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    Posted: 12 November 2018 at 4:36pm
Welcome yall,

Dis be Ray. Im here to drop bows on some hoes and get that E-Thug respect game up and going. I got mad skillz here is a quick verse


I am a pimp
got a fat lip
im sick with it
Im that kid
grab the clip
bam bam it gets
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Neek Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 November 2018 at 4:38pm
work on your end rhymes. get doesnt rhyme with pimp.
#Bananas
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only rhyme was clip and lip, everything forced.


not a fan.
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Originally posted by Ray-Cyst Ray-Cyst wrote:

bam bam it gets


Sick inner rhyme here though ...
A Perfect Rhyme AND Alliteration at the same time
Showing you have an advanced grasp of the mechanics

Would like to see you drop a shorter piece

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Welcome.. Well i can clearly see your gonna elevate quick bere,(maybe really quick,
either way it's going to happen..peace.
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before you can dare make an entrance".
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Its all gonna work out.
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None of that rhymes with paper... 

Welcome Ray. Mind the piss jugs
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