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Lord Puente
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Posted: 13 May 2018 at 10:56pm |
https://soundcloud.com/user37035975/hard-body I be burning emcees im a thousand degrees this aint even my peak watch this super saying increase watch me chamber thoughts and squeeze watch your body drop to my feet x2 you cannot fuck with me I cannot be touched hating on me like a bitch with a grudge you a vegan, a weakling, you are not enough I be eating this beef like a sandwich for lunch if you wanting that smoke, get rolled like a dutch I wont even get high you aint potent enough i aint saying ya name I aint given ya buzz but you mention my name cuz you know that i bust they say ima plug, my music is dope they loving my drugs, they smoking the roach you lurking in shadows an insects approach your ass is a bug, get squashed like a roach you are not the rapper you are the cancer we question your skill but mine are the answer insurance is something that you should go gather the way that you floppings a natural disaster I don't battle I just HARD BODY killing emcees just a part of my hobby then bring them back to life load another rhyme right into my mind, (im) killing these zombie I don't battle I just hard body turn nobody into somebody when I leave bodies all-all around me when I leave bodies all-all around me you can throw hate, it does not phase I got on brand new Versace im spitting these flames, ashes to lames, I aint leaving no body I told you this wasn't a battle, I told you this was a hard body |
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daydizzle89
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you are fucking nasty in this. This was dope as fuck. Shit hardbody. Dope beat choice. LP FOR THE WINZ
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Lord Puente
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Thanks dizz
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Sammy
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listened to it a few times. with the exception of that aquatic line, which was pretty bad by the way, this was dope, cousin.
beats fire. your flow has improved drastically. you definitely sound a lot more comfortable on the mic. a huge contrast since i first heard you. Not saying you was wack but you're definitely better now. i like the double timing flow alot. what make it effective is you can actually understand what ur saying lol. it was playful but compliment the beat nicely. if i was to point out any gripe its the quality of the vocal. it sounds very distant. you need a mic and a booth, bitch! other than that i fucks with it and will be using it to work out after work today :) ps. Celtics 2-0
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afterlife
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Nice. this is totally grimy and mean sounding. I don't know what your doing on your production end but these tracks you produce sound great. Again, nice short to the point, replayable.
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Lord Puente
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Appreciate the feed Sammy and afterlife
Sammy, you probably talking about the reverb I put on the vocals. I’m just shitty at mixing. Afterlife- as stated above I’m terrible at mixing. It sound good cuz it’s a good recording. I be recording shit 30 times to get one that doesn’t need much mixing since I don’t know how to. |
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Lord Puente
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Bumpity bump for rapper t
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Bakardi
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Ayyy, this is a dope drop LP, i think some Adlibs would have helped at certain parts when you slowed your flow down, I'm not a huge fan of the beat, it isn't bad it's just a bit generic but it served it's purpose for what you were trying to do with this track, i hope T responds because this place needs activity.
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SELF ACTIVATE
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The beat was dope. Different. But dope.
The animation in your voice always makes your tracks a fun listen. This joint was no exception. Your speed flow was also on point and entertaining to hear. Always enjoy your stuff. It's unconventional and creative. |
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Rapper T
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Oh shit just peeped this cos of some post in a call out I did. I'm honoured to have you grovelling at my feet you little bitch. I didn't tell you to say my name yet so I can't blame you for pussying out there. Can't say this was direct at all, I think I actually listened to it and had no idea it was to me. Like a little love letter from you. How sweet. Liked the beat, can't say much for the poetry.
Bitch ass. Let me address this for you this week for a bit of a laugh, you gon learn today.
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Lord Puente
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Rapper t- this was dropped within hours of you talking shit the first time lmfao. We working on a month now For a response. Hahaha. Fr it would be embarrassing if you couldn’t drop something at least 10 times better with about 50x the amount of time for a response.
Self, bakardi, thanks for the feed homies |
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afterlife
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I have to bump this because RapperTea is weak.
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Rapper T
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Speak for yourself dickrider. I'll bump this too cos LP a bitch who knows he'd get raped in a battle with me
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Crimson Juice
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A little late with the feed here i know...(but i've got some catching up to do)
Well LP this was nice,I liked the musical steps within the beat here,it had a mocking vibe all its own,(monotone but effective i thought,it was like you was handing out a lesson in a simple form for him to follow or grasp),this track had a real cool layered approach too,which made your punchlines/disses within prominent,your flow tone and overall pitch was good as it added an aggressive feel,the smilies/comparisons within were nicely done,as they didn't distract the listeners attention due to them being sublime almost,yeah a cool track that's worth 3-5 minutes of anybodys time.. peace.. ps.. i'm gonna sit over here with the popcorn and see how this pans out. and RT ill be checking your track out soon also.. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Lord Puente
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Thanks for the feed peeps. I got to say this was an effortless mop up. Spoiler alert, he won’t get a single vote in our battle.
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Dave Infinite
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I think the beat shattered my earbuds. I would fuck with this. I'm more into boom bap
But I would play this Shit loud. ass is a bug, get squashed like a roach you are not the rapper you are the cancer we question your skill but mine are the answer insurance is something that you should go gather the way that you floppings a natural disaster PS: i am not a fan of SoundCloud. Why does that matter, I don't know
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