Open Mic: Whats a King to a God

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Kings? More like American idol contestants representing anal flow
Talking shit once a year, going ghost before we can break they nose
Cubez, way too old, ill have you looking like John McCain bro
Turn this cube in circles while i shank ya dome
Chains a hoe, little entitled bitch who cant change his flow
Law on LA, I see the anon login, you perpetrate a ghost
same lame hoes taking shots like animals 
Its hunting season and this king is a cannibal
Rutter eating beans waiting for his asshole to explode
H4ze a crip tho, fuck this pussy (period!) hes all vaginal 
Fucking Emo rapping faggot thats popping Xanax and broke
And god damn bro, Listen Crim, the only Sheriff in LA is Scotty
Most you pompous pussies with the mod spot be lame and snotty
No missile Crisis with cuba....
once a year, dropping bombs like you catching bodies?
you stupid, just a fraud C
i believe in reincarnation, i suicide once a week like a Saudi
And i dont need a posse, im one shotting like a loan wolf  in a lobby
Crim, your flow is choppy with flip flop schemes 
Call me Ali, Mohammad to your mustafa while im copping pleas
Chain gang cant stop me, Getting salty when I bring up Stalin (WEAK)
And Exo, i know you ghost ing this apocalyptic piece
Heavy weight champion of donuts and alcoholic genes
Go ahead, find an angle to shoot dizz to stop this mockery 
Go at my momma, please copy my sleaze drop some bodies. 
I slaughter rocky, gloves are off , I talk to the streets
Kings die young without comradery
Lets be Honest with Feed
Spume writes like he got Frothy Cheeks 
Crim cant spew a multie even if i jot it in Ink
Law cant be bothered cuz he is obviously autistic with stocks nd dreams
Nigma deletes everything from me cuz he know ill  leave him with hockey teeth
Cuba rounds up his doggies (dweebs) and tries to show us how this hobby be's
Yall claim to drop often clean
than why Im out here doing all this laundry (GEEZ!)
Dirty little toxic tide pod eating freaks make me wanna vomit
Whats cost of fucking with Dizz? You know your a target 
Im like Vietnam vet dropping napalm on arsonists 
King to who? Its lights out, let the stars emit
half you retards jester to other narcissists 
This kingdom pushing the blue pill like a pharmacist 
When Dizz go hard there isnt a pardon list 
Chain, your a sick-witted retard Marxist bitch
If Darwinism exists, No wonder why some get charred with hits
Dragon with the sword and no indirect shit talking bitch
Chain as gangster as H4ze crip walking (shit...)
Like i said, no pardon list, Scriptz ILL but  its hard to resist
It doesn't take an archivist to see he bit hard like a bitch
No pit, this bullie throwing shards of piss at that retard crim
Talking shit to me is fatel, im straight arsenic 
Jim Jones armament leaving behind  carcasses

I dont promote evil, i just harness it

Edited by daydizzle89 - 21 September 2018 at 4:37pm

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daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Whats a King to a God Posted: 21 September 2018 at 4:23pm
	Kings? More like American idol contestants representing anal flow Talking shit once a year, going ghost before we can break they nose Cubez, way too old, ill have you looking like John McCain bro Turn this cube in circles while i shank ya dome Chains a hoe, little entitled bitch who cant change his flow Law on LA, I see the anon login, you perpetrate a ghost same lame hoes taking shots like animals Its hunting season and this king is a cannibal Rutter eating beans waiting for his asshole to explode H4ze a crip tho, fuck this pussy (period!) hes all vaginal Fucking Emo rapping faggot thats popping Xanax and broke And god damn bro, Listen Crim, the only Sheriff in LA is Scotty Most you pompous pussies with the mod spot be lame and snotty No missile Crisis with cuba.... once a year, dropping bombs like you catching bodies? you stupid, just a fraud C i believe in reincarnation, i suicide once a week like a Saudi And i dont need a posse, im one shotting like a loan wolf in a lobby Crim, your flow is choppy with flip flop schemes Call me Ali, Mohammad to your mustafa while im copping pleas Chain gang cant stop me, Getting salty when I bring up Stalin (WEAK) And Exo, i know you ghost ing this apocalyptic piece Heavy weight champion of donuts and alcoholic genes Go ahead, find an angle to shoot dizz to stop this mockery Go at my momma, please copy my sleaze drop some bodies. I slaughter rocky, gloves are off , I talk to the streets Kings die young without comradery Lets be Honest with Feed Spume writes like he got Frothy Cheeks Crim cant spew a multie even if i jot it in Ink Law cant be bothered cuz he is obviously autistic with stocks nd dreams Nigma deletes everything from me cuz he know ill leave him with hockey teeth Cuba rounds up his doggies (dweebs) and tries to show us how this hobby be's Yall claim to drop often clean than why Im out here doing all this laundry (GEEZ!) Dirty little toxic tide pod eating freaks make me wanna vomit Whats cost of fucking with Dizz? You know your a target Im like Vietnam vet dropping napalm on arsonists King to who? Its lights out, let the stars emit half you retards jester to other narcissists This kingdom pushing the blue pill like a pharmacist When Dizz go hard there isnt a pardon list Chain, your a sick-witted retard Marxist bitch If Darwinism exists, No wonder why some get charred with hits Dragon with the sword and no indirect shit talking bitch Chain as gangster as H4ze crip walking (shit...) Like i said, no pardon list, Scriptz ILL but its hard to resist It doesn't take an archivist to see he bit hard like a bitch No pit, this bullie throwing shards of piss at that retard crim Talking shit to me is fatel, im straight arsenic Jim Jones armament leaving behind carcasses I dont promote evil, i just harness it Edited by daydizzle89 - 21 September 2018 at 4:37pm

Lord Puente Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lord Puente Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 September 2018 at 5:27pm
	Wow.... I ain’t even get a shout out. You fucked up... I thought I was famzies Plus everyone know bakardi is king of LA


spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 September 2018 at 5:58pm
	This was hot fire all the way through Dizzy I wanna chill for a bit after work and then I wanna come back with some feedback Really like what I’m seeing here


iLL ScriptureZ Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW	Post Options Post Reply Quote iLL ScriptureZ Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 September 2018 at 6:18pm
	Aiight Dizzy, let's dig into this. You are attacking everyone in this joint. First thing I noticed is your connecting your multis better. Sometimes it's a syllable off and it really makes bars feel incomplete and/or could jack up the flow of things. When that happens, it almost always takes away from the impact of a punch. So good job there tightening that part of your mechanics up. LOL at even attacking people that do not frequent here anymore. Classic Dizz, fuck'em though. I liked your snub to Cuba about "catching bodies", "lone wolf in a lobby", "alcoholic genes", "jot it in ink"... I think when you bring Law in those next few bars you tried to pack too much into the lines. You had a real crisp delivery and then it stretched a bit, for my liking. Target line was tough. That whole multi-scheme was pretty tough. One of the better disses I seen from you. Hopefully, you get some replies from folks. . . . For reference to the real "What's a King to a God".

Crimson Juice Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Crimson Juice Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 September 2018 at 6:30pm
	Do you feel better now?,and before i get to the feed,let me just say thanks for that penny in my immortal meter here,yeah this was nice in all honesty,and believe it or not i knew i was going to get some flak from you,after your post in Media Blackout,you certainly aimed this mostly at the mods of LA,which i get, As your nature is antagonistic to some extent,conformity is not your way or in your vocab either,but the truth is i like to read/see spirt like this here,it's healthy for the site overall,those you aimed for here i thought you got at well,i thought this was some clean writing so,the flow was ripe too,i think this might of bene- fited more if you blocked you disses to each member separately though,instead of weaving them in and out through out the verses entirety, as i feel a bigger impact would of been achieved,but that's just my opinion,still it was a nice read, (and for once i'm not a neutral saying that)..peace.
	"You need to learn how to make an exit, before you can dare make an entrance".

rhetorical Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Site Moderator Joined: 14 February 2014 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 807 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote rhetorical Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 September 2018 at 7:57pm
	so shit man, your just firing shots at every direction here lol. this was jam packed with some hard lines, i like the jab, jab, punch approach. again, i feel a bit lost. . because i dont really know whats spawning all these back and forth disses all the sudden. i have dropped a couple disses here and there, but its typically as a direct response to something someone said. . i just dont know enough about the background to make connections as to why everyones at everyones throat. . .but its entertaining to watch lol. anyway, im glad i walked away from this one without any shots fired my way haha. . good ish fam


Lord Puente Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Lord Puente Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 September 2018 at 9:24pm
	Fatal*


Rutter knows best Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote Rutter knows best Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 21 September 2018 at 9:42pm
	Your a tryer I'll give you that. You need to learn to expand on your concepts to take it to another level though. Like the cubes McCain bar for example. You could of done some thing like Cubes way to old, to be raising arms like McCain bro. Get some double meanings in, play on things we associate. Yeh he's dead but that can be said for any dead person. And avoid corny/clingy stuff like anal flows, he's all vaginal. Also don't be afraid to re word things like.. What's the risk of messing with fizz, you know your a target When I spark it I drop napalm on vets n let it blow on some nam shit . It had lots of potential but you should be operating at a higher level by now.
	#bananas

daydizzle89 Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW	Post Options Post Reply Quote daydizzle89 Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 22 September 2018 at 7:19pm
	got rut in his feels tho. LP be mad cuz I dont want to diss bakardi and Cj noticed

spume corrupt Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3163 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL	Post Options Post Reply Quote spume corrupt Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 October 2018 at 11:04pm
	I was gonna feed some stuff Fuck it o just read this a couple times instead You know I love this type delivery man It’s the best I seen you do this style and makes a lot of recent shit unreadable for me This is how it’s done. Proper


Smoothtung Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 09 December 2012 Status: Offline Points: 2222 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-8-3 Form: WWWLWN	Post Options Post Reply Quote Smoothtung Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 02 October 2018 at 11:10pm
	Yea this is fire, the best I've ever seen you write. That bar about exo's alcoholic genes is just savage. I love how you went at everyone. That's how you do it. Very impressed. You've gotten a lot better.