Chain once jumped on Exos nuts when he did a piece about touching kids
Both these cunts have one thing in common
They are the puppet to a fucking prick who literally would suck their dicks

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Flames has the math! No question he has the math

What you got he lacking is awesome natural ability
You are peaking atm.....surely
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thanks for the kind words....

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Man your verses got so many highs but also a lot of lows, I feel that you key this all up in a frenzy and press post. Slow down and take your time, you got mad potential and good ideas just gotta work em out better.
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I guess you feel a lot better now with that said,very direct in approach,no mistaking
who this is aimed at,you certainly love to poke the hive eh,a 2 in 1 sort of verse this,
because the 1st quarter seemed like a selfhype piece and the other 3/4 a shot/diss
at them,your contents was blunt and to the point which added an almost venting like
aggression to this drop also,i must admit i did cringe some when glancing the title,
and not being easily shocked it kind of dragged me in with the feeling of dread entow,
So i was caught off guard by this,(thankfully),anyways on the whole a good read for
the neutral here,good job..peace.
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before you can dare make an entrance".
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