Open Mic: 10 Barz

Yeah this was nice for a hype piece,it certainly had character and depth woven
in via subtle tones,it also came off with a cold mean streak as well,the statem-
ent on the whole was a little on the abstract vibe i thought too,which made the
reader delve in and grasp the meaning,like a participation type verse,the high-
light for me were,the 50 cal/symphony bar and the last bar,they especially stood
out and up to me,"you know iLL,i would really like to see you take part in the
word Drop Challenge",I feel a challenge is what your not knowingly need,you
have skill in abundance and i think you could express yourself further on the
whole,as this challenge suits all types of writers,and i believe you could bring
some ripe material to show case the fact i've stated,plus it'll add a little stim-
ulation your way,food for thought eh,anyways ripe work here dude,,but then you
know that already...peace.

It’s Scriptz on a lil roll
Nathan more
You gun a biz rusty fam
I’m talking line five mainly......
Come back an tune up


@LA NOT DEAD YET

damn...