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daydizzle89
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Posted: 10 August 2017 at 9:51pm |
In dog years, Baiting you fucks is easy
Chain a bitch, short shit walking under bars freely Saw your girl, Six feet tall bitch limbo looking freaky I might be short but fuck bro, your still beneath me Measly rebuttals trying to attack D discretely bet you can eat her bikini region without getting to your knees (geez) Please believe me C, i get why your short bar game so creamy She can be on her knees and you can still hit that shit while standing And Titu, you gonna block me on media, you're just as big as a faggot Daddy paid your way and you acting gangsta isnt something to brag bitch Without your father, you wouldn't have jack shit You praise Allah but whats with the drinking? A bad habit Let ya dad catch ya kid, your almost 30 and still will get your ass kicked Just like your country, your rapping is rubbish I bet when you get B in college, your daddy gonna punish Fuck it, Two flakes ive already slayed on my bucket list A short shit talking about me touching kids and a Muslim taking drugs nd shit What the fuck is up with these punks acting like they swung on dizz? To sum it up, Their value hold less weight than 2008 stocks plummeting These little fuck nuggets shouldn't be judging shit Chain once jumped on Exos nuts when he did a piece about touching kids Both these cunts have one thing in common They are the puppet to a fucking prick who literally would suck their dicks |
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spume corrupt
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Flames has the math! No question he has the math
What you got he lacking is awesome natural ability You are peaking atm.....surely Brilliant with the flow |
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daydizzle89
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thanks for the kind words....
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DressToKill
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Man your verses got so many highs but also a lot of lows, I feel that you key this all up in a frenzy and press post. Slow down and take your time, you got mad potential and good ideas just gotta work em out better.
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The original comeback kid
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Crimson Juice
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I guess you feel a lot better now with that said,very direct in approach,no mistaking
who this is aimed at,you certainly love to poke the hive eh,a 2 in 1 sort of verse this, because the 1st quarter seemed like a selfhype piece and the other 3/4 a shot/diss at them,your contents was blunt and to the point which added an almost venting like aggression to this drop also,i must admit i did cringe some when glancing the title, and not being easily shocked it kind of dragged me in with the feeling of dread entow, So i was caught off guard by this,(thankfully),anyways on the whole a good read for the neutral here,good job..peace. |
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