Open Mic: Spume corrupt

Heard that spume was back.. 
Obnoxious was his putrid rap.. 
The turkey basting concept made me think that he is prude in fact. 
He said he's bringing torrents and the warning was as useful as
the warnings he'd received upon the knees of his abusive dad. 
The joke is he is Sir Cuss *crickets* that's the punch line.. 
**A silence falls in surplus like the crickets in the summertime.** 
It's awkward when you word it, it's a process to discern it. 
But I cannot hate, it really takes a proper brain to learn with. 
Spume was always full of shit, lacking any useful wit. 
The day he drops the ruse is the day I'll love the stupid kid. 
He's always rah rah, always overboard with spume corrupt 
I wanna fuckin gas him spark a flame and watch the fumes erupt
It's never you I think of when I think of who's alright here
I know you're fuckin mad, write me back, smooth is right here
You said you're merkin cee's but I've only seen you lead us on
I will traverse the mean seas to give your ass a beating dog
You're only just a peasant, I ain't king but I command you
You sure are one pathetic fucking thing to take a stand to..
Shit.
You lousy Brit 
if you saw me you'd say cheerio
Then I think id smash up on LA's Ray Mysterio.
Let ME drop a logic bomb, I casually topped the whore 
His name remains as just a casualty when MY shoddy forms
You'd swear his body looked like it had died in a Saudi war
For real though..
Spume what the hell you so pouty for?



Edited by Smoothtung - 21 September 2018 at 3:32am

Firstly Spume is my man,and i know he cast a shadow your way recently,
(which i haven't fed yet but i will),but i'll give you credit here for standing your
ground,this verse in truth was a cool rebuttal really,OK so you may have flipped
a few lines of his,which to be honest were subtle but done rather well on the
face of it,this piece had a sort of nonchalant aspect about it,it had a leisurely
vibe cracking off on reading,it seemed to be lighthearted with a schooling tone
about it,i guess you and Spume have an history here at LA,if so let's all hope
it doesn't repeat itself eh,because I get that feeling this would or could get so
messy and drawn out,anyways nice rebuttal..peace.

decent diss. Flows on point obv just felt the content could have been better. Esp since spume was clowning. wont be suprised if he responds with dope shit.

wasnt trying to diss you so dropped a diss?