Text Battle Archive: Beans vs Zinaiii (2-1) |
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Zinaii
Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL |
Topic: Beans vs Zinaiii (2-1) Posted: 20 August 2018 at 5:00pm |
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Endeavor edit: This turned into a regular battle. Please vote on the better one of the two verses and pretend that every shot at Vellum is actually directed at Beans of Zin. Edited by Crimson Juice - 23 September 2018 at 8:19pm |
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Zinaii
Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL |
Posted: 01 September 2018 at 7:50am | ||||||||||||||||
Are you a pill head beans? With that name I was bound to brawl Ima leave him like he od’d in his kitchen. Blood on the tile and all! Get your core chewed like an Apple. Beans is Scotts teachers pet I “Ben 100” you seeming stressed; I’ll put a end to your respect like Aretha’s death (RIP) Flee from death! Vellum battles nobody’s; but enamored with the fame I’ll skin you after this L, and make an example out your name! Vellum feasting off a dead site. You Living off of crumbs still But vellum will be wetting (wedding) his pants at what I’m bout to unveil I got dumb skill! Ask beans, people tried him but I always hit him cleaner This beef? You “fell in” records “nice” but he avoids me so he miss the meaner! Vellum ain’t known to be beast. You probably ain’t boned in weeks I’ll peel veil back like a bad wedding. Cuz I forever hold the piece! Your Flows are weak; Idc about anything this puss spitting Cuz any hate “ya dish” velvel, we all know it’s “wolf tickets” I’m nutritious. I never “lend tales”, y’all winning? Indeed’s slim Cuz beans wants “fake beef” so he tied me into what (v)eg in! vel·lum ˈveləm/Submit noun 1. fine parchment made originally from the skin of a calf. Yiddish is an old Jewish language. Velvel means wolf Lentils are a meat substitute for vegans |
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 03 September 2018 at 11:09pm | ||||||||||||||||
Listen You Faggots! Zin been LA's punchin bag! Empire proved U lamest fa'real Ur guns didnt even backfire & u got ripped aprt tryin to shoot Tre in the field Any beef we've weighed in resulted in Murdering son right Zin 1-4 Vs Me!..Already left his face more swollen Than Dave eatin'a burger in 1 bite Vell Stay OD'n on name flips! This sharp nose'll have the crook gone The led I push into his blood stream'll takem Higher than any of the drugs he's hooked on Know I'm fly! I'll cock this Golden Gun & U'll stay fuckin jealus Beans shoot to kill & We only see 'Oph(OFF) Spray' when he's applying Bug Repelent Fuck Zin! Err'y line that I cast'll hit his lips! I'll dead this gay My Machine Gun piercing..After I give U Hooks to the side of ur head like MGK "Apparently Im Gay" Had LA like.. "STFU! why this dude actin Obnoxious" A Dresing ^^ that in Ur Sig threw us off..we thought U were coming out, while LA's Hangs in the closet Whites audios were new born fresh! But drugs gottem the lamest vulture Could'a had shows W/Migos... But the only Oph set we see is how addiction forbids him from his kids & Raising Kultur & the women in Ur fam Open legs, them hoes nude When it come to Law, Dress, & Arthur, Shelby get'n a Pussy beating, Like every time U've lose Vs <--Them
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Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 21 September 2018 at 3:49pm | ||||||||||||||||
Changed format of battle a bit. See opening post for more info. Open for votes!
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#Bananas
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Smoothtung
Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN |
Posted: 21 September 2018 at 4:00pm | ||||||||||||||||
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ugggggh zins drop flowed evenly and sounded natural off the tongue. The Aretha Franklin bar was white flame hot. With that being said, Beans' bars were aggressive and personal as hell, where as zins bars were (although clever) pretty widespread. Although I prefer a cleaner writing style like zins, in a text battle I have to give it to someone who stays direct and aggressive. Vote = BEANS |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 23 September 2018 at 8:02pm | ||||||||||||||||
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Unusual place to be at where voting's concerned having to try and forget about the 3rd party,its kind of off putting,but to no fault of you 2's,anyways i really did like both pieces here,both threw and landed punches,i feel Zin had the better w/ play,but i found Beans had the crisper and more numerous punches,this is bec- ause his verse was more originally aimed at Zin then Vellum,where Zin shared his punches out more evenly,hence why it an unusual situation to vote on,so seens punches are the strongest category when voting,logics says Beans took this,and you know what?,logics right,sorry Zin,but it is what it is,an unusual way to lose due to Vellum's no show,(frustrating eh,wink wink) ... Vote Beans...peace. |
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Ridley Squat
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Posted: 23 September 2018 at 8:13pm | ||||||||||||||||
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. ZINAII
Also, I would have liked it much more if you found a way to rhyme the TILE as well as the ALL, rather than the whole thing relying on the Brawl/All single syllable end rhyme... for a quick example, how about "That's a name I was inclined to brawl". (Ah! he hit his head on the corner of the worktop when he went down, OK, that makes sense!) Nice play though.
The Ben 100 reference was over my head, but I feel it does all land well regardless. Also I'm now thinking ... do people chew the 'cores' of apples?
Is veil supposed to be vell? If so, not happy with that. Also not sure why it's gotta be a bad wedding, especially if ur holding ur peace. But I did like the wordplay anyway.
Shame because the 'fake beef' concept could well have been the decent closer you needed here. BEANS
Not too wordy, end rhymes decent but could've used more. Punch landed well.
Feel there was room for wording it better, but nicely done here.
The only thing that could save it was the end rhyme, but that wasn't as tight as it could be either.
So .... I seem to have a rather critical approach to voting, just the way it always seems to come out ... so sorry about that. But despite that I did think these were both decent, though not near either of your bests. Z had better structure, but was less direct, and a tendency to be a bit obscure. B was attacking but consistently with end rhymes only, so long lines often seem wordy, also the rhymes on the setups often sound clumsy, like it was keyed. Surprisingly close, but I have checked the math(s), and just edging it ... ... MFVGT Zin |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 11 November 2018 at 9:00pm | ||||||||||||||||
Beans wi s 2-1..
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