Audio Mic: Lone Wolf MCFlame

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   Huge improvement from your last track I heard. You're more comfortable on the beat now. You are hitting those pockets pretty well. Lyrics have never been a problem for you but you might wanna alternate tones on certain bars to make your punches stand out more. The hook need more work as far as layering (singing two or three times to make it stand out more). Verse could use Adkins for the bars you want to stand out. 

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D.Von Doom Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote D.Von Doom Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Topic: Lone Wolf MCFlame Posted: 07 December 2018 at 3:28pm
	Huge improvement from your last track I heard. You're more comfortable on the beat now. You are hitting those pockets pretty well. Lyrics have never been a problem for you but you might wanna alternate tones on certain bars to make your punches stand out more. The hook need more work as far as layering (singing two or three times to make it stand out more). Verse could use Adkins for the bars you want to stand out.
	I can only fall off in space...

D.Von Doom Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Standard Member Joined: 18 June 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1534 Audio Rank: #1 Stats: 15-4-0 Form: WWWWWL	Post Options Post Reply Quote D.Von Doom Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 December 2018 at 5:06pm
	Meant Adlibs not Adkins lol
	I can only fall off in space...

Loose Logic Members Profile Send Private Message Find Members Posts Add to Buddy List Groupie Joined: 03 November 2018 Status: Offline Points: 28	Post Options Post Reply Quote Loose Logic Report Post Likes(0) Quote Reply Posted: 07 December 2018 at 9:25pm
	I think you have too much reverb on your vocals... sounds like you are in a tunnel or concrete underpass. Flow is cool.. but yeah your vocals are too wet.. i think that is one of the main issues people probably have with the mix. I agree with what doom said about alternating tones as well... add some personality into your delivery and it will make certain bars stand out more ... the ones you want to stand out.. all in all not bad .. keep at it!