Open Mic: British Empire

This is a piece both me and my friend wrote, where we write a bar each going off each other to make a whole piece. So...

My bars...
Friend's bars...

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Me 'n' Chris 'bout to show why the British reign with the rhyming
'Lines parallel to the top', shit's really the greatest alignment
Think 'barbershop, w/ these clips?' I'mma 'fade 'em in time' 'n'
I'm finna 'Send em over the edge' with this 'blade I'mma line 'em'

We're no one to mess with, even the crazies are silenced
Taking all, even the 'heavyweights down' like we 'face 'em with diets'
Bruv when they face c? they best 'dig deep' like the 'bravest of miners'
Cuz these 'cats get roasted' thats a 'main dish in China'

So no way they 'coping with this work', it's no 'basic assignment'
'Making waves, flows of C' control this space, 'game face of Poseidon'
They say 'art is not a crime' but I'm 'creative 'n' violent
So in 'this hood?' The 'techs roar 'n' next door?' Ya 'neighbours are silent'!

Since we've 'surfaced', so many rappers trynna escape with their lives 'n'
'Coz any 'shots they have to try 'n' take' 'hardly land', like the 'base of an island'
I just came to 'steal your thunder' like some traitor defiant
So if I'm a 'God of War?' Then this 'saviour a tyrant'

That's 16, proving any day, any scheme is a given
Nothing can creep in a slimming down when you're a beast with the writtens
So everyday I get the 'weed 'n' the spliff 'n'
I got the dope wrapped' that ain't the 'trees that I'm hittin'

This right here gon' 'bring change' to the game, make it a theme for the villains
'Coz badassery and killer punches our 'signature' piece, no 'petition'
I gotta 'feed this addiction' it's a 'feast 'n' I'm itchin'
So I'll be 'cooking something up' that's not "beef in the kitchen'

There's a reason people 'praying for us to train 'em', they're reading our 'scriptures'
And they're like 'Holy' whatever with they're 'heads lifted' like please... Y'all know 'looking up to me's a religion' (I'm a Gawd)
I'll just 'break out the bars' like I'm 'freed from the prison'
Cuz I'm on that 'drive to success' 'n' I 'heed the ambition'

This that 'home work' that 'school' y'all at your desks, 'coz ya 'need the revision'
Why no one 'helping you when ya lose'? 'Coz ain't no better 'feed than our lyrics'
If 'knowledge is power?' I 'exceed with the diction'
they say I'm 'God Spitting Image'..
I make em 'read with the vision'.

BOOM! UNDERSTAND. LEARN. #BLACK_SOUL #BLADE_THOR #BRITISH_EMPIRE

This was awesome to be involved in and I couldn't have thought of anyone better to have done it with, definitely looking forward to other pieces of art with you bro.. Salute fam

#BullyBreed

Guys i did type a more detailed feed than this,but i cleared it by mistake
when pressing post,so my applogies..


Good to see a collab popping off here,yep i liked it,and in all honesty you
complemented each other well too i thought,your contents lean more to
this being a selfhype piece overall,which was done well also you both had
some good similes that bolstered and gave this an added layer,flow wise
this was also good,the scheme its self was skating on the basic side,but
basic/simplicity does have merit,it keeps contents ticking along,and in sel-
fhype pieces that's a good thing,as on the norm complexity mars the drop,
all in all an enjoyable read,good work..peace.