Audio Mic: INSOMNIA MC Flame

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    Posted: 02 December 2018 at 9:18pm
I really liked your tone and flow throughout the song. You switched up the flow a lot and I really like the flows you chose to go with for the song. 

I don't know if it was my speakers on my Dell laptop but I couldn't understand 90% of what you were saying, through that output.

I just plugged in my Bose headset and it sounds much better through that when I re-listened to it.
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I’m fucking with the beat... your flow was pretty good as well. This may be one of your better pieces of work. You sound like Shock G from Digital Underground. Finally pin pointed the sound of your voice. Though your flow is good, i think it’s good to let the beat breathe every now and then. I think the best way to describe it is, it sounds like to me you’re spitting at the beat instead of riding it cohesively
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I also can't hear what you're saying but idk if it's the mix or not. I mean the mix is definitely bad, your voice is loud asf and yelling over the beat in a bad sounding way, also I can tell where you stopped the recording and started again. I shouldn't be able to hear that. 
but specifically what I'm talking about is I'm hearing a 'static' noise when the beat or your voice get to a part where there is a 'pop' or something. I don't mean the noise when you don't have a pop filter I mean a straight 'static' scratchy type shitty sound.

anyway your flow is good and from what I can hear of the lyrics [now that I listened a few times I did hear alot of it] sound good, your rhyme schemes and flow are nice. work on the mixing bud.
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