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Lord Puente 
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 Topic: No Goodbye - LPPosted: 27 February 2018 at 6:19pm |
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https://soundcloud.com/user37035975/no-goodbye I need to breathe, I need some peace I need a drive, I need to leave this ain't a life I live in grief I lie awake, I cannot sleep I used to dream of happy days now I find this empty space I question faith, now tell my why you took him from me, no goodbyes I took my gambles, rolled the dice, never had to pay the price now tell me why you took his life and tell me why I'm still alive when I was racing (on) 95 I had crashed and had survived now answer this, don't act surprised I want the truth, I'm done with lies otherwise I'm done with you you see me bleed you see the proof the pain is deep, its cutting through now heal me or let me loose  RIP Kristian Edited by Lord Puente - 27 February 2018 at 6:30pm |
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afterlife
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Posted: 05 March 2018 at 6:10pm |
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That was well done, I almost wanted to hear the second verse. Keep it up.
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The Rap Daemon
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Posted: 06 March 2018 at 10:15am |
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Yeah, flow and delivery are on point. Beat is also solid. I wanna hear more of this so I can get the full picture and really grasp not just that emotion but get this piece on a personal level with more detail. What I can hear right now sounds really raw and authentic thanks to the delivery, so if this is based off of true events, I'm sorry for your loss man, I know too well what losing someone is like and I'm just glad people like us can express it and get through it together in our music, because this is never something to experience alone.
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Posted: 07 March 2018 at 7:59pm |
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Yeah I’m with afterlife on this one
I really wanted to hear more!!! So my best friend drowned in January Aged 35... He got pissed up and had been on the nosebag then made the ridiculous decision to jump in the river Thames at 4am when the river was at high tide and fast flowing.......his body was in the river for three weeks and a day b4 it was found He leaves behind a wife and five year old son RIP my brother Will Jury. This track was good for me!!!!!! And no doubt it was good for you Sorry for your loss fam Respect |
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rhetorical
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Posted: 08 March 2018 at 2:57am |
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werd, so yea it was short, but this is what ive come accustomed to seeing from you lol . . . regardless, flow was smooth, i like the energy in your delivery and the uniqueness . . good to see you still flexin on the mic fam . . stay at it
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Lord Puente
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Posted: 08 March 2018 at 3:36pm |
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I appreciate the feed fellas, glad y’all enjoyed it.
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