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Posted: 20 November 2018 at 4:14pm |
WWC Magazine Volume 11 I would firstly
like to open this week’s magazine with an apology. Sorry it took so long to get
this one in. It’s been a real challenge finding time in between having family
gather at my home for the Holiday week. But FINALLY, I was able to sit down and
churn another one out. As always, mucho
gracias to all who participate and vote. It really is appreciated, and I hope
you all have enjoyed the WWC up to this point. With that said. . lets get this
started This week’s image
is of a group of police officers walking down what appears to be an urban city
street painted in graffiti and trash littering the streets. Let’s dig into
these verses a bit and see everyone’s approach to the topic. iLL
ScriptureZ “Shield for protection, in love with a vi-o-lent scrum Tension was thick & tight as a violen strung This was music to my ears not a si-o-lent hum Been waitin’ for the day to try out this club” Got a real
immortal technique / dance with the devil vibe off this joint. The introduction
was gripping and iLL utilized some sick word bending to kick this one off. Fluid
as usual, I expect nothing less from this guy. Crimson
Juice “A shooting & unemployment was the cause of our
deployment, Nervously im not feelin' buoyant about my current
appointment, Chantin' loud a crowd ready to blow up like a mushroom
cloud, Acting intimidating & proud i use my shield like it
was a shroud,” Crim wrote a very
atmospheric heavy piece here. It was detailed and descriptive. I could easily
place myself in this officer’s moment and time. This is a great display of how
you can attack the topic head on, while letting the content drive the creativity
and breathe life into the image. Rutter
Knows Best “These gritty streets, where the smell of pity reeks, Riots n looting the only language the city speaks, Thousands of soldiers, not one 'bout no military Black n yellow ring out, they swarm like killer bees” So this told the
story of a man who seemingly gets enjoyment out of beating the disorderly
citizens. You started this off with some excellent multis and the story just
ramped up from there. Solid work here Rutt Neek “our whole outfit, front to back, it's comedy, it..just
is. "broken men", walk of shame.. the nominee
crushed us "Halloween, 2018"… "What Not To Do: for
500" lost a costume contest: Shamu and her husband hippie love, ole Bonaroo type fuckshit we came through, Call of Duty squad destruction” Neek always comes
with a crazy and creative angle. I love the fact that you never really know where
his verses may end up until the very end. Even more impressive is that his
fluent writing and great mechanics never waver. Daydizzle89 Rocks hurt, thown by modern day marauders Enslaved by politics looking to slaughter Spraying jets of water off at the brawlers Disorder i prevent with honor Due to Day being
placed on timeout (haha) I took the liberty of having him submit the verse to
me by other means so I could post for him. The topic is right up Day’s alley,
so im glad that we got one from him this week. The read was effortless and fits
right in with much of the political atmosphere we see in modern times. The
Rap Daemon The reason enforcing rules sounds negative might just be The fact you're all a bunch of rebellious idiots high in
greed It's not that I'm about denouncing issues arising, see- -incidents like the one with Michael Brown were definite
times police- A lot of truth
bomb dropped in this verse, and it’s great to see that some people do stand on
the side of holding bad cops accountable while supporting good cops. Onto the
verse itself, it was supported by strong mechanics and a very flushed out
concept. CHAIN “"Even pros go to jail where your blackness is a con Where the avenues have turned into a MAGA
hat-a-thon" "They will have to pay for what happened to my
mom" Just another Sandra Bland that the Kavanaughs have harmed” So this verse
lands on the side of social injustice and speaks on police brutality. Equipped with
witty word play to drive the narrative and that ever fluid flow that CHAIN is
known for . . . another effortless read with top notch execution. Votes Crimson Juice Neek iLL ScriptureZ Rutter Knows Best Rutter Knows Best Neek CHAIN iLL ScriptureZ iLL ScriptureZ Neek CHAIN Daydizzle89 Sammy The Rap Daemon Neek CHAIN CHAIN Neek Rutter Knows Best The Rap Daemon Daydizzle89 Rutter Knows Best Neek iLL ScriptureZ Neek iLL Scripturez Rutter Knows Best The Rap Daemon VOTES Neek 16 Rutter Knows Best 8 iLL ScriptureZ 7 The Rap Daemon 5 CHAIN 5 Daydizzle89 1 After tallying all the votes, Once person took a
commanding lead!!! Your week 11 winner is. . . Neek look at us, im almost disgusted complete mockery, how to spend the populus budget just walkin around, looking like commoner justice wandering dust bins, trashed dirtballs, awfully suspect. our whole outfit, front to back, it's comedy, it..just
is. "broken men", walk of shame.. the nominee
crushed us "Halloween, 2018"… "What Not To Do: for
500" lost a costume contest: Shamu and her husband hippie love, ole Bonaroo type fuckshit we came through, Call of Duty squad destruction but nahhh, let Julie win - her self esteem's important fuck me, and fuck the homies, no celebratory tokens all we got left, is this pic, I feel the jealousy
explodin' didn't do it for the 'Gram, no tellin me it's dope when… EVERYBODY COMMENTING NEVER EVEN VOTED!!! Congratulations sir! Once again your name gets forever immortalized
into . . . Week 1 = Nigma Week 2 = Rhetorical Week 3 = Spume Corrupt Week 4 = iLL Scripturez Week 5 = Rhetorical Week 6 = Neek Week 7 = CHAIN Week 8 = Sammy Week 9 = iLL Scripturez Week 10 = Dntplywelwitothers Week 11 = Rhetorical Week 12 = Neek Again, I apologize for the late magazine this week and my
hectic schedule. Thank you everyone for your patience and continued support. I
will be off this week tending to family for the holidays, and I would like to
give a big up to Sammy for stepping in and taking the wheel again for Week 13. Best of luck everyone and if I don’t get a chance to talk
to you by the weekend, have a great and relaxing Thanksgiving. |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Sammy
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neekdagawd! haven't read yet but will plan to on my lunch break!
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Crimson Juice
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Great mag again Rhet,and serious props for the invested time,especially when
you at this point have little of it at the moment,thanks man.. Congrats Neek,solid verse..peace. |
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