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SELF ACTIVATE
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Posted: 23 March 2018 at 5:37am |
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Ayo ...
I'm a hazard to their health cos I'm so savage when I belch They can smell sulfuric acid in the gases I exhale Bet them bastards better bail before I crack em at the bell With a jab that's so propelled it smacks the black off Dave Chapelle Go-go-gadget catch these 'L's cos you trash and lame as hell Bitch my bank'll break the scale, cos my cake so overweight It's like I baked and ate Adele, bitch I'll blaze you wit these shells And spray ya brains on ya lapels with a janky twelve guage And granades I made myself then leave you fatally impaled Or stank 'n hangin from a rail in the Chainsaw basement or an East Malaysian cell With a belt around ya neck for tryna plagiarize and sell my amazing rhymes & tales To a basehead clientele, cos the flow so fuckin dope Ronald Reagan's sullen ghost'll Prolly raise up out of Hell and tell em take me off the shelf ... welp. I'm done. |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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BRUH.... from dave chappelle to malaysian cell was pureeeee heat. Just writin' some shit that was flow. THIS I was able to grab the flow so effortlessly. The way it swayed back and forth reminds me of a Dre drum pattern. Loved that delivery.
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Some stuff I like reading
Some stuff I don’t like reading But everything you put down here I loved reading Just a personal preference thing fam But when you bring it this way. I sit up and indulge God only knows how lethal you could be if you put the full potential in Respect for the Propers drop right here main @LA NOT DEAD YET |
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rhetorical
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this intro is just fucking nasty bro. . .
Then you follow it up with this. . . . . . got damn lol . . im like 4 lines in and already going back to restart my read. . .
ughh..... so just when i thought we was losing a bit of tone you sneak this little bit in here hahaha. . .
lol and i love how you just end it like. . . 'yea bitch, that just happened' man, i wish this was longer tbh, but i mean this is one of the dopest short flex pieces ive read in a long ass time.
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