Audio Mic: HoeShemoth (diss i dropped on a different site)

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    Posted: 21 September 2018 at 6:05am
been a minute since i posted an audio. . so i figured, fuggit 


Quote Im 2 and 1 against u bitch, is something you’ll never admit 
But fell to ur knees to make a plea whenever you bit 
I can name 101 reasons why Bohemoth aint shit 
or present the real reason why he bleeds from his clit 
or why he feel the need to be inside an internet clique
many peoples semen lies within the crease of your lips 
you only beat me once, it was nothing more than a blip 
before beef, you was just another whore on my dick 
im like a super hero destroying his side kick 
my shadow had to ditch its annoying side chick 
im a mountain to high for you to try to climb bitch
even kicked your crews ass and you claim I hide? SHYYYTTTTT 
Nice try, but i spy the secrets under your mask 
Getting banned by your own friends, its no wonder youre mad 
7 years I been stealing the wind from under you fag 
2 undefeated leagues is something you only wished that you had
How you think youre on my level is excessively sad 
You aint needed on these boards, your effectively trash 
Go and Tell em about how you was PM’ing me bitch 
Askin me to vote for you because your writtens were shit 
I have allergies to biters, I been sick of you kid
Come back just to see my name is still all up in your lips
Sorry Johnny,  Imma start sayin the truth
these “friends you think you have are always laughing at you” 
crack’n mad jokes behind your fucking back and its true 
its all bad anytime they actually mentioning you 
If you could see the discord chats youd be cracking up too 
probably have a mental relapse if you actually knew
Dagel thought he was safe coz I was quit and still
Til I came back  to call you out for all the lies that you spill bitch
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Originally posted by DjFlame DjFlame wrote:

The quote at the start was really good.

The delivery at the end of the lines, the emphasis of the end rhymes is catchy. The flow changes subtly, I personally think the same flow goes stale after a while, this was subtle enough to not get stale but it was border line. The songs really short too so that helps out.

I liked the cocky tone. Didn't care much for "bleeds from his clit." I just thought it was a weird unnecessary line. Kinda seemed forced to fit the multi.

Overall it's a really good track, I think ik Dagel, was he on here as King something?


yes, he was banned for having multiple accounts so he left. . he changes his name like 4 times a week hoping people will forget hes dagel .. so this site puts a damper on that
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hahaha!! yooooo i fuckin laugh my ass off when you posted in his thread. he didn't even reply and you got more like on your post than he did with his initial post. but word, the delivery was not quite up to par with your standards (understandable since u mustve done all this in a period of 15 minutes ) but lyrially, this was dope man. i think u tackled most of the stuff dude is known for lol. well done, bro

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Originally posted by Sammy Sammy wrote:

but lyrially, this was dope man.


I  liked this lyrially as well, but lyrically, it was pretty good too. personally.. I felt alot of it leaned heavy on the "multi" aspect and it cut into your word usage. like for a flex piece.. its rocksolid.. as an off with his head effort, it didn't have that "ohhhhhh shitttt" feel. I loved the beat..reminded me of like some older mighty mi shit during the ec conference days. thumbs up. wanted more of a bloodbath, but a good slap in the mouth is always a bonus.
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lmao! Lyrically*


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This was nice, flow is easy, and delivery is decent. Beat is cool kinda has an old school vibe , definitely something to nod your head to. And the clip in the beginning is jokes... I dig the adlib after the super hero line also jokes. as far as lyrics this was a good dig general. I like how you circle back to your opening clip, with "these friends you think you have are always laughing at you". And "discord chats" the detail you use makes it all sound legitimate, so I don't gotta know dude, for you to sell the personal hits. I didn't hear anything jaw dropping, but from a one sided view...But definitely enough to do damage... good listen
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